The Grey Company [OOC] (medieval, fantasy, warfare)

[AmazinglyVivid]

AmazinglyVivid - You are worthy of your name. That post was very vivid, and it captured my imagination. I like the priestess and I like how you have come up with the world based on the few little tidbits I have thrown your way. She is definitely accepted, and I would like it if you and happyhobo2000 got together to define the world of the priests better. And you can go ahead and plot with ElRey too. Welcome, you are accepted.

Huzzah! I was afraid the RP had died. I'm happy to have been accepted. As previously mentioned, I wrote her with some previous ties to the general. What I had in mind was that she'd have been under his command, having enlisted at a young age and eventually worked her way up to trusted lieutenant. She left service some five years before the RP's start, after an accident that happened on her watch resulted in several deaths. Would this previous relationship be acceptable to you? If so, we could go over it in detail via PM.

[Word Smith]

AmazinglyVivid - That particular previous relationship is not acceptable to me. And that's because it is a conventional army and does not have women fighting in it. But if you can think of another interesting plot to her backstory, do PM me about it and we can talk it over.

Kegger - I am sorry I have tarried for too long. I can positively start this RP IC tomorrow. Today, I need to work on the map of the area. To give you a better understanding of sizes and distances.

Hymusia - Too long. And that's not a criticism. Give me a few hours and I will be able to read through it. Just at the moment I do not have the time. Hang in there and thanks for the edit

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Hymusia - I read the whole thing, and it reads much better. I love the cloak-and-dagger stuff. Just some minor nits, but rest assured, your character is accepted. Your tussle with the 'creature': well, if you had meant it to be one of the Dark creatures, then I suggest you stick to one of the creatures I've defined in my opening OOC post appendix. The creature remains a 'shadow' - even to Fida. If she was up close and slitting its throat, she must be able to see, and thus describe, right? If you had meant it to be a humble bandit (since you mention that word too), then the creature references should be avoided. Be that as it may, I love the character herself. Have you spoken with Rulaan about how you two are going to plot? If not, you should start doing so.

People, I am gonna go ahead and finalize the characters now. In a couple of hours, the front post of the OOC will feature updated details. Sit tight.

[Dndd8686]

Huuhhhhhmmm...

Also curious if the spy is in the same category as the dark servant, or what side he/she's on actually... Then again i only gave a read-over. And if on the dread side, what his/her relation should be to the dark servant

Or the other characters come to think of it.

[Hymusia]

The spy has nothing to do with the dark servant.

[Dndd8686]

The spy has nothing to do with the dark servant.

Nothing to do with the dark servant...? That doesnt sound very fun at all

[Hymusia]

She's not traditional 'fun' hehe. I'm sure they can chat IC and hey maybe he can convert her, who knows.

[Word Smith]

Okay, I'm back, I'm back, I'm back. Getting down to some rigorous typing and posting now.

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Right. I have updated the main OOC post with the new character information.

hymusia, ElRey, happyhobo2000 & AmazinglyVivid - I have written a synopsis for each of your characters and also some character traits. Let me know if it works for you.

AmazinglyVivid - There are a few aspects to your character (such as her military background) that I would like to see changed. I have given your character some dark history, but you decide what it is going to be. But let me know.

Dndd8686, hymusia & ElRey - I don't seem to find the names of your characters in your posts. Care to tell me?

Dunadain - I don't know if you are still watching this thread, but if you are, the swordsman position is ready for you.

Right. So that's the lot. Now, if I can get a roll call on this thread from everyone, I will start of the IC. Are we all good to go?

[Dndd8686]

A big point of his character and motivation (at least how i saw it) was that the servant doesnt remember his name, and is driven to find it, more evident at the end of my first character post. He goes by different aliases', but the one used in the second character post was Azurus Baurum.

And ready whenever.

[Hymusia]

Fida'

only problem I see is the 'trait's. Greedy does not fit her AT all. Sheis as far from greedy as a person can get, especially -spoiler foip foip foip- and considering she -foip spoiler-. So not Greedy at all.

Devious, well I suppose there can be a 'good' side to devious though she isn't your usual kind of devious so it's a tentative thing.

Crafty, well damn right she is she's be a poo spy or assassin if she wasn't lol.

I'd say her traits are loyalty, crafty, content maybe...I dunno lol thats off the top of my head.


Oh and here.

[Word Smith]

Fida'

only problem I see is the 'trait's. Greedy does not fit her AT all. Sheis as far from greedy as a person can get, especially -spoiler foip foip foip- and considering she -foip spoiler-. So not Greedy at all.

Devious, well I suppose there can be a 'good' side to devious though she isn't your usual kind of devious so it's a tentative thing.

Crafty, well damn right she is she's be a poo spy or assassin if she wasn't lol.

I'd say her traits are loyalty, crafty, content maybe...I dunno lol thats off the top of my head.


Oh and here.

hymusia - Well, she wouldn't be the assassin that she is if she wasn't devious. I hope you do realize what killing a human entails. It requires a coldness of the heart, a mind that can justify murder. Instead of loyal, she would have to be slavish to do the things that she is doing. So, choose your traits carefully. If you give me a convincing list, I will upload it.