Gurēsu no Hozon(An Alternate Universe Naruto rp)

**Insidious Apparatus** · 11-22-2012

The ninja world has and still is full of many legends, certain myths speaking of secret clans and their dojutsu and others about powerful weapons and objects that could easily turn the tables in battle. The minds of kunoichi and male shinobi alike drove the searches for such people and the possible secrets that might have been kept by them. A single act of violation to a nameless clan, burst the ninja world into full blown war.

Treason was abundant and as war raged on this war racked the lands with more horror and bloodshed than the ninja world had ever seen. First small towns and villages were consumed for resources or information and then as time passed the carnage continued and even the major villages saw large amounts of destruction due to the fear of what might come in the future. None were safe, and in acts of fear to what might have come, many bloodlines were nearly wiped out. Power was everything and fueled the thoughts of simple minded people and the weak minds of those that followed a destructive path. These drastic and extreme acts forced the world into a state of paranoia and violence where peace was practically non-existent.

The aftermath of the war was as expected. Wide-scale loss had occurred on all sides.

A complete 360 degree change was in order as there was nearly nothing left of the world, so instead of destroy, the people began to rebuild the nations, restoring them to their former glory for the sake of a better future where there could be an actual peace. The simple use of a networking between the nations to move and trade materials and supplies was used in the restoration of the lands.

Iwagakure and Kumogakure became the two leading nations where previously Konohagakure had been more organized and powerful. Even so, this wasn’t any type of an issue as there were many close knit bonds made between the nations and the restoration to peace continued. By year eight of the rebuilding process, things were back to normal and though not perfect most of the nations quarrels were kept low key and if anything those whom hadn’t let the war out of their minds were the cause of any of the nations few larger problems as it should be obvious that a utopia can’t truly exist.

Kumo and Iwa had been further advancing their training of ninja to a step beyond what many of the other nations might have thought. Their warriors being some of the best in ninja world had to offer, whether it be for hire or for the protection of all through the minds of the people and the Tsuchikage and Raikage respectively. The last two years have been exceedingly more accelerated than the previous years in the ninja world’s new age but other problems have arisen.

Another Legend became a complete reality and this was that of the tailed beasts...

The tailed beasts have become active within the last several months and with all that has been rebuilt the influence that these creatures have could prove to be devastating. A group of figures clad in strange masks with varying special talents have been causing trouble, their motives and reasoning not yet understood. This group titles themselves the Kessui Tensai, a name that brings up hush and even fear that had been forgotten in the hearts of people.

It has yet to be ascertained if the Kissui Tensai is behind any of the appears of the beasts, but currently all nine have made an appearance.

Kurama: The Nine Tailed Fox
Gyūki: The Eight Tailed Serpent
Kokuō: The Five Tailed Wolf
Matatabi: The Two Tailed Cat
Saiken: The Six Tailed Weasel
Isobu: The Three Tailed Shark
Chōmei: The Seven Tailed Badger
Shukaku: The One Tailed Racoon
Goku: The Four Tailed Rooster

Only three weeks after this year’s Chuunin Exams were finished in The Village Hidden in the Sand, Suna was halfway flooded by a random attack by Isobu and though damage was at a minimal the situation is certainly a serious one. With Suna having been attacked for no reason, unrest has become apparent. It seems that that the internal affairs of the nations have been disrupted because of both the Kissui Tensai and the chakra beasts appearing.

Investigations have been started with a fervor even greater than when the chakra beasts first started showing themselves as the safety of the people must come first. The upcoming months will prove to be both tedious and possibly extremely dangerous for the jounin and chuunin that are willing to either protect their countries, or help destroy them.

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**yoshua171** · 11-22-2012

Antare, Keisotsu - Asahi no Tenzuru

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Name: Antare, Keisotsu(rash|thoughtless|careless|hasty|imprudent).
Nickname/Alias: The Mad Star(Formerly); Asahi no Tenzuru(Light of the Rising sun).
Age: 33.
Gender: Male.

Appearance:

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Personality:

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Village: Kumogakure.
Chakra Nature: Fire, Earth, and Lightning[Impersonal-Tennou].

Techniques:

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Equipment Data

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Base Weapons & Items:
X shuriken.
X kunai.
X explosive tags.

Specialized Weapons & Items:

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Skills:

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Hisoku no Ichuu(Shifting gears of One's Mind)
Aside from any other special trait, this is by far the most in depth. While it cannot really be seen, it is certainly evident here and there when observing Keisotsu's behavior. This trait is the result of many years of experimentation conducted by the Antare clan and it should be noted that Keisotsu's mind is essentially the crowning achievement. By studying chakra along with genjutsu and how it effects chakra, and thus the mind, the Antare have devised a way to effectively program or reprogram a person's mentality. The seals involved must be heavily imprinted into chakra and once the chakra has taken on the properties of the particular seal it is cycled back into the subject's body. This is done until the programming is complete. Once all programming has been sent into the body, it is activated by the placing of several much more miniscule marks which are located in the center of the forehead as well as other key locations on the head. These are then activated which completes the process, the only flaw in this is that these 'gears' can only seem to unlock under specific circumstances. Keisotsu is the first example of this technique and his 'gears' are as follow.

1st Gear: This gear is activated as a precautionary measure in reaction to Keisotsu's tendency to be a bit too curious. Under circumstances where he begins to put himself in the way of serious harm and a particular amount of adrenaline begins to flow, this gear will activate and put a limiter onto his curiosity. It will counteract this aspect of Keisotsu's personality by implementing caution as well as a bit of a paranoid streak. This has both its upsides and its downsides as it both makes him less likely to get himself hurt because of his curiosity, it also means that in a battle he might be a bit too cautious and seldom make a move. This state can also make him more easily frightened or worried by things.

2nd Gear: Activated if ever Keisotsu enters a state of either negligence for of his own life, or pure uncontrolled rage, this will quickly stymie the flow of anger, or recklessness. On the other hand it does not stop the flow of adrenaline caused by such emotions and while this can be useful, it can also be incredibly detrimental if he doesn't calm down or resume a normal mind set. If he does not calm down his body will continue to produce adrenaline and will thus quickly exhaust itself.

3rd Gear: One of the only gears that is constantly active, this limits Keisotsu's ability to remember. This is only partially bypassed when Keisotsu goes into a state of complete focus wherein he can consistently utilize and remember the majority of his knowledge as well as completely memorizing details and the like. When deactivated it allows Keisotsu's full mental capacity to leak out, though it is never entirely released. While this is almost entirely beneficial, the limiting of his ability to remember is in fact the cause of Keisotsu's apparent forgetfulness and amnesia.

4th Gear: This gear goes into activity to weaken the bloodlust and malice that Keisotsu once possessed. It is actually too effective and so until the 3rd gear goes into activity he has very little, if any, killing intent ever. This also lessens his desire to kill, but not his desire to fight which is something the Antare sadly overlooked.

5th Gear: The strangest and most varied of gears, most don't even know its purpose. This gear holds the entire imprint of Keisotsu's original personality, and memories. This is however not the key to it, rather this allows smaller aspects of Keisotsu's personality to leak and then be amplified through a variety of layers, so to speak. One of these leaked traits is drawn from Keisotsu's childhood and happens to be his curiosity. There are others, but the most notable one is the one that is under the most protection. Keisotsu's hatred is completely locked down, and the only thing that should be able to release it is if all four gears are disrupted. Even then it is theorized that the amount of hatred that leaked would still be small, though even a small amount is a horrible consequence.

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On the other hand, Keisotsu, when focused, possesses a memory that is unparalleled. He is capable of speed, but this can be attributed to jutsu rather than traits. He has very large chakra reserves, but is not incredibly good at controlling them until he goes into his focused state. Keisotsu is especially weak to genjutsu due to the fact that his mind is already being constantly influenced, on the other hand genjutsu that are used on him tend to be warped. This means that their original effects and purpose can be massively or slightly altered depending on how they generally effect the psyche. He is skilled in the use of weaponry, can adapt at high speed to situations, and is skilled in kenjutsu. While he is good at ninjutsu, long range combat is totally lost on him. He is a mid-short range fighter with a preference to stay somewhat close, though not necessarily so close at to be vulnerable in melee at a moment's notice.

**Altered Tundra** · 11-22-2012

First of three characters.

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**Insidious Apparatus** · 11-22-2012

Well then.

Narutards

Name:
Daaku Raito

Age:
32

Gender:
He's a daddy!!!

Appearance:
Daaku could be considered and attractive individual. He's dark skinned and even though he's short and only reaches a height of 5'7. Most people that look at him stare at something on him rather quickly, probably because of the bright purple eyes. He has a head of silky hair that's a purple so pale hair that's it seems grey. He dislikes facial hair and feels that his own spiky hair growing from the scalp is more than enough.

Soaking wet Daaku weighs around 185 pounds, which gives him a thick frame from his short stature. Both his arms and legs have developed and visibly bulging muscles but never to an extreme where others would take it. On Daaku's right shoulder blade there is a tattoo of an eye, and on the other the same tattoo is repeated. There are also tattoos of thin vines that snake around below the V-lines of Daaku's waist and curve backward and up around each of his lower sides and by all means this tattoo makes his muscled booty look even better than it already does. He also has a pierced tongue and both of his nipples pierced, which goes all the way back to his younger years when Sanosuke Uchiha won a bet with him.

Daaku's Ninja Apparel:
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Personality:
If one word could could sum up Daaku Raito, it would probably be sarcastic. Regardless of the situation, it a rare thing if at some point Daaku doesn't have some uncensored comment to make. After war ravaged the world, Daaku had a shift in his perspectives. he felt that many situations in the last ninja war were his fault, and they were.

Daaku never let's up in any of his endeavors and from one day to the next he holds fast to each and every belief he has. Nobility and the righteous actions of prosecution of the wicked seem like good ideals but why bother?? More than anything Daaku is a man committed to not only whatever needs to be done but the means to accomplish those tasks. He's intense and brash, a man who loves hard and hates even harder.

Village:
Iwagakure

Chakra Nature
Dark, Earth, Water

Kekkei Genkai:
Burakkuai(Black Eye)- SEALED.

Tarnaic Infusion- Though Daaku may be a Raito that is only his family clan. Long before the ninja wars had broken out there was a clan that became influenced by an entity named Reimulto. His influence over reality bent the laws for many of the ninja that were among the Tarnaic Clan. This was passed down as another bloodline would through DNA.

Sōsu o shōkan (Summon Source)- Daaku's consciousness is connected with the ethereal plane of the were summons exist. Rather than house emptiness, there is an abundance of physical energy which Daaku can drawn on. He has used this force to become a fierce proctor of advanced chakra natures and nature transformation of ninjutsu. Over the years he has grown to combine many elements into fusion releases of physically fueled force. This link to the summon plane also gives Daaku a malleable free form to summon Irritum the Atomic Dragon and Oriens the Black Death Dragon with out the use of a contract. It should be noted that he can also summon other creatures but has no bonded with them as he has already done with the two dragons. This force also acts as a transferable chakatic fuel for Daaku, making his reserves beyond that of any being that has existed.

Kekkei Genkai Jutsu
Kokushibyōton(Black Death Release)- The essence of the black death is an advanced chakra nature that has melded darkness, water, wind and earth into a corrupting substance that Daaku wields. This chakra form be generated into any shape that Daaku desires and expand and react as a malleable destructive force that is able to break down, corrupt and eradicate material all simultaneously. This dark force is able to forms a grain like state that is similar to the idea of moisture and further gives Daaku the power to use darkness to slow and even halt the flow of chakra, causing cold and dark razed areas with said chakra. [No-rank, Chakra Nature/Kekkei Genkai]

Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Oriens(Summoning Technique: Oriens)- Via use of his summon source, Daaku summons forth Oriens which is the embodiment of the nature of Black Death chakra, one of the strongest formats of chakratic essence that Daaku manipulates. The bond between these two is very complicated, so much in fact that Oriens actually knows the Senhappa and can use it himself in many ways, adhering its own nature of chakra to it better than Daaku. This dragon has a high capacity for chakra and when Oriens attacks, his hits can actually shift the nature of incoming jutsu to his own, thus giving him control over the forces used to form the jutsu. Though Oriens can be summoned in a massive state, the makeup of the dragon allows it to shift its form for more localized battles with smaller areas. As a summon, Oriens has the same abilities as Kokushibyōton. (No-rank, Kekkei Genkai)

Atomikkuton(Atomic Release)- Earth, Light, Lightning and Fire chakra have been formed into a flowing substance that simultaenously employs a earth base that is reflective in nature and infused with the fluctuating and current charging forces of lightning chakra. The heat that this chakra lets off is used in combination with light to make a chakratic format that is able to violently detonate with chakra. When enough force is used in such a technique using this nature is is completely possible to cause enemy mutation from the effects of their atoms being moved around when damaged. This type of damage can result in awkward healing afterward. [No-rank, Chakra Nature/Kekkei Genkai]

Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Irritum(summoning Technique: Irritum) Daaku uses his bloodline to manifest Irritum to the physical plane. He is the embodiment of atomic chakra and as the alternate summon that Daaku prefers to use in battle and for other situations, he has learned the use of the Rasenkoa, being able to form and shape it rapidly and in grandiose sizes that outclass the functions of those Daaku normally manifests by himself. when summoned Irritum dispels genjutsu while he is around Daaku as his own spiritual makeup harbors enough force to see through even top ranking genjutsu when they are cast. Alternately when genjutsu are performed, Irritum can also counter them and make the effects more extreme on opponents who use them. (No-rank, Kekkei Genkai)

Ryuseiton(Meteor Release)- This is a grandiose nature of chakra that is the amalgam of fire, darkness and earth chakra transformation into a burning substance that makes the earth tremble with its dense force. This molten earthy material that has the hardness of titanium also has an intense property that can cause it to rapidly accelerate and randomly begin incinerating materials via the chakra that it emits.

Ēteruraiton(Aether Lightning Release)- The fused forces of light, darkness and lightning form a plasma chakra that radiates an extra source of heat and travels many times faster than lightning chakra by itself. This chakra allows Daaku to form and shape jutsu that when released, track their targets and shadow them, using the dark nature within the chakra to extend unto the opponent's forms to make the avoidance of such jutsu next to impossible.

Jutsu
Senhappa(Beam Blast)- Daaku's famed technique that would be classified under the Yang release through its physical nature and might. Daaku channels between his cupped palms a strong physical nature chakra that consists of raw chakra in a concentrated format of diffused and expanding particles. When fired at an object or enemies, though the jutsu may look solid it is not and opponents can be torn apart by the makeup of this technique. Daaku has mastered this technique and readily uses his nature transformation with it do often end battles. He has even been seen using it to destroy villages. (No-rank, Yang/Pure)

Rasenkoa(Helix Core)- This is an A-rank jutsu that Daaku developed alongside the Rasengan with Minato Namikaze via the explicit manipulation of shape transformation of chakra. By using one's chakra control to form a a core of chakra, layers of chakra are molded around this core as it begins to spin rapidly and cause chakra to suck in around it, giving it tearing force. Once stabilized this technique harbors great force and sustains itself. When used it can be held and thrust into enemies to rip them apart with its vibrating and the sucking force of the core that unleashes its power outside on the shell of the sphere. When complete and dissipating, the target is expelled away by the core breaking and can often leave craters. (A-rank, Pure)

Shouryuuken(Rising Dragon Fist)- This is a strike in accordance with Himitsu Tenga-ryu where Daaku gather force in his legs and rockets upward while rapidly spinning his body around at a high speed. even though he is spinning his uppercut connects as if he jumped straight up and struck the opponent normally. The shadow aura of a dragon cna be witnessed when Daaku uses this attack. One would assume that the punch would knock a foe into the air but in fact they normally collapse to the ground. The force of this punch is very effective and the release of spirit force supports both leg and arm muscles at once. (B-rank, Taijutsu/Himitsu Tenga-ryu)

Roketto chūgaeri(Rocket Somersault)- This combination makes use of a swift tripping kick that Daaku times to propel himself off a foes body using another kick. His leg thrusts down at a diagonal four times, each kick gaining more force as spirit energy shapes Daaku's form. The final kick ends with Daaku flipping down to use a frontal somersault kick to the head or torso area. Upon impact with the ground or other surface area, it normally breaks from the exertion of Daaku's kick. (C-rank, Taijutsu/Himitsu Tenga-ryu)

Dākukorona Rasenkoa(Dark Corona Helix Core)- This technique incorporates the Rasenkoa and transforms its nature by making the core with a stabilized ball of Meteor Release chakra and then continues to build the jutsu as normal. As the layers of chakra form over the core, it heats up and a black shell of energy melds over the completed mass. When used to strike, opponents are burned quickly as their body is pulled against Daaku's jutsu and they normally catch fire instantly as the jutsu throws them back, the core expanding a blast of molten material. (No-Rank, Ryuseiton)

Ryuseiton: Kurasshu kanketsusen(Meteor Release: Crash Geyser)- Daaku forms medium sized clumps of black molten rock that he throws toward a foe, splattering the chakra as they move and lightning aflame objects they hit in the meantime. Upon impact with the foe or the surrounding area, these stones break open and a geyser of flaming dark molten rock erupts from each one separately. (B-rank, Ryuseiton)

Shouryuu Reppa(Rising Dragon Destroyer)- A variant of the Shouryuuken that with the force of Ryuseiton combines spirit energy into a detonating cover on the fist. When a single punch is thrown, The chakra around Daaku's hand extends and punches the foe with a fist of radiating chakra that can melt their skin. Each successive punch causes even greater damage until a final corkscrew punch launches a dragon of atomic chakra into the opposing ninja that throws them into the air and slams into their abdomen for a returning strike to the ground. Often foes can be severely injured at the end of the attack. (No-rank, Taijutsu/Atomikkuton/Himitsu-Tenga-ryu)

Ni~Tsu ga sasu koto no jutsu(Sunburst Technique)- A mist of chakra begins to spiral around Daaku as he manifests the chakra of the Atomic Release, moving it out in front of his body as the mist begins to pulse. As the mist is drawn into Daaku's fingertip he beings firing grape sized balls of chakra that randomly surround a foe or enemy group from many directions. On Daaku's command, the chakra balls converge a targets in an explosion. Its also possible for ninja to be struck and damaged with the compact balls of chakra before they detonate. (B-rank, Atomikkuton)

Shōgeki-tekina Shisenhappa(Shocking Death Beam Blast)- Rather than pull in chakra between his palms, Daaku streams chakra down his arms that forms into a concave buffer that Aether Lightning chakra feeds into, sparking and causes electricity to jump around Daaku's body. This mass of chakra is quite large and releases a straight shot of Aether Lightning at the opponent. This is backed by the launch of a super charged Senhappa that forms to the lightning which can consume the target in a flowing beam of piercing electricity and ki. Its not unusual for ninja that face this ki to suffer shock trauma afterward. (No-rank, Ēteruraiton)

Forbidden Jutsu
Saikō no doragonhappa(Supreme Dragon Blast)- Daaku charges a mass of chakra in both palms and his open mouth and then leaps high into the air, accelerating himself further via use of his Sokuji Sōshin. Upon reaching a maximum height of 20,000 feet, Daaku gathers extra ambient chakra from above sky itself, each chakra mass is imbued with one of an extreme nature. As each one falls from the sky toward foes and get ever closer, Daaku once again uses Sokuji Sōshin to warp them down to a closer range, devastating everything in the way with a monstrous mushroom cloud explosion of meteor, atomic and aether lightning chakra. As the chaos from the blast dies away another blast of chakra shaped as a dragon head goes off, to level whatever was left. (S-rank, Atomikkuton/Ēteruraiton/Ryuseiton/Pure)

Ēteruraiton no Yoroi(Aether Lightning Release Armor)- This technique begins by Daaku using a series of over 50 hand seals that cause a miniature lightning storm of chakratic force to blast around his entire body. As the lightning dies down Daaku becomes encased in a field of aether lightning that streams into his body, tethering to his nervous system. The connection is immediate and this increase of flow to and from his synapses maximizes the physical force, reaction time and control of everything nerve ending that Daaku has from within. This pushes him to the ultimate state of his own physical being, increasing his raw power and and speed far beyond his normal capabilities, so much in fact that he no longer breathes and oxygen is simply streamed through his pores and directly into the bloodstream to make conduct inside this state even simpler and more dangerous for those around Daaku. Dojutsu lose the ability to track his movements altogether, the lack of his body being in one place at a time causing a massive disturbance in eyes trying to follow his dual-physical form.

His chakra reaches a format where the embodiment of it is released through any means he desires and any ninjutsu Daaku uses can be released inside of a physical strike, allowing him to pummel opponents with massive physical strikes and at the same time string ninjutsu together with ease and room for switching tactics instantly. The use of techniques like a simple body flicker and move Daaku vast distances and by choosing which direction his outreaching chakra field moves in, simply running past foes can cause terrible damage to the surrounding area and their own bodies. He can cause this aura of lightning to form into shapes that move off from his frame and shock ninja involved in battle with pain that is activated straight by the trauma to their nerves. Daaku's own body is also affected by this lightning armor and because of that his facial hair grows longer, normally forming into a goatee, while the hair atop his head gets extremely long and often reaches past the lower back. The hair has the aura flowing directly through it and as such is spikely and very rigid, even turning a golden shade...(S-rank, Ēteruraiton/Supplementary)

Rasenkoa Senhappa(Helix Core Beam Blast)- Daaku manifests chakra into his palm that expands into a Rasenkoa very rapidly, shaking and vibrating with extra force as it starts to shrink and then expand again and again. This is due to the chakra inside the technique tearing apart at itself and the abundance of chakra that makes it whole. When Daaku rushes an opponent with this jutsu, it gains a web of force around the sphere that acts as a destructive nucleus; harboring chakra that tears up a foe on an accelerated level. This is made apparent by the ground around the foe being torn up and even grass and other objects being sucked in toward Daaku and the Rasenkoa as he uses it. Often many foes become trapped inside this web of terror and all at once, the jutsu collapses and detonates in a grandiose explosion. This blast starts a Senhappa that can easily be 10-15 feet wide, harboring the same properties as the tearing Helix Core. Everything in its path is torn up by the constant battering of the two combined jutsu. The devastation of this technique easily makes it Daaku strongest known attack, outclassing all the power of his other techniques even when they are mixed with one of his own chakratic mixtures. (X-rank, Yang)

Himitsu Tenga-ryu(Secret Tenga-ryu):
This is Daaku Raito's further developed style of the Tenga-ryu that he employs when in battle. His physical nature pours forth with an aura of spiritual chakratic compound that seeps on and all around Daaku's form. This spiritual force is a tether to the mind that allows the draw of further force in battle. Each movement is specialized, and without need for excessively long chain combinations, the quick damage such a style can unleash in Daaku's hands can become quickly excessive.

Physical Aperture- Within Daaku’s body there is a well of forces that he can continue to draw upon via the training of the Tenga-ryu. By using himself as a port for the release of these physical energies, Daaku’s own physical nature is increased dramatically. Not only is his physical strength just incredible, the body is more formable and easier to control. Its not at all unusual for him to move in awkward or disgusting ways, Daaku also seems to release chakra in ways that allow him to defy gravity with his own physical forme.

Hand/Arm Attacks- This is the use of mmediate movement that can as such be started or shifted from any other given movement to be mixed with chakra base and spirit force as a fist is thrown or a hand is moved to attack. Punches from this method are very blunt and the impact of a fist, or hand can cause abnormal amounts of pain to an opponent from chakra being used to disrupt muscle tissue and also cause blood vessels to rupture from near sonic vibrations. Gathering more chakra during an assault process can be even more devastating as it can thus be used to propel bursts of pressure into enemies that cause imbalance and room for follow up attacks after that, even after a single staggering blow.

Leg/Feet Attacks- In the Himitsu Tenga-ryu, kicks are more than a force to be reckoned with because even from a distance it is still possible to bet hit with one of them. The extension of the legs and feet enable one to lash out at opponents with series of kicks that shatter defenses. From a spinning motion one can kick outwards and use spirit chakra force to stabilize them self but offset an enemy, which leads to latch in attacks and aerial assaults. Daaku uses his skill in with his legs to catch foes in frightening displays of acrobatic ability using the legs and feet.

Defensive Psychosis- Via spiritual tampering that coat the already toughened skin with an extra layer of chakratic substance, Daaku is able to receive damage at a rate others would find unnatural. His skin is more difficult to penetrate of damage and because of this he is often hit and doesn’t react Such a response to enemy ninja can cause them to lose focus or disturbed. (S-rank, Tenga-ryu)

Weapons
Kegareta Tamashī(Tarnished Soul)- This weapon is the embodiment of the corrupted forces that continued to adhere on Daaku's sword during the Great Ninja War. It is amazingly sharp but doesn't have any special functions other than being able to release quite a bit of spiritual force as with the Tenga-ryu. It's rare for Daaku to summon this weapon but if he does, its all over for anybody in his way...

Purazuma Shuriken(Plasma Shuriken)- Shuriken that have a drive within them that harbor aether lightning chakra. they move through the air faster than regular shuriken and also emit a great shock when hitting other objects such as flesh or a tree.

Haretsu kunai(Exploding Kunai)- Kunai that are several inches longer and thicker than regular kunai. They explode upon impact, the likeliness of being injured by the splintering pieces of metal is very high.

Great Exploding Tags- An upgraded version of exploding tags that explode with a larger area space. They also need an incantation to be activated.

Skills
Shokubai shīrumāku(Catalyst Seal Mark)- For many years after the war, Daaku continued to study the arts of body transformation and also the art of using kinjutsu to force the body to go through cellular mutations that mutate the body by triggering offsets of both chakra and spiritual energy. This kind of force allows it users to become different beings altogether. In Daaku's case the genetic mutation brought about the creation of a more applied form where he used Irritum and Oriens in their base forms to apply a seal on the base of his neck. Without being active, this has given Daaku some vampire-like tendencies; his canine teeth made longer and sharper, also having spaces within them to drain and absorb blood from other beings. He literally gains new levels of power from doing this horrific action.

Stage One- Upon activation of the seal, the mark on the side of Daaku's neck unfurls and fans across his upper body, spreading in a webbed pattern. Daaku's speed increases a bit, but the real force comes from Daaku being able to forcefully ebb spiritual force around his body and now assume a form where when he moves, spiritual emissions from his body target and attack foes with them, breaking their ability to surmise and formulate chakra. There is an increase in physical power, however his strikes now spread tearing into the flesh during strikes. Basically it is the spread of chakra to cause rippling physical damage. Draining blood from foes rapidly restores Daaku's health and triggers resilience to fire, and wind chakra types.

Stage Two- When increasing the flow of both dragon's DNA into his own, Daaku further mutates into a state that takes on a much more lithe appearance where as Daaku normally is quite thick and muscled. His entire body becomes more draconian. Its gains a hardened form that becomes immune to fire and lightning chakra and even more resilient to wind chakra than before. The cellular structure of Daaku adorns him a tail in this form, which he can use as an added weapon for attack and defense as its rock hard bone structure takes little damage. His teeth also get longer and can drain blood faster than before. Using his eyes as a focal point, Daaku can easily disorient enemies by misguiding their spiritual paths and render their jutsu much weaker by breaking the ties inside the chakra. Though slimmer Daaku is also a lot stronger in this form and can lift hundreds of pounds with ease. He retains the changes in power and manipulation from stage one.

Chakratic Subjugation- Daaku's own body and chakra paths are unlike that of any other person, they stem from the nature of the tarnaic and rather than be subjected to the normal means of transfer and draw, his chakra is streamed in through his body through the force of the realm overlaying the physical world. Attempts to damage his tenketsu and so on don't work as he is able to use and manipulate his own chakra without the need of such simple methods. More so he has attained the ability of mold his chakra around other chakra types and cause a piercing nature of force to disrupt their chakra, even when fully sustained during use.

Āsu· Masutarī(Earth Mastery)- Being from the Rock Village, Daaku Raito is a ninja of great strength out of those foreknown from the use of earth based jutsu. Suprisingly he has none earth jutsu in his arsenal but that us because Daaku can manipulate the earth using his chakra alone and much like Sanosuke, can use it to a great extent and fathom many objects and use the earth on whim solely by using his chkara to bond with the earth itself. When he does this however and odd chakra substance adds a golden hue to the earth and as such people are able to know when Daaku is affecting it.

Sokuji Sōshin(Immediate Transmission)- A technique savvy to the enactment of movement through the rending of chakra in a given direction, using the tarnaic in place of space and time which allows the user to be embodied in one place after the next. Like movement with no speed involved a simpler force can be exerted to move to extreme speeds in linear time, albeit chakra consumption can be great.

History: As a child, Daaku had been born into the Raito Clan, birthed with the special talents of the secret clan that his own family was also a part of; this being the Tarnaic. He was raised as any other child in Iwa and he grew up as a teenager, knowing too well that he was to use his talents to bring as much prosperity to his land as possible. Being a Raito and a Tarnaic was no easy task, especially when the talents of Daaku via his Burakkuai had him on a constant missionary outlet to both track ninja and also find out the secrets of other villages even from a young age.

On these missions he was of course sent to Konoha many times and while there he was teamed up with another his age named Minato Namikaze, the two became friends, both keeping track of the other's work and maintaining there status as jounin to the fullest extent and making sure that nobody was able to fell them and that as representations of their respective nations that both upheld their beliefs. Around this time the tow were sent on a mission to the Village Hidden in the Gardens they came across a man also close to their age; a certain Sanosuke Uchiha. This man was sarcastic and butted heads with Daaku right away but as usual Minato made sure that Daaku kept his cool and as more time passed the three became a trio of sorts that was nearly inseparable.

Several years passed and as the nations began to have turmoil with one another for this reason and that, war ended up breaking out and the Great Ninja War began. For awhile Daaku tried to stay out of it as much as possible but it was nearly impossible to do so when war was consuming the lands, so rather than do nothing, he convinced Minato and Sano to do work as mercenaries with him and as such the trio began storming the battlefield and simply massacred any who stood in their way for sake of a better future. Even though they all originally saw eye to eye, Minato left the trio to go back to Konoha, fearing that Sano and Daaku were going to far and instead sought to make peace and quell the fighting.

As the war got more extreme Daaku and Sano faced the ranks of Konoha and a massive battle ensued. During this battle Normatsu Izukaishi and his wife showed up, the battle was horrific and many died, the jest of Sano's rage left him unchecked and going against what Daaku believed to be his nindo, Sanosuke ended up killing Normatsu's mate. It was then that Daaku realized that the war was continuing to take lives that were needed for the future that he, Sano and Minato had wanted all along. He refused to fight after that moment along with the activation of his Burakkuai into a new more terrifying state. This ended up being a deciding battle and the war ended soon after that.

The process to rebuild had begun and in the years that followed many things transpired from Daaku and Minato seeking to finish techniques that were quite similar to he and Sano perfecting the use of a special release that Daaku developed. In this period of time not only did Daaku end up having a drunken one night stand with the woman Minato loved. For several years Daaku was the Tsuchikage but he knew that such a job was not for him. He loved the people of Iwagakure but would much rather travel and teach, constantly developing his own style of the Tenga-Ryu Art.

Such terror had been released from Daaku using his Burakkuai that he sought to seal away the power that continued to progress and evolve into something that had even perplexed Sanosuke, he had wondered why Daaku would ever want to do such a thing, all he was told was, "Do this for me friend else my eyes be the downfall of this world we helped restore..."

Ultimately Daaku wanted to do other things that remain in a stationary role like that of the Tsuchikage, so instead Daaku continued to master and use his influence to prosper and enjoy the world. With the exams over and a slew of new issues arising, Daaku has no problem stepping up to help out...

Miscellaneous:
Tenga-ryu
The Tenga-ryu is the fighting style that Daaku started to develop at the early stages of the end of the Great Ninja War 12 years ago. Its a style that incorporates a high level of both chakratic manipulation and concentration to accomplish, due to the expert forms of chakra fusion and the merge of spirit force to and from attacks. By relinquishing the body's natural lock on alternative forces as a ninja based on chakra, Daaku and his students use a source of power that comes directly from their inner beings, both their will and chakra at once that is infused with a spiritual base.

By empowering themselves with this force, the rates of their physical damage increases dramatically, augmenting each blow with a release of spiritual force that continues to grow as one trains in the Tenga-ryu art. Monstrous power can be gained with the use of this knowledge but there are also things that aren't supposed to be done as well.

**Hillan** · 11-22-2012

Soru Deshuga

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**Altered Tundra** · 11-22-2012

I can definitely speak for Axis. Convert your character into the CS outline given.

**Hillan** · 11-22-2012

But.

Why?

There's no reason to, sheet I used is easier to read, gives all the necesary information, and is a lot friendlier on the eyes.

Sorry, but your template is bad, and I'm not using it, neither should anyone else do so.

There's already a better template sheet on the site, the one I use, why not just alter it, instead of making something from scratch that provides less information?

**Altered Tundra** · 11-22-2012

Lol, it's not like you're asked to make a brand new character from scratch. All you have to do is convert it to the outline given. Not that hard lol.

**Hillan** · 11-22-2012

It takes time, time that I don't really feel like wasting on converting the CS to a sheet that's less functional.

I'm sorry, but the Template-sheet is stupid, it's messy, ugly and overall unpleasant to look at, on top of that, the spoilers are all sitting fucked up, making it harder to read any information at all.

Oh, and did I mention that the whole jutsu-section is ineffective?

**Altered Tundra** · 11-22-2012

You really are a stubborn one, aren't you? That's fine. I can deal with that.

You can say all the shit you want, but I can GUARANTEE that your character won't even be given the time of day due to the fact that you ignored the outline given in the OP to in the first place. Sure, the sheet your character is given in is probably an eye-pleaser to some, but that's not even the issue. So, stop trying to use that as the basis of your counter-argument. Trust me, it's not going to last long.

There isn't even any valid reason to continue whatever you want to call this. There are probably some rps in the past that you've joined that asked for a different CS outline, so don't give me this bullshit that the one given in the OP is horrible or whatever bogus reason you can come up with.

As for the jutsu section, no one is stopping you from using the regular set up, but the rest of the CS outline isn't going to be what you're used to.

I'll just let Axis give you the riot act. I'm sure he'll give it to you strait. ^^;

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