AmazinglyVivid - That particular previous relationship is not acceptable to me. And that's because it is a conventional army and does not have women fighting in it. But if you can think of another interesting plot to her backstory, do PM me about it and we can talk it over.
Kegger - I am sorry I have tarried for too long. I can positively start this RP IC tomorrow. Today, I need to work on the map of the area. To give you a better understanding of sizes and distances.
Hymusia - Too long. And that's not a criticism. Give me a few hours and I will be able to read through it. Just at the moment I do not have the time. Hang in there and thanks for the edit
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Hymusia - I read the whole thing, and it reads much better. I love the cloak-and-dagger stuff. Just some minor nits, but rest assured, your character is accepted. Your tussle with the 'creature': well, if you had meant it to be one of the Dark creatures, then I suggest you stick to one of the creatures I've defined in my opening OOC post appendix. The creature remains a 'shadow' - even to Fida. If she was up close and slitting its throat, she must be able to see, and thus describe, right? If you had meant it to be a humble bandit (since you mention that word too), then the creature references should be avoided. Be that as it may, I love the character herself. Have you spoken with Rulaan about how you two are going to plot? If not, you should start doing so.
People, I am gonna go ahead and finalize the characters now. In a couple of hours, the front post of the OOC will feature updated details. Sit tight.