Reply With QuoteI was thinking I should wait until your character figures out who the Key is before they start approaching Kolli to try to convince her. Otherwise, I can add the part where they do that, and then you can come in and make her accept...
Oh wonderful!
I was thinking I should wait until your character figures out who the Key is before they start approaching Kolli to try to convince her. Otherwise, I can add the part where they do that, and then you can come in and make her accept...
Embrace your dreams and, no matter what, protect your honor...
Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return.
That's the idea. He'll figure it out soon enough. We skip another two weeks after the post here and we'll have it.
Skip it two more weeks and he'll be out of the ship and talking to the people.
I guess whatever I do on Kolli's side isn't important for the plot, but... that's okay =D
(I'm going to bed, will post tomorrow)
Embrace your dreams and, no matter what, protect your honor...
Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return.
It's still interesting. It's exposition for the character.
I'll be on my next post sometime tonight.
Or maybe not...
So, Mathras is going to be gathering the people together to announce basically what is happening... after a month of not being seen by any one of them at all. Is that going to work out alright?
Here's what I was thinking:
1. His guys tell people what's happening
2. They try to convince Kolli to help them
3. FAIL
4. Mathras goes to her house, no public announcement or anything (he would be discreet and not many people would notice him)
5. He comes out with the girl and everyone finally sees him.
But it would also be alright if you wanted Mathras to go public from the start. It doesn't matter =)
Embrace your dreams and, no matter what, protect your honor...
Even if the morrow is barren of promises
Nothing shall forestall my return.
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