Legend of Zelda: The Templar Crusade reboot

[Droneboy]

Name: Alzan Kamarizo

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Imagine his eyes are blue :/

Age: 42

Race: Allorna

Race info: The Allorna come from the same line that hylians do, except when the Hyrule empire was made, they went their own way to live deep in the earth and in the mountains. Eventually they became completely without pigment, except their eyes are all bright blue, and almost glow in the dark. Alzan is literally the first Allorna to come back from their new home since then. And don't mistake their small build for weakness. From living underground, they are resistant to poisonous gases. And also they have super-fast eye adjustment, meaning sudden flashes don't blind them as easily. This is do to the fact they have extremely advanced technology, and are always welding things into place, along with sharpening things with a grindstone. They have ((is it okay to make them the most advanced?)), but its all put into improving their way of life, since they are completely safe in their mountains and tunnels. Like the hyliens, they can master anything, magic and combat wise. But most of them prefer Shadow magic, due to the dark caves they can use to practice the magic. But there are also under-water rivers and lava flows to practice fire and water magic with. Air is not distant in their home either. Seldom few have mastered the other magics, but some have chosen their paths. Due to their quick fingers and slight hands, they could be masters of stealth and lockpicking. But it is forbidden to practice such arts. The Allorn live to great ages, the eldest one living now at 160 years.

Skills: Alzan is a master of the arts and crafts. He's always making something with his quick fingers. He also started training when he first learned about the outside world, determined to get out into it one day. He is a moderate swordsman and marksman (with bow and rifle). He also has cat-like reflexes.

Magic Abilities: Mastery of Shadow Magic.

Weapons: An elven-like sword made of mithril ((His family was the most renown and rich of the mountain he originates from.)) Longbow. (no guns, guessed that they would not be as advanced as the allornas)

Inventory: His sword, his longbow, supplies for a good few weeks. Wears a white silk tunic that looks much like what link's did in the games.

Bio: Alzan was born into a family of a very high status. He lived a good life and was able to train when he became the age of 8, as was neccesary as tradition. Soon he found out about the outside world, where dangerous beasts and men with evil intentions lurked. This just made him want to go out there more.
When he was about 15, his parents died in a cave-in while they were inspecting a mine. His uncle, Allakon, took him in. Allakon also lived the high life, but it was different. He pride himself in his artifacts from the outside world, and owned the most famous museum across their nation. But soon Alzan began dreaming of the outside world again, even more now that he lived with his uncle. One day the allorna were going to do something they had never done before. They sent out a caravan filled with goods rare to the surface, and Alzan's uncle went up to him, and said "Alzan, my boy. I am too old to follow them, but here," He said, giving him enough supplies for a good few weeks, "Take this, and lead you own life out there. And should you ever come back, I want you to have something for me to listen to! A story of the outside world." His uncle went back to their home, and Alzan went out that large door, and now the rest of his life begins.

[mast3rlinkx]

One problem here. Hylians sort of came after Hyrule, not before. Before Hyrule was created, the world was barren and lifeless. The Goddesses created the Hylians after they created Hyrule.

[Droneboy]

after the hyrule kingdom was made.

[Mogtaki]

Hmmm it's certainly not bad, but why is his eyes red when you said they were blue in the race's profile?

[Droneboy]

... i just noticed that yeah.. just imagine the eyes are blue :/

[Mogtaki]

Ah right okay x) Might want to say that in appearance so somebody doesn't just look at your CS then write about how red their eyes are.

Otherwise, everything seems fine to me, just gotta wait for Caboose.

[Colonel Caboose]

perfectly acceptable by my standards. I shall put up the IC momentarily.

[Droneboy]

there we go! but, do you think he would be fine if i make them the most advanced?

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ah
wait so they can be the most advanced too?

[Mogtaki]

The most advanced stuff is usually left for character development x)

[Lenaya]

The way I see it is, most advanced or not, if I stick you you're gonna bleed, and If I stick you twice you're gonna die =D If you're killable, it's fine, but don't get to the point of god-modding xD;