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    Lo Pellegrino Shon Harris's Avatar
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    Won't have a post up until Friday. To be frank, I went from reading 60 to 120 applications for Evergreen's new Visual Arts faculty applicants. These have to be read and reviewed within a week, plus I have my actual academic course load, and my job. This has me a bit bogged down. You know most everything for Evergreen, Prome, so when I do post, I'll just include everything I need to in order to complete my part before transitions take place. I can still PM people too and help divvy out information so we all get to choose our parts in the siege. This is building into a high-potential point in the plot! Everyone, be you post-man, watchtower guard, or what have you, has a lot of opportunity to have a part in the conflict in some capacity.


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    Quote Originally Posted by xPrometheusx View Post
    (with the help of Aweena, of course. You get to vomit too)
    That's quite a polite offer. You know, I always advocated for communal vomiting. One of my favorite childhood pastimes.

    Anyway, I've posted, and I apologize to everyone for the brief bit of romance. I've never written anything remotely involving mushy feelings, so I'm not sure if it even came across as "awwww!" or not. But my next post will make-up for the lack of action/excitement and the awkwardness of love with lots and lots of morbid destruction.

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    Aweena, I thought it was rather awkard and adorable at the same time. You have a real gift with words, I certainly enjoyed reading it and all of your posts so far. I know it must be tough keeping all those character straight in your mind, so you get some major internet points from me (and props too) for writing the Farm like you do.

    Keep up the amazing posts!

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    @ Aweena: Oh my God, shit just got real... *sniffles* The two groups are never going to see each other again, are they? ARE THEY!?! Poor Sam and Toby... Poor little kids... Poor Amanda and her unborn child! You conniving, devious bitch! (and I mean that in the nicest, most loving way possible)

    Really, I loved the post even with that evil cliff hanger at the end. I like all the characters on the Farm too much for you to go around murderating (that's totally a word, don't fight it) them.

    It's... AFGHANISTAN-IMATION!

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    Senior Member Aweena's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by howler01 View Post
    Aweena, I thought it was rather awkward and adorable at the same time. You have a real gift with words, I certainly enjoyed reading it and all of your posts so far. I know it must be tough keeping all those character straight in your mind, so you get some major internet points from me (and props too) for writing the Farm like you do.

    Keep up the amazing posts!
    Aw, stop it! That's all so kind of you! All of that just put a giant smile on my face. Honestly, it gave me this burst of motivation to get my next post done already. Thanks for the uplifting compliments, Howler!

    "Awkward and adorable"... yeah, I like that. I think I'm going to stick with that.

    Quote Originally Posted by Free Faller View Post
    @ Aweena: Oh my God, shit just got real... *sniffles* The two groups are never going to see each other again, are they? ARE THEY!?! Poor Sam and Toby... Poor little kids... Poor Amanda and her unborn child! You conniving, devious bitch! (and I mean that in the nicest, most loving way possible)

    Really, I loved the post even with that evil cliff hanger at the end. I like all the characters on the Farm too much for you to go around murderating (that's totally a word, don't fight it) them.
    Ah, haha! Will they see each other again? Who knows! And if you think I'm a conniving bitch now, wait until what happens next.

    Murderating characters is my forte (I won't fight the use of that word because I like it... makes me think of "grating," like death by cheese graters). So... maybe not now, but soon, even Winifred will die. And thanks for liking my posts so much so far! Honestly, I'm feeling so much happiness about this story I've got going!

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    This is my new character, Acacia De Luca. She's hawwwwt. She'll probably be taking over for Daryl, as I already find her more fascinating to write about, if only for a couple of posts. If you have feedback, please, send it. I get to rag on you guys when you post new characters, it's only fair that you tear into me once in awhile :P

    I'll get around to other roleplay business in a few minutes, but I figured I'd post this here, first.

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    I have a grammatical critique, you posted that she'd "heard about him by change" you mean chance, though yes? Also, she is very hawwt. *shows picture...stares...(five hours later)...stares...* :P

    *coughs* Anyway. how do you pronounce her name? This is just a personal curiosity of mine. From a character standpoint, I think she's going to quite the bomb to drop in on the story. That's all I really have, I don't see any other issues with her, and I'm frankly excited to see her in the story.

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    Uh-Kay-Shuh, right?

    This is similar to what my Norah was in the last Apocalyptica, in the sense that she's so close to Emperor, but this goes in a radically new direction. Where Acacia is strong, brutal, and Emperor-esque in her strength, Norah was very quiet, coping as things went, and suffered from years of sexual assault from Guy in order to survive. I really love Acacia and expect she has met Norah, and hope she has the opportunity to interact with her now that Norah has left Legion. I wonder how that would tap into Acacia's problems with the organization.

    I hope Daryl doesn't disappear all together! It'd be really interesting to see characters tag in and out as Apocalyptica grows in all directions. Looking forward to seeing her on the field though, no offense Daryl.


    AOTM #25:The Four Elements
    Render or draw a representation of one or more of the four elements: Earth, Wind, Water, and Fire.
    Due: May 31, 23:59 PST. Have ideas suggestions? I'd love to see them in our AOTM Suggestion Thread!




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    Quote Originally Posted by Aweena View Post
    Ah, haha! Will they see each other again? Who knows! And if you think I'm a conniving bitch now, wait until what happens next.

    Murderating characters is my forte (I won't fight the use of that word because I like it... makes me think of "grating," like death by cheese graters). So... maybe not now, but soon, even Winifred will die. And thanks for liking my posts so much so far! Honestly, I'm feeling so much happiness about this story I've got going!




    @Prom: I believe Cass and Acacia may just have to throw down. I don't know why, just something about her... Also, is that picture of the chick that plays Nora from the show Revolution?

    It's... AFGHANISTAN-IMATION!

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    Damn, I wrote up a nice critique of Acacia and it didn't even go through. Hours spent on tearing that CS apart...

    So, shortened points:
    - I noticed her name is coincidentally the same name of the plant used to ward off undead. Strange coincidence? Or symbolic meaning?;

    - Nice strengths that should be expected of her; I like that they didn't come up out of nowhere since they genuinely fit the character;

    - I hate the "they're really pretty and get everything they want!" type of character, but I like that you addressed her sexually-manipulative skill as one of her
    prominent strengths instead of, "she's so pretty even the girls like her! She can't help it!";

    - Really? Not a single song came to your mind? I'm ashamed to suggest this because I think she's volatile, but "Womanizer," by Britney Spears. There's like, two words in the whole song, but it fits;

    - I feel like there should just be one small weakness that limits her physically; as it is, she's a strong character - and I don't want to suggest taking away any of her strengths, because they work with her - but I feel like she's a bit too strong. I get the emotionally unstable/hostile bit, and that will lead up to some great character development when she breaks down, but she's great with guns, great with hand-to-hand combat, is physically strong, street-smart, a quick-thinker (or, at least, I assumed from the CS she would be), fast and quiet, and manipulative to a strong extent. Aside from the inevitable meltdown she'll face and her untrusting nature, I don't feel like there's anything else that makes her vulnerable. And maybe that's the intent and maybe I'm being nitpicky, but my opinion is to add something to her - not even anything drastic - that limits her just a bit.

    So that's just my opinion and please don't kick me out for it. We're still friends, right? Also, I'm excited for Cassie and Acacia to be forced to work together. Those two will be a sitcom duo. Damn it, Free Faller! Why did you make a character I love more than my own?!

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