My love scenes in my story are too raunchy. I mean I want that, however I need to cater to both male and female audiences. So I need advice, assistance on how to go about making my scenes...poetic or just something the female audience would enjoy reading. You can PM if you're going to get descriptive and give me very mature examples. This is a serious question. But anyway...
I mean I got pretty technical with the body parts/anatomy, and purposefully put some descriptions to make people smile or even want to gasp. For example "slippery when wet", I'll let you decide what that's about. And the way the characters talk to one another during their action seems realistic to me. At least it's realistic in the sense of how the characters would talk to one another.
The story revolves around the witches, vampires and werewolves. It's a horror adventure but it's by no means a book for 16 year olds...this is not Twilight...and I'm trying to give it that appeal of 50 shades of grey, I read a excerpt...wasn't impressed.
HELP. Hopefully this is the appropriate place to put this. I'm sorry if it's not.