Shattered Lines: The Expansion OOC

[Pockets]

Yeah? I was kinda thinking releasing them with some gaps between might kinda build interest but I can see how that'd be frustrating as all hell too. hmmmmm....

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Pascal must post.... and DVS.... I will move along Orion and Aff's characters a little bit with my next post as well as giving some more of the Tyrix.

Oh and Odin whatcha think of the Wolf Kin? I am totally open to any suggestions you guys may have on any of these creatures too. if anyone wants to take my Bestiary that I posted up here and make some notes you can email it my way. I'd love your guys feedback.

thinking of posting it in the off topic forum to get some feedback on it there too.

[Pascal]

I will get on the post when I can. I am sort of swamped with narratives at the moment, and gotta get these done before I do that. I have some ideas, though it may be a little short...

Also, I am going to sound really stupid, but where is this Bestiary? I am just too thick to find it.

[Pockets]

oh i forgot to add the link into the OOC. I'll get it and post it into the OP on this thread so it'll be easy to locate.

[Pascal]

Thanks! I thought I was just a bit thick...Well, I am, but that is another matter entirely.

[Pockets]

Link is posted and I've also added some Hiders into the OP to make it a little easier to read. It was getting a bit long and I still have four gods to add to my list of Deities too. lol.

The Tiamat Entry has been written as well so that's something.

[Mr Odin]

What do I think of Wolf Kin? I think they are awesome, I also think you are going to have a hell of a time separating them from ”modern” werewolves. As far as I see it if you want to make them really different you’d have to go with a more “traditional” werewolf.

Traditional Werewolf:
-Shows no lupine aspects as a human
-Effected by lunar cycles
-No control over actions in lycanthropic form
-Unaware of lycanthropic nature
-Infected by lycanthropy
-Have two forms human and lycanthropic
-Possess no abilities or sense of a wolf as a human

Wolf Kin:
-Shows lupine aspects as a human
-Not effected by lunar cycles
-Can maintain control in lycanthropic form
-Aware of lycanthropic nature
-Trait based along bloodlines (i.e. Kin)
-Have three forms human, wolf, and lycanthropic.
-Possess a level of ability and senses between human and wolf when in human form

There could be a good aspect of conflict there to with Wolf Kin hating the “diseased” werewolves and the commoner may not care to tell the difference either, which would cause friction.

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just my 2 cents

[Pascal]

1) I read Jewel Golem as Jewish Golum.
2) I agree with Odie up there.
3) If someone had told Deedee and Jackie about these, they would not have come...not even a little.
4) I did a different kind of Doppelganger, oops.

[Pockets]

Cool deal Odin. I like it and I'm gonna work those details into the bestiary and the story. I actually got an idea for one of the books from this. Gonna focus on a Wolf Kin character to add into the We Are Kin book. It was originally intended to be about a Marine that finds he has Dragon Kin Ancestry. (And I had that idea long before I saw your character Odin lol)

pascal. One, I mak have to make some changes to that then... Diamond Golem? Gem Golem? We'll see.

2. I agree too. He's a smart guy aint he?

3. I have no doubt. Hence why it wasn't mentioned.

4. No Worries, we'll call yours a changeling. I'm gonna rework things with the Doppleganger anyway. The bestiary is still the very first rough draft at the moment so changes will be forthcoming on all of it eventually.

[Pascal]

Posted. Sorry for the delay. I have class tomorrow night though, so I wanted to pound out something today. I meant to put in a flashback of Jackie's riding lessons, but it didn't happen. O well.

[Mr Odin]

Great posting Pascal, I am debating if JD should notice Deedee falling and show concern, kind of establish a step back acknowledging that not too long ago he was human. Kind of split up the "wow its cool being a Kin" vibe he is starting to get.