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    Lady in Black Armaclite's Avatar
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    At WitchChild: LOL, I know what you mean. With so many selections or options available it's hard for you to choose which one you want. I did say you could make more than one character and races with hyphens were restricted to one person only.

    At Everyone: C+ or C- will also suffice. I forgot to mention I was using that type of grading system.

    At Alpha: Looking good so far, Alpha. Can't wait to see the finished revised version.

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    The Bounty Hunter is the one who chases my main heroine Melianth around trying to capture her so they can collect their reward though they later become friends with her.

    The EZTOTH Assassin is an anarchist who hates the Cimmerian government and will do anything to bring it down. They assassinate any person that is related to the government.

    Eternia Wing Commander is in charge of the Knights of Liberty mercenary organization. They are very close friends with Melianth and known her since she was very little. They are the highest commander in charge and are both Melianth's and Ranathia's superior.

    Protagonist Eternia Wing is the main hero of the story who just joined the Knights of Liberty passing the Eternia Wing exam to acquire themselves a Etherium Weapon and now has feelings for Melianth and her troubled past.

    Protagonist Eternia Wing's Rival is the one who is in love with Melianth and wants to get the main hero kicked out of the Eternia Wings so he can have her all to himself.

    Knights of Liberty Mercenary is a mercenary for hire that is not related to the Knights of Liberty, but does have affiliation since they cooperate with their organization. This person runs the famous Crimson Fang Mercenary Corps.

    Chieftain of Egis Resources and Development is the one who researches the egis that Melianth or Ranathia, my other OC, bring back to them. They're more of a supporting role and accompany them on their missions to recover Egis.

    Anzalath Elite is a spy who works for the Cimmerian Empire that is temporarily cooperating with the Knights of Liberty Peace Corps. They later turn on their homeland seeing he has taken a liking to Ranathia.

    Main Heroine's Adviser is the person who advises Melianth and debriefs her on her missions. They also accompany her and assist her along the way.

    Secondary Heroine's Officer is Ranathia's commander. They are distrusting toward Ranathia at first due to her race, but over time have grown an affection for her. Even one which cannot be easily explained.

    Does that help, Alpha?
    Last edited by Armaclite; 01-03-2013 at 05:40 PM.


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    AAAAAAAAAARGH!!! SO MUCH TO READ I GET HEADACHE !!!!! XC
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    I concur. Lucia's Avatar
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    I CAN SEE THIS WALL OF TEXT FROM SPACE.

    WOW.

    It's not a bad thing, though. (Perhaps you should put it in spoilers, though.) I can tell you put a lot of thought into this. Consider me interested...once I'm able to read every detail. That could take a while.

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    At Lucia: Thank you. I spent months working on this project. Took me almost half a year to get all the ideas set together to form an actual storyline. Yeah, I do need to put it in spoilers too. That's one thing I forgot and thank you for reminding me.

    One second and I'll do that.


    "No Good without Evil. No Love without Hate. No Innocence without Lust. I am Darkness.

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    Taste death's cold Embrace."

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    I am actually taking the liberty of doing that ^^;

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    No offense meant really. Just hoping that people might not get too distraught of the WALL OF TEXT!!!
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    Lady in Black Armaclite's Avatar
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    At Witchchild: No offense taken and Lucia just reminded me of what I was forgetting so now I put everything in hiders to make it a lot easier to read. I knew I was forgetting something and I couldn't put my finger on it.


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    Taste death's cold Embrace."

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    Shall I just PM you the Hider-ed one then?
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    Lady in Black Armaclite's Avatar
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    At WitchChild: I don't mind. Go ahead and PM me. I'm open to all questions or any suggestions you may have.


    "No Good without Evil. No Love without Hate. No Innocence without Lust. I am Darkness.

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    ...and thus to remain intertwined with end's everlasting Tranquility.

    Taste death's cold Embrace."

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    I concur. Lucia's Avatar
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    I'll try to make a character profile as soon as possible. I really must compliment you for all the work you put into it, though. Also, is there any restriction on which race can do what? I'm thinking of taking the role of the advisor, but I just want to make sure I don't pick a race that would be completely out of the question.

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