Paradise Lost: A Science Fiction Epic (OOC)

[Zephyr116]

That's what I read.

Anyway, I am 952 words into my first post and will probably make some CS edits. Writing my post, I've noticed a few elements I cut out when I shortened my CSs; namely the relationship between the characters.

[Wing Chun]

Tell us about their relationship in your posts, flashbacks/whatever.

So practically for our first post kind of start off the day as normal but leave room for interruption that would catch our characters off guard? lol

In a nutshell, yes.

[ElRey]

Tried to get started with a bang, for both entertainment purposes and cause I was kind of at a loss on how to describe a "typical day" for someone like Casio.

I realize wonton violence and being a total badass isn't the focus of the RP, rest assured as I develop a better feel for who the character is there will be more internal growth to go with whatever gore and gunplay occurs.

As always, if there are any issues let me know and I'll tweak it but as it stands I feel it gives a decent snapshot of the type of person he is.

[Zephyr116]

Elrey, nice post, but I believe we were supposed to summarize the previous post in our own.

EDIT: Post up. Tell me of any errors, since there are likely many. Not much happened in the post. I did set in in the early morning, but I can fast forward it to the desired time in my next post if necessary.

Everything seems so much larger in MS Word.

[ElRey]

It said in the instructions that you do not need to summarize the GM's posts.

[Zephyr116]

Shame on me for not noticing.

Well, I did anyway.

[Wing Chun]

I enjoyed these first 2 posts a lot; they were captivating, entertaining, and satisfying.

I was quite shocked at the insignificant amount of provocation Casio was able to take before killing a man, but at the same time I was sympathizing with the situation to some degree.

I'm already intrigued by the relationship/story between Kate and Alec, I look forward to reading more about them.

[ElRey]

Yeah. Sort of comes with the territory, despite appearances Casio is still very much the reluctant killer type, but he's a product of his environment. He's good at what he does and he knows that few would hesitate if placed in his position. Dog eat dog kinda thing.

Really looking forward to the rest of the openers from the others

[Werther]

My post is coming up very soon.

[Valtyr]

I am 947 words done and MAYBE half way done hahaha but I am tired and I am noticing that my writing is beginning to ramble on so I am gonna sleep and finish it up tomorrow. So expect my intro tomorrow lol