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    On The Verge(OOC)

    We all know we have our limits, and we have our breaking points. Snowdria is....past their breaking point....by far. A few years ago, a mafia came and ruined Snowdria. Only few live. The mafia still roam the land, looking for survivors. They're close to insanity, for they are all seperated, and haven't seen another living human being in 10 years. How will break first?

    Bio:

    Name:
    Age:
    Insanity Level(1-10):
    Appearance:
    Personality:
    Background:
    Weapons:
    Mafia or Not:
    Other:


    My Bio:


    Name:Swift

    Age: 19

    Insanity Level: 4

    Appearance: My Avatar(Without the wings)

    Personality: Sweet, understanding, brave, fierce

    Background: TBR

    Weapons: Ebony, sleek blade, with red ribbons on the end.

    Mafia or Not: Not

    Other: British Accent
    Being dyslexic has been hard for me, but now, I am starting to break through its barrier.

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    I'm guessing with the names and the weapons in your bio this is a fantasy world type thingy ? Also, will our characters ever meet up ? I probably missed the Interest Check but I think a better description of the world and style is required to make a Character Bio. Also, I think you mean :"Who will break first ?" The concept is interesting but it needs a described world to live in, for now, it could be modern (you mentionned British accent, mafia and only talked about humans),(you said "mafia" and only spoke about humans so I could assume..) steampunkish,(the weapon description in the bio, the name of the city and character) fantasy, etc.

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    Well you missed the interest check, you did. To answer to your first question, yes it is fantasy, second, you're right about the "Who will break first?" thing, and the rest of your post is kinda confusing....
    Being dyslexic has been hard for me, but now, I am starting to break through its barrier.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peter Pan
    "To die, would be an awfully big adventure."


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    Yeah.. sorry about the confusing part as writing on mobile is hard especially when you're in a rush. Could you give me a link to the Interest Check so I can understand better ?

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    Umm...Yeah I kinda deleted it cause people were being very inappropriate. But I cam explain it to you better here.
    Being dyslexic has been hard for me, but now, I am starting to break through its barrier.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peter Pan
    "To die, would be an awfully big adventure."


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    Ok, tell me :P

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    Where to start......

    Ok so. In the country of Snowdria, a mole(spy) of the magia was hidden within the capital of the country, trying to figure out the plans the country had of ridding them of the burden of the mafia. After finding it out, the mole began journeying towards the outskirts of the country, where the mafia was temporarily settled. After reporting, the mafia created a plan to rid the country of all of the 'despicable and weak' humans. You see, the mafia were immortal, all of them being half supernatrual. Continuing on, the plan they developed was fool proof. They found out a way to get everyone into the capital buildings. They then went all terrorist and believed the killed everybody(or so they thought) Few escaped, and they soon found out. They began destroying Snowdria, until it was a battle worn country, really nothing left but piles of ash. The remaining survivors were seperated. They've lived alone for the past few years, and are going insane. Make sense now?
    Being dyslexic has been hard for me, but now, I am starting to break through its barrier.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peter Pan
    "To die, would be an awfully big adventure."


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