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    I'm on it right now. I'll try not to take too much longer starting things up.

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    I'll be posting once I get Cerden done, which should be tonight if I am lucky. ^_^
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    Second part of my Soru and Liaru post should be up like, in the hour, I think.

    Had to post what I had, as I needed to get to school




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    The post was plenty good. Loving Soru already. ;D
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    Talking about hookers already, and he's just 19 years old.

    They grow up so fast * whips tear out of his eye*




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    Aww man, just wait until you see Jaakuna. I mean, I didn't use him for a Naruto RP, but I did make him for a bleach rp on another site, and he was the real deal. Fighting the girl that eventually became his sweetheart. <3 Granted, Jaaku was about 7 years her senior, but still~

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    I'll accept Cerden but a few things confuse me a bit and I'd like them changed. Like how he is ripping up the mantle and the world doesn't start collapsing bro. Sure magma and all that are great but you do it with the elements of chakra for the most part. If Cerden is tearing up the ground two or three miles down that is going to be a problem.

    Also if it's not kekkei genkai related, make sure to rank and class ALL jutsu.

    Kyodaisheiku(Gigantic Shake)- What?? An 8.0 earthquake?? Do you know the extent and seriousness of such a natural disaster?? Enormously powerful just are certainly allowed but be realistic in the sense of what has happened in the series. Anything anywhere near this powerful would be an S-rank. I'm not even saying take it out but damn. Move it to your kinjutsu or lessen the scale.

    Dappi chikyū no bōgu(Molted Earth Armor)- Sweet idea but maybe you wanna add something about the protective nature of the armor or whatever?? Like unless its only used to fuel the other jutsu after it.

    Dappi Chikyu no Bogu: Hara Keishitsu no Sakugen(Molted Earth Armor: Protoplasm Reduction)- How is your chakra controlling the cells in other people's bodies to begin with.

    Edit your bio, I don't care anything about being son of a Tsuchikage or whatever but the Sanin aren't some flourishing group. They were a group of ninja famous for specific reasons in the naruverse. At this time that group doesn't yet exist.(They will and one of your characters will be one of them.)

    Other than that you're template is AMAZING as expected.

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    I'll accept Cerden but a few things confuse me a bit and I'd like them changed. Like how he is ripping up the mantle and the world doesn't start collapsing bro. Sure magma and all that are great but you do it with the elements of chakra for the most part. If Cerden is tearing up the ground two or three miles down that is going to be a problem.
    Via his chakra manipulation, more so his Molted Earth Chakra, he is able to do as such. Sure he is doing it by the means of chakra manipulation, but isn't Chakra the energy source of things? xD But yeah, he's doing it like that.

    Also if it's not kekkei genkai related, make sure to rank and class ALL jutsu.
    Done and done.

    Kyodaisheiku(Gigantic Shake)- What?? An 8.0 earthquake?? Do you know the extent and seriousness of such a natural disaster?? Enormously powerful just are certainly allowed but be realistic in the sense of what has happened in the series. Anything anywhere near this powerful would be an S-rank. I'm not even saying take it out but damn. Move it to your kinjutsu or lessen the scale.
    Moved it to Forbidden Jutsu section.

    Dappi chikyū no bōgu(Molted Earth Armor)- Sweet idea but maybe you wanna add something about the protective nature of the armor or whatever?? Like unless its only used to fuel the other jutsu after it.
    Added a little paragraph about its protective properties.

    Dappi Chikyu no Bogu: Hara Keishitsu no Sakugen(Molted Earth Armor: Protoplasm Reduction)- How is your chakra controlling the cells in other people's bodies to begin with.
    Somehow, I predicted this jutsu would have to be further explained. Well, pretty much Cerden manipulates their chakra as well, which if I am correct to assume, chakra is within cells. Solely going off of that idea, Cerden does it in such a way that he utilizes most of his abilities(IE Mastery of Chakra Manipulation) to which he manipulates it in the manner said in the jutsu description.

    Edit your bio, I don't care anything about being son of a Tsuchikage or whatever but the Sanin aren't some flourishing group. They were a group of ninja famous for specific reasons in the naruverse. At this time that group doesn't yet exist.(They will and one of your characters will be one of them.)
    I don't see what you mean about me mentioning Cerden being a Sannin. :O I just re-read my bio, and the only possible mention of a sannin group would be his short time with the Akatsuki, but even then, I don't see it. D:
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    Haro can consider his shit wrecked.




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