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    The Orphans IC



    A loud buzz filled the atmosphere of the busy streets where people were rushing to open shop or go to work. It was the dawn of a new day in Caldor and the air was thick with smoke and the stench of sweating bodies in the summer heat. Although the city appeared to be thriving in relative peace, the reality was not as such. Caldor was one in a web of cities connecting to the majestic city of Ironhall. Only the privileged and powerful lived in Ironhall, remaining in their secluded, closed off world. You rarely saw the gates of Ironhall open, and when they did it meant one of two things. One, someone had earned their right and had been formally invited to live in the city, or two, a rebellion had taken place, soon to be silenced by the sight of the cities great and powerful army.

    There was no contact between Ironhall and the rest of the cities, however there was trade. Caldor was a production city, their economy depending on the demand of machines and stem-powered vehicles. They traded with the other cities for food, water and resources, or they traded internally for more.. sinister things. Caldor was known for its black market of weapons. Weapon production outside the army was illegal, this included guns, explosives, poisons and chemicals.

    Caldor unfortunately is the lowest of the low, looked down upon by the other societies even though none of them could compare to that of their superior. It was the city of corruption, theft and known for its violence and slavery-or as they put it-'voluntary hard labour'. Those who lived in the city were faced with once choice; adapt, or die trying. Once you hit rock bottom, the only way to go is up. Which is why hatred and deception is the norm of the society, if you didn't step on others, you were going nowhere. Kindness wouldn't save you in Caldor. Compassion didn't pay the taxes. Caring wouldn't save you from a bullet. People go missing every day in Caldor, its no wonder they stopped keeping track. And with no supervision, it was easy for someone to be taken in the dead of night with no suspicion, no questions asked, no one even noticed. Except for the ones who were left behind.. This is where your story begins.





    Welcome to the roleplay The Orphans. This roleplay is set its own time with a neo-vectorian/steampunk theme. The story begins with you as an orphan. You can be as young or as old as you want but your parent(s) have either vanished or you have witnessed them being taken, however you hid so you wouldn't be seen (and killed). You can have as many posts as you like to introduce your character or meet and greet others but at some point each character must end up in the 'shelter'. An unofficial abandoned building where a few orphans will gather either by chance or by word of ear. You will each contribute as much as you want to the group about your parents but you will all come to the conclusion that this was no accident or one-off crime either because your parents wouldn't be involved in anything illegal, no one was seeking revenge, they were extremely gifted at something that would be desirable, anything you would like. The real reason why your parents were taken will be revealed as the story progresses however if it helps to create a background, the parents have been taken as slaves or workers to Ironhall for their unknown world domination plan.

    The story will progress with you all deciding to go on an adventure to find out where your parents are, why they were taken and who was responsible. More twists will be revealed but I will tell you prior to every bump in the road so we let everyone develop their story as much as they want, this will be following a storyline however it will be flexible. A change in scene, location, time of day and I guess 'chapter' in the storyline will be clearly shown in the IC thread by a single post with very big text. You wont miss it I promise you.




    So before we begin! Heres a link to the OOC thread:
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    CHAPTER 1

    LOCATION - THE CITY OF CALDOR



    EARLY MORNING

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    Sawyer Graves: Tools

    Sawyer Graves sat with his back against the wooden chair. A familiar chair. He still had memories of climbing on it, though the wood hadn't creaked as much when sat upon back then. There he sat impatiently, tapping his fingers on the table in front of him. The house was filled with clutter and smelled of mothballs accompanied by the faint scent of tobacco smoke. Was that faint scent still there, or was he imagining it? He remembered Mr. Cadbury was once inseparable from his curved mahogany pipe, but the last few times he had visited this place the man proudly claimed that he had broken the habit.

    A lone beam of sunlight shone through the window and spilled out into the humble and cozy room. Outside, the sun rays pierced through the dense form of clouds, like individual golden spears striking into the ground from the heavens above. He had been out back for...he didn't know how long. Out in the junkyard for which the Cadburys were caretakers. He had found a few usable pieces of metal and salvaged them. Junkyard metal wasn't always junk. A good many decent things were thrown out as if they really were trash. Honestly, most people had such untrained eyes and poor taste for the appreciation of a solid chunk of iron. But the metal had to be smooth to be usable. No cracks or shoddy looking dents. Once a thing of metal was shattered, it was near impossible to reforge. However, finding metal was cheaper than buying the ore itself, if one knew what to look for. And that, Sawyer most certainly did.

    He paused his finger tapping suddenly and whipped his head upward in a jerking motion to look up at an elderly woman, dressed in a rather plain brown pettycoat and trousers. His chestnut brown hair curled over the strap of his welding goggles, placed disheveled in a position above his forehead, and fell in front of his muddy green eyes. The damn strands of hair really were getting out of hand. Lengthwise to be sure. He liked his hair in general. It curled and kept well out of his face, until it grew too bloody long.
    "Well!?" he piped up suddenly.

    "Take your coin? Phaw! We should have you put to work at a proper job, boy!" she answered with a wave of her hand and turned her attention back toward the tea kettle that began to whistle softly atop the potbelly castiron stove. He had offered to give her three silver Simmons for a particular piece of coiled metal he had found. It was a more rare metal. Jyranium. One he'd had too little funds and too little time to experiment with. Since he'd found it amongst their scrap and knew it to be worth at least that much, he felt obligated to offer them some sort of payment. To do otherwise would be right on par with thievery, and he wasn't too keen on stealing from the oldest of his family's friends.
    Sawyer continued to stare absently at the apple he had been offered while he waited on the tea, now bitten down to its' core. A core...yes
    "A good smooth metal with a core of that Jyranium alloy would make for an excellent bullet..." He said the words in a half whisper. Barely aware that he'd spoken his thoughts out loud. He did that often. "Not so heavy as to throw off the trajectory...light enough to provide extra heat in the span of time to shoot. Bathe my ass in hellfire if the thing wouldn't blast through a plate of iron though..."

    The old woman threw her hands up in a quiet dismay. She must have thought of giving up on having a normal conversation with him. Probably every time he visited. Yet she never did. Strange. But perhaps that's why he felt a vague fondness for Mrs. Cadbury. "You know," she began in a grandmotherly sort of tone "The army pays well for a good Gunsmith."

    Sawyer snapped back into the conversation, his eyes still remaining fixated on the apple core. He shook his head.
    "I can't." he said matter of factly. "Not until I find the Reapers."

    Mrs. Cadbury's face wilted, her brows furrowing and her lips downcast. She looked at him pleadingly. She still thought him insane whenever he brought up the Reapers, that was his name for the strangers that had taken his family, or at least had the bodies. But as long as she pressed the issue of forgetting his family and moving on, he would make sure to remind her of them. They were a relatively common thought in his mind when he worked at forging guns. Those gasmasks, bug eyed lenses looking like the lifeless eyes of monsters. The memories had once haunted him, now they were a reminder. He had turned his fears into a driving force for everything he did and would do in the near future. Sawyer never expected the woman to understand, but maybe one day she would accept it.

    Mrs. Cadbury slumped into the old dusty green velvetine chair across the room from the dining table.
    "Why not?" she finally asked with a sly smile rising from the corner of her lips. "Why can't you take a job and look for those 'Reapers' with your new station and title to help you?"

    Sawyer looked up from the apple core, but still kept his eyes staring ahead, still looking distant. As if he was in some far off place even though his body stood still under the same roof as her. "Well," he started cooly, then looked down at his Tinker gloves. "It's the tools." He said the words with conviction. As if the simple answer should suffice.

    "Tools?" the elderly woman said raising an eyebrow while picking up her plate with a small cup of tea in her dainty fashion.

    "Indeed!" Sawyer answered immediately. "It's all about the tools." His eyes widened and he shot up from his chair without warning, beginning to pace around the table in a circle while looking about the room. "I remember an engineer from the army coming to ask my father some questions once. Well dressed man, too well dressed if you ask me, but that's beside the point. Why did you want to know about that?" he stopped his pacing and looked toward Mrs. Cadbury for a split second before continuing to stride along the corners of the table again. "No matter. Anyhow, I remember the engineer looking over my fathers' toolset. Said he had a welder just like him. Said he had forty sets of tools! Could you imagine!? FORTY bleeding sets!" Sawyer raised an open palm upwards and smacked himself on the head in disbelief.
    "He had three sets for teaching the younger engineers, seven sets given to him by different blacksmiths for testing before they put them up for sale...also said about a dozen other sets were just for bloody show. TOOLS! Made especially for the eyes of wealthy investors!"
    Sawyer took a deep breath before slowing his circling pace around the table and settling back into the creaky wooden chair next to the discarded apple.
    "No." he finally said in a half whisper again after exhaling. "No, I think just one sturdy set of tools is fine enough for me..."

    Mrs. Cadbury nodded, but she still looked a bit confused. "I see.." she replied serenely, sipping from her teacup, "So you're using the tools as a metaphor for all of the responsibilities and stresses that come with a job and a title?"

    Sawyer looked over toward her and scowled. "A meta...what?" now he was the one that looked confused.
    "There's no metaphor. Bloody Hell woman, they're just tools!"

    Mrs. Cadbury shook her head, and the sly smile returned to her lips. "You are an unconventionally wise young lad, Sawyer Graves..."

    "Thanks much Misses Cadbury, I try." he replied, looking down at the cup of tea he had taken into his hands and swirling it nonchalantly. "To be unconventional I mean." He looked toward the window before downing his entire cup of tea in one gulp. "Well, if you don't want to take the coin then you don't want to take the coin. But I offered. No one can say I didn't."

    He arose from his chair, swiping up the long thin coil of Jyranium from the table as he made his way toward the door and took his patched coat from the rack. "I'll be off now, Misses Cadbury. Thank you for a lovely evening."

    " 'Tis only seven in the morning." she answered, looking toward her large grandfather clock that stood in the hallway. Fantastic bit of clockwork too. It looked as if the thing were made of solid oak. Wood had been in scarce supply in Caldor ever since he could remember memories. The thing must've been at least three centuries old.
    "Oh, it's no problem, I've already had my tea. Good day."
    And with that he half slammed the door shut as he hastily made his way toward his Minicart parked just a few strides to the left of the house, hidden behind a large pile of useless metal he'd scavenged through earlier that day. Or was it later last night? Time was such a useless concept to keep track of if you weren't in a specific situation that called for it.

    Now I just need a few more odds and ends before I can get back to work. Work. Feels like it's been ages since I've seen my workshop...can I even call that makeshift forge near the sewers a workshop?..Bah! Of course I can. Anyone who says I can't is a sodding bloody idiot!...What was I doing? Ah yes! Axl Square should have some shops where I can buy what I need. To market!

    The sun had all but overtaken the sky now. Light poured over the tall buildings in the distance. Zeppelins in the air casting a shadow here or there. The rays illuminated every speck of scenery in the city. It was a shame really, the black clouds of the factories and the dirty lopsided buildings of the lower streets just up ahead were clearly visible during the day. Low Caldor was so much more...not pretty, no...less grotesque, in the night.
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    "It'll work. Trust me"

    Those were the same last words Zona always said before she leapt off the roof with a questionable piece of cloth strapped to her or when she experimented on an adaptation of one of her fathers own creations. Except this time it wasn't her saying it. This was a memory.

    I was standing on the edge of the canal, ships were docking and leaving and transports were moving at speed around me. The city was already alive even though the sun had just risen above the blanketed horizon. Merchants were shouting out orders and street-walkers were yelling back at them. Everywhere you looked something was happening. Buying, selling, trading, some not of the good kind. Pick-pocketers, thieves, prostitutes and beggars alike didn't seem to mind the early hours of the day. But I didn't notice any of it. I stood there, my back to the awful stench of Caldor, and I watched the sunrise. My father stood next to me, his brow furrowed into a concentrated gaze through his glasses. We stood there in silence, and for a moment the chaos of the world around us meant nothing. We had this, the silence, the peace.
    "Want to see why I really brought you out here? Look.." he said and I instantly beamed with excitement. I turned to face him, eyes full of wonder. He'd wanted to show me something, something that had to be out here next to the river. The only place you can see the sunrise. He fumbled with his overcoat, fiddling around through his pockets when finally he brought something out. It was a small object, wrapped in an old handkerchief. He gently placed it in my hang and urged me to unveil the surprise.
    With small, juvenile fingers I pulled apart the gift and revealed the most detailed creation I'd seen yet. It was a bird, built using gears and cogs and wired and shaped with the most intricate designs of metal. I looked up at him with a questionable face, it was beautiful, the most amazing thing I had ever since. But there was more. Surely..
    "Are you ready? Trust me, it works.. Watch." he said and he picked it up. He leaned in close and showed me how he turned the handle before letting it come to life. And it did. The gears one by one started turning, and the bird seem to come alive in his hand. I stared in awe as it came to stand by itself. Then.. the most remarkable thing happened. The bird opened up to reveal its wings, and before I had time to react, it took flight. I gasped and ran to the edge, clasping onto the railings and watched in awe as it flew higher and higher above us. It may have just been the naivety of a child, but I truly believed that my father had created something, something extraordinary. To me he'd created life, created beauty, done something wonderful with what little he had. He was my hero, what he had offered to this bleak and dark world was wonder, and awe. The kind of things you only hear about in stories. It was truly magical. And yes, you could just say that it was a simple machine. A toy that was given to a child who needed a childhood. But something that I didn't realize at the time, since my eyes grew teary as I watched it leave. Was that I wasn't sad that the bird was leaving, I wasn't sad that I couldn't keep it. I cried because I was longing for something that you only heard about in stories, something that small precious bird finally had.. Freedom.


    Zona stood by the canal. Her face was blank. The sun still shone on her face, but the heat from its light couldn't penetrate the coldness she felt. She couldn't escape the emptiness. It ate at her and the more she tried to ignore it, the more it hurt. That didn't scare her though. What did scare her were the thoughts in her head. She couldn't see anything. She had nowhere to go, no goal to strive towards. Her future was just a shadow of an idea, as murky and unforgiving as the black waters of the Canal. She couldn't cry. She was all out of tears. She only stared. Lost in her own cloudy thoughts. The wind picked up and the sudden chill caught enough attention to yank her from her trance. She looked down at her feet, her shoes were now wearing away at the stress points. She turned to look back at Caldor. Where to Roche? You're all out of ideas.
    Boop..


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    Alex didn’t have any money. He usually didn’t have any money, but in this case it was particularly distressing as he didn’t have any money and he was very, very hungry. He contemplated ways in which this situation could be rectified as he walked down the streets of Caldor that morning. Work? Where? Steal? Hey, if they’re not paying close enough attention to tell if someone’s hand is in their pocket in a slum like this, they didn’t deserve their money.

    Maybe I should go back to that place, he thought. The shelter. He wasn’t a permanent resident or anything. He’d just heard about it a while back and sought it out. Ever since then, he’d pay it a visit every once in a blue moon, whenever he found himself in need of a place to crash. It had been quite some time since he was last there. Alex’s thoughts were interrupted when he spotted two young guys around his age leaning against the side of a building. They locked eyes with him and seemed to recognize him. One whispered something to the other, who then nodded and the two stood up and made a beeline for Alex.

    Crap, he thought. No getting out of this one.

    “Morning,” one of the young men said with faux politeness. “Say, you look a lot like someone we’ve heard a lot about.”

    Alex thought about that. Had he been around this area recently? Come to think of it, he’d been there just a couple of days ago, hadn’t he?

    “Let me refresh your memory,” the second guy chimed in. “The other day you beat the living hell out of one of our buddies.”

    Oh. That was what this was about. “I remember beating up some stupid kid who tried to mug me, if that’s who you’re talking about,” he responded.

    “Yeah, well, we just wanted to return the favor,” he responded back. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a switchblade, which he then flicked open. “With interest.” He came at Alex with the knife in hand.

    Alex could tell just from looking at his stance and swing that this wasn’t somebody who knew what they were doing. It was just some punk kid with a knife who wanted to play badass. Alex reacted instantly. He ducked to the side slightly, out of the path of the knife, and grabbed his assailant’s wrist tightly, holding it away from himself. He then drew back his left arm and punched him as hard as he could in the side, then proceeded to knee him in the gut. The assailant doubled over in pain and dropped the switchblade. Alex kicked the knife away so that he wouldn’t be able to pick it up again. But he was in pain and didn’t look like he planned to get back up again.

    Alex turned around to face the other guy, only to be met with a fist to his face. He was momentarily blinded by pain and stumbled back a bit, trying to get his head straight. He shouldn’t have turned his back on that one. That was stupid. That punch had busted his lip and he could taste blood. His attacker came at him again, but this time Alex blocked the punch with his arm. He came back with a left, and Alex blocked it again. Seeing a momentary opening, Alex swiftly delivered a hard open-palmed strike straight to the other guy’s solar plexus, followed by a punch to his windpipe. His opponent stumbled back, gasping for air, and Alex took the opportunity to duck down and do a leg sweep, knocking his opponent’s legs out from under him and sending him flat on his back.

    Seeing that his attackers were both on the ground with no plans of getting back up again, he took a deep breath and relaxed his stance. His lip was still bleeding, his knuckles felt sore from hitting them so hard, and the spots on his arms where he blocked those punches hurt like hell and were probably going to bruise. Just another day in the life. He went over to the guy who he had relieved of his knife, knelt down, and reached into his pockets, turning them out and spilling their contents onto the ground. He did the same with the other guy. He gathered it all up and examined it. They both had a little bit of money on them. Enough for a couple of meals. “For my troubles,” he said to the two guys on the ground as he pocketed the money and turned around and walked away.

    I should probably stay away from this area from now on, in case they’ve got more friends, he thought. But that was something to worry about another time. He had enough money to get something to eat and keep himself going a little bit longer. It looked like he wouldn’t need to pay the shelter a visit after all.

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    Axl Square was bustling. Bodies bunched up together in random groups against the sides of the streets, while still more huddled around merchants that had pulled their carts out into the streets to display their wares. From the poor and ragged ruffians and thugs to the gentlemanly men in fine coats and tophats. Everyone could be seen at work or shopping around Axl Square. That was odd, considering how early in the morning it was. Or had more time gone by since he'd left the Cadbury's home? It didn't really matter, it just made him that much more anxious. Not that Sawyer didn't like a crowd, but that kind of density of people was unpredictable. He could be all but invisible, no one ever sparing a second glance in his direction. That'd be nice. On the other hand, he could do something as little as bump into the wrong person or get caught in the middle of some commotion brought on by a fight over who stepped on who's shoes. Caldor tended to seep more and more doubt into his thoughts everyday he walked her streets.

    Eventually I'll have to leave this city...but where to? For all I know the family's been taken to Ironhall, and aint no bleeding way to get into there without a pass...Perhaps Westen? No no no no. Too much water there, not enough places to hide an underground syndicate of bodysnatchers, just wet farmlands from what I've heard...But maybe...

    His thoughts were interrupted as he saw the sign he was looking for up ahead. A sign of modest wood with gold embroidered letters that curled and twisted in their fancy fashion: "Eli's Excellent Metalworks Emporium", hanging over the streetwalk in front of a mid sized building of bright red brick. Sawyer turned the wheel of his Minicart and took a parking spot directly in front of it, tossing his welding goggles upward to rest above his forehead as he jumped out.

    He burst through the door, having it slam into the wall to its' left side. A tall lanky man in a tophat looked up from behind the counter, the loud noise had interrupted his conversation with a customer; quite the pretty young lass, Sawyer noted. He scowled at Sawyer, "How many times must I tell you to be gentle with that door, boy!" The words were yelled, but lacked a harsh tone. The shopkeep never really lost the cheerfull bounciness of his voice, even when he was irritated.

    "Forgiveness Eli! Forgiveness please!" Sawyer yelled back loudly over his shoulder. He'd already begun to shuffle through the shelves and baskets displayed around the large oval room, picking through the wares. He didn't worry over disturbing the man. He had more important things to do. Though he had broken the glass of that door upon entering Eli's Emporium before, he was quick to give him coin to replace it, even though the repair cost had once again set Sawyer back in his plans to rescue his family.

    A few of these springs, yes...couple coils, NO! Not those ones, I need STABILITY! Copper! Yes, yes...where's the God Damn copper!? Sawyer continued to mutter and rumage through Eli's bits and bobs of metal. He really did love this shop, it was the only place in Caldor he'd bother to go to for parts for his creations. The Emporium was a bit more expensive, being in Axl Square(which was about ten minutes upwards of the canals, making it practically a part of High Caldor), but he knew he could rely on the pieces he bought here. It was the price a smith had to pay for quality, Sawyer guessed. Shops in Low Caldor did much the same as he'd done himself this morning, scrounging about the junkyards and taking any piece that could be usable and selling them for a profit.

    The other two customers of Eli's had purchased their wares and left already, so Sawyer began to take all the pieces he had decided to buy up to him and place them on the counter one-by-one. He didn't know exactly why, he just liked to shop that way.

    "Working on another clock there, sonny?" Eli asked with his trademark smirk. Sawyer liked the shopkeep. The man could often be as eccentric as he was, and put up with Sawyers...odd company. But of course, he supplied the man with a lot of business. That'd put a smile on any merchants' face.
    "Er..yes. Yes indeed! It'll be a grandfather clock of the finest oak!" Sawyer proclaimed a little shakily, still darting back and forth between the counter and Eli's wares. He had to come up with a lie, of course, for why he was buying up parts. Admitting you made weapons outside of the army's hands was just asking for trouble. No, not trouble. It was a downright death sentence!

    Eli lowered his eyes, squinting harder at Sawyer as he approached the counter once more. "You don't use that many cogs in your designs, I noticed.." the man began, knuckling his handlebar mustache. "Most Clockworkers use at least ten cogs of various sizes, but you...you only purchase the ones that go longwise, and only about two at a time..."

    Sawyer paused for a moment, looking back at the man's accusatory stare. ...Shit, he almost said the words out loud. Had Eli figured it out? Of course it was only speculation, he couldn't prove anything, and he couldn't go to the police. Simply purchasing items wasn't a crime. Or was it made a crime now? The city had begun to issue proclamations that certain materials could only be bought with an engineers license. A countermeasure against BoomSmiths operating illegally.
    He's never asked to see a license before. If he suspected anything why hasn't he stopped and asked for a bloody license yet?

    Eli still maintained his smirk somewhat, but those eyes...something was wrong. "I..My designs that is...they will revolutionize the indus.."
    "Now, now lad." the shopkeep cut in "Don't treat me like an idiot. I'm the owner of this Emporium, am I not? I've sold parts and ore to engineers of all kinds my whole life! You can't fool me." Eli turned his back and ducked under the counter, opening a drawer. Sawyer tucked a hand under his patchwork coat and laced a finger around the trigger of ATHENA, his pistol. He'd been through a lot in the last few weeks. Strangers interested in buying the guns he forged had begun to search for him with more...intensity. Some were more interested in capturing him, while others seemed to want him dead. The BoomSmith game could earn someone a lot of money if done right, but Sawyer was beginning to learn that it wasn't without its' dangers.

    "Oh calm down, Graves! And take your hand off that thing." Eli said in a hushed, but firm voice as he turned back toward Sawyer, holding something small in his hand. "If I'd wanted to kill you, which I don't, I'dve done it by now. Come here,.... and look casual...well..as casual as you can. I understand you're a bit...um..funny."
    Why does everyone say that!?, he thought. But loosened his grip on ATHENA's trigger and slowly approached the counter.

    Eli had a tiny rolled up parchment gripped in his hand. "There's some men asking after you. Questionable men. They weren't with the army, and I didn't like the looks of them." the shopkeep's voice was low, the lowest Sawyer had ever heard it. He was serious. Damn it all! What was he to do with one of Low Caldor's street gangs after him? There would be no peace, no way to sell his designs and be safe about it. Not without a partner at least. Partners willing to put up with him on a regular basis were a rarity. Trustworthy ones, he was beginning to think, were all but fairytales. A comforting thought, but never to be found in reality.

    Sawyer leaned in closer, examining the parchment in Eli's hands. Why was he telling him all this? The old man had once said something about Sawyer reminding the shopkeep of himself at a young age. Well a "less funny" younger Eli at least, is what he'd said. Perhaps Sawyer could trust him.
    "Take this!" Eli whispered loudly in a hiss, thrusting the scroll into Sawyer's hand. "It's a map of..."
    CRASH!
    The door slammed open loudly, and a large burly figure stood among the broken glass. His body was blasted from behind by the strong sunlight, so he couldn't make out the man's face clearly, but he could see the faint crackings of a smile.
    "Run lad.." Eli whispered. Sawyer stood from the crouched position by the counter he'd taken at the shock of the loud sound. He looked toward the large man, dressed in a black trenchcoat with heavy boots, a look of defiance showed in both Sawyer's face and the stance he took. He reached for ATHENA, and in one swift whipping motion brought the three barrels of the gun in a direct line with the shadowy figure. "No. Not this time. No more running." The last bit of Sawyers words were muffled by the sound of fire igniting gunpowder. A large bullet hole appeared in the wall next to where the man's head once was. But the man himself had ducked, and was charging straight for Sawyer, lowering his head and shoulders so as to tackle him.

    Sawyer's eyes widened. Bloody Bleeding Bloody Hell! He cocked the pistol back to switch it to the second barrel, but the burly man was unnaturally fast for his size. He leapt up, about to crash upon him with a downward fist. Sawyer clenched his eyes shut and tensed up. Bracing for impact. Just then, a force pushed him to the side and into the wall, knocking some of the metalworks off the shelves. Sawyer opened his eyes, Eli had jumped in the way and taken the punch in his stead. "Don't be a fool!" the old shopkeep yelled, blood spurting from his mouth. "I gave you what you need, now GO!"

    Sawyer was mad. Mad as hell. He hated his own weakness. He was too scrawny and inexperienced to fight. ATHENA should've been his great equalizer. How had the shot missed? He would have to work on his upgrades with extra care now. But there was no time to start drawing up plans.
    "If you live, seek me out." Sawyer said, stepping back reluctantly before running into the streets. He gripped the roll of paper tightly against his chest with one hand. "I owe you!" Sawyer yelled before bumping into two men out on the sidewalk. Both were dressed in black trenchcoats as well.
    Sawyer quickly regained his haste and took off at a run, jumping up and swinging his legs into his Minicart.
    "After him!" he could hear the man yell, but it was too late. The Minicart's engine roared and within seconds he was speeding down the streets of Caldor. White hot steam trailing behind him.
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    Looks like I'll need to leave the city sooner than I thought.. The Minicart began to sputter and shake from lack of fuel. He'd have to leave it somewhere soon and take off the rest of the way on foot. But where was he going? "I've given you what you need... the words of Eli echoed in his mind.
    I've got to find somewhere safe to look at this Hellcursed paper!

    The street out of Axl Square was congested with incomers. He nearly ran over a good amount of them on his way out. There was no time to look behind to see if the men were pursuing him. No. Better to go straight ahead and...
    The road ahead forked off in two directions. Without thinking, without a moment of hesitation, he gripped the wheel and steered right. Onto a path that was headed for the docks. Not a bad idea...I think I can lose them somewhere along the canals.

    It seemed like only a few seconds passed as he sped down the road. The engine of the Minicart finally sputtered out somewhere near the Eastern dock, along the center of the canals. Sawyer quickly jumped up from the seat and ran over to crouch behind a large wooden crate box. Probably loaded with some kind of nobleman cargo. Nobleman and wealthy merchants were the only people that actually used the boats to deliver things from port to port. At least the only people on the "right" side of the law. He reached into his coat pocket and withdrew the small scroll, tied delicately with a small cord of string. I hope whatever's in here is as useful as the old man made it seem. Why, I've got half a mind to... He froze. He could hear the screeching of tires approaching downhill. Fast. He peered around the corner of the crate, searching for the sound.

    There, at the edge of the canal, stood a girl not much younger than Sawyer. She was looking contemplative toward the city's high buildings. Who could be staring that way so intently with that awful racket going on? What he saw next made his heart begin to race. The road stood behind where she was standing. A long black car sped threateningly toward her. He could see the outcome of this situation before it started. Numbers started to rattle off inside his head. He visualized the scene. At the rate of speed that car was going, coupled with the downhill slope and her seeming oblivious to the oncoming threat...She had about a 10.0035 percent chance of dodging the vehicle. Those weren't good odds. Very not good odds indeed. There was no time to question wether he should leave her to her fate and take off. No time to ponder if it was honorable or "moral". So Sawyer acted on instinct.

    "LOOK OUT!" he called to her, jumping out from behind the box and rolling between the girl and the car. In one swift motion he pulled ATHENA from the holster at his belt and knelt down, cocking the gun in front of him. BANG BANG
    Two shots.
    One to the engine.
    One to the left wheel.
    It was enough to send the car careening off to the side until it crashed into the side of the canal. Water spilled from the cracks of the canal's wall. Steam erupted from the car's front grill. The men, gangsters, whoever they were...they weren't going to like this. He stood up, tucked ATHENA back into the holster and began to dart away from the scene. As fast as his legs could sprint. Until something. Something made him stop. His footsteps paused in the middle of the road, and he looked back at the girl, still standing there staring at the wreckage. It wouldn't be right to leave her there alone. No, not right at all. There was no debating this one. Those thugs would surely wonder why he'd risked himself to stop them from running her through. Probably think she had something to do with Sawyer and his gunsmithing. No, she needed to be off somewhere safe, and fast. If anything happened to her now, it would definitely be Sawyers fault. He couldn't have that. Honor would not allow it. "The only thing worth more than a man's life is his honor." Another saying his father had kicked into his brain from a young age.

    He doubled back and walked toward her at a brusque pace.
    "Apologies. Apologies...uhm...miss." he began in a passionless voice, as he so often did when first talking to strangers. He supposed he came off as awkward to some, but could never really understand exactly what made him so odd. "So sorry to involve you, but it's better than being dead." Sawyer tried to seem more sincere in his choice of words. "Come now, quickly," he started for her hand, but ended up clasping her wrist in a his own firm grip. Not so tight a grip as to seem intimidating, but strong enough to try and let her know that it was an urgent thing for her to follow him away. "They seen your face. Can't have that. They're bad people. Very bad. Course they're not as bad as the Reapers, but..I guess they could kill you if they wanted to.." he began to speak while looking away from her toward the men in the car. He could see them begin to stir. It wouldn't be long before the shock of the impact would pass and anger would take over. They were wasting precious time to escape with each minute they dawdled. No time for a "proper introduction". Though Sawyer barely did that with strangers anyway.

    "Well, come now. Come with me." he tugged at her wrist and turned his gaze over, locking eyes with the girl. She had striking bluish eyes, with a tint of aqua green to them. They weren't particularly happy, he noticed. Those eyes. But they seemed to have a faintly noticeable glimmer of hope to them that most residents of Caldor lacked. Or at least had lost over time living in the backwards city for years. Sawyer shook his head and turned away from her, hands and fingers still clasped around her wrist.

    "Hurry on! No worries, I'm not lettin' anyone kill you...uh..miss. I can explain when we're safe. No, no need to be scared. No need at all."
    Last edited by Syntax Error; 11-29-2012 at 11:27 PM.

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