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    Quote Originally Posted by The Nexerus View Post
    You said that we need to list our spells. This roleplay is going to have a spell list, then? Could you show us that?
    You can take spells from DnD, TES or make up your own spells. You have explain how the spell works and describe it.
    Quote Originally Posted by Irean View Post
    Could you describe an average wood elf? Elves tend to vary a lot and I don't want to mess up.
    Wood elf tends to be shorter in stature than human, and is generally weaker in physical strength. They are more lean, and they compensate their lack of great strength with amazing agility and are known to be best acrobats. They have no body hair and grow no beards. They have natural talent being skilled with bows and other ranged weapons. They are often the finest marksmen in Areador. They are excellent scouts and they have talent for tracking animals. Wooden elves can communicate with animals and even command some. Wooden elves posses arcane talent, and they often become shamans, who command nature and preserve it. Wooden elves can see in darkness.

    #makiaka
    The image is OK and she looks like a rogue, but I have to warn you, one strike of a blade would end her life, by the looks of the armor. I suppose you will evade direct hits and use agility in combat? Perhaps interested in playing as Wooden Elf?

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    #Huscarl
    Acceptable, but could you add more skills in your CS? Like, you were apprentice of carpentry, could you add that you know how to work with wood? And, since you were trained by mercenaries, could you add that you possibly have some skill in tracking and scouting?
    Otherwise, well done, I like the image and how you mentioned warlord attacking your town.
    #LJCOMICS
    Accepted, nothing to say. Well done and very nicely done visually.
    Last edited by Werther; 12-14-2012 at 06:44 AM.
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    hmm... some interesting characters so far.

    We apologize ahead of time if any comments seem nitpickety or very critical.
    If there's anything you feel needs pointing out in our character sheet in similar manner as we comment on yours, feel free.

    Huscarl:
    Background seems a bit vague, perhaps expand a bit on it to add more details? How he learned his skills, what he failed to learn, what he can do besides fight, etc.

    Does he have anything of note about his appearance?
    Is it by choice or not that he appears bald in the image? does he have any old injuries? scars? What eye color does he have (hard to see in image)
    How tall is he?

    Aside from that part its a good character start. Nothing that we could see as "wrong" in it.

    LJCOMICS:
    nice length of character sheet.

    On the spells, perhaps change it so that only a couple of those spells are "known" with the rest being in that mysterious tome, where he is reluctant or even afraid to learn them from the results of the ones he knows?
    They are after all rather powerful things. Especially for a 16-year old who only recently began learning magic.

    How suited is he for adventuring? Is our interpretation that he'd be in trouble if he were to end up away from "civilization" correct?
    It is after all one thing to have equipment for travel, quite another to be able to use it properly.

    Nexerus:
    We can't answer as to a spell list. Best is probably to go with a mixture of what has been used so far. More spells can naturally be learned during play. (or new uses of known spells)

    Irean:
    Based on a conglomerate of D&D wood elves and TES wood elves, we'd describe a wood elf like this:
    lithe-bodied, shorter on average than humans. (In both of those universes, wood elves are short of stature)
    Sharper angles to face than humans, they might appear somewhat more stern-looking. Faces are also slightly longer and narrower.
    Where human ears average about 63mm in length, wood elf ears would be around 97mm in length.
    Hair is typically color suitable to blend into forests. (in other words, not bright golden, white or black. Probably not red either. Except in autumn, red is a rather rare color in forests)
    Clothing, when specified, is of the sort that does not stick out in a forest.
    Also, their skin is darker than human skin. pale to sandy brown or even faint vegetative green.

    That sufficient?

    Makiaka:
    That picture could in our opinion work, but she'd have trouble walking fairly quickly with that sort of footgear. There's a reason "flip-flop" sandals never caught on in the old-world era fighting forces. Most either went for proper boots or roman-style sandals.
    The picture indicates some sort of rogue or assassin in style. best solution if going with such would be to replace footgear with supple leather boots. (light armor)






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    Ellri, accepted.
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    You probably didn't pick up on it, but the spells are categorized by their cooldown length, just like in 4e. The green spells are At-Will, and can be casted without a cooldown. The red spells are Encounter, and each has a five-minute cooldown. The black spells are Daily, and have six-hour cooldowns. Is that clearer now? The Mysterious Tome is something completely different from a spellbook, and I would rather not discusd it openly before the IC starts.

    Also, it's important to note that he's not "learning" magic. That's the dominion of Wizards. As a Warlock, Luka is essentially having magic thrust upon him. That's how it is with Warlocks: they gain great power for very little effort, but the cost is often great and terrible.

    And he's not much of an adventurer at all, but he's making do just walking from town to town.


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    ahh... Forgotten realms is not something we're familiar with.
    The details you just gave make sense balance-wise.

    We figured there was something secretive about that tome... we won't try to dig into what. More fun to discover IC.

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    Ty, here is my CS.


    Name: Shayndra featherleaf
    Age: 27
    Race: Wood elf
    Gender: Female
    Homeland: South eastern forests, Shalfor, a large city of the wood elves.
    Appearance: Stands at an average hight for a wood elf. Has hair brown like the trunk of a tree, and extremely straight, it is typically in a tight braid that goes down to her shoulder blades. Her eyes are grey blue. Her skin is a very light brown. Her face has slightly softer angles than an average elf, and almost always possesses a slight frown. Her armor is dark brown leather. Her quiver is slightly lighter in color than her armor.
    Animal companion: She has a fox as an animal companion, named Iris. He has grey blue fur, and is slightly larger than most foxes. While he rarely gets in the middle of the fight, he can be a savage ankle biter. He will also retrieve lost arrows for her after a fight.
    Class: Ranger
    Skills: Communicate: Can communicate with some animals, though angered ones that are attacking can not be spoken with. Archery training: Can shoot a bow reasonably well. Sword training: Trained in the use of a sword, but not nearly as well as a warrior.
    Spells: None
    Background: Father was an archery trainer and trained her to use a bow. Was also taught basic sword use by her father. Mother taught her how to evaluate situations quickly. Has a fear of things flying at her face, that she has not yet been able to break, though if she expects the item to be thrown, she can catch it, an improvement over what it was a few years ago.
    Personality: Calm, with the ability to think quickly when needed. Patient, and kind when she feels kindness is deserved. Tends to hold grudges. To those who have angered her, she is harsh, and does not often forgive. Tends to follow the idea that actions speak louder than words.
    Equipment and armor:
    12 golden dales.
    leather pants (lightly used)
    Leather chest piece (lightly used)
    Leather boots (moderately used)
    Soft leather gloves (moderately used)
    Leather helm (lightly used)
    Bow (moderately used)
    Quiver (lightly used)
    Arrows-quiver ~ 3/4 full
    Sword (lightly used)
    Days rations-2


    Are animal companions allowed?
    Last edited by Irean; 12-14-2012 at 03:45 PM. Reason: Changed wording for face angles, added animal companion.

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    Background seems a bit vague. Doesn't really reveal anything about her as a person. What sort of events made her what she is?

    You made a note that she's got barely more angled face than a human, is that because she is not a pure-blooded wood elf? or is there another reason?

    Does she have any notable weaknesses? anything making her stand out in a crowd?

    Beyond being unable to reason with attacking animals, are there any limits as to what animals she can communicate with?


    oh, and we at least see nothing wrong with animal companions being allowed.

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    Making a character, but before i finalize what about trolls if they're applicable.



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    We think having them as mere monsters (untameable), if at all, would be best.

    of course, it would be fun to bring them in discworld-style, but not really sure it'd fit...
    Quote Originally Posted by Wikipedia
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    Trolls in Terry Pratchett's Discworld novels, unlike the monstrous trolls of folklore and J. R. R. Tolkien, have been subverted into a moderately civilised race. Trolls on the Discworld are, essentially, living, mobile rocks. Trolls have grown to overcome those vicious stereotypes of yore and have lived very prosperous lives in heavily populated cities with (relatively) little killing, and they have held jobs as diverse as police officer and concert promoter. They have also held jobs as "bridgekeepers," collecting tolls from those that cross their bridges. It is relatively harmless, although farmers in the company of billy goats have to pay a hefty toll.
    There they are "metamorphorical rock", literally living, breathing, thinking stone.


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    I will rephrase what I said about angles. I meant for it to mean the angles on her face are on the softer end of the scale. More history may be revealed IC, as thats how I prefer to play, but if GM wants i'll write more. I'll try to add a few more details.

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