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    Eos OOC


    The year is 10,015 CE and Confederacy scouts have “discovered” a new planet, known to the locals as Kowar. As the Confederacy starts to deepen relations with the new planet, rumors start to surface, slipping like oil through the citizenry of the three planets so that no one is sure of their origins. The whispers speak of an unimaginable treasure on the dark side of Kowar, where the natives refuse to go, and the ruins of an ancient civilization so powerful and terrible the mere thought makes even the stoutest of heart tremble. Of course, the whole story is just rumor, and very little is actually known about the planet of Kowar or the Kowari themselves. It’s likely superstition and you’d have to be mad to chase after it, no matter how incredible the treasure is rumored to be…

    Welcome to the expedition. You have been hired by the eccentric and nauseously wealthy heir of Infinity Enterprises, Charlotte Young, to board the spacecraft Eos and travel to the distant planet of Kowar. There you will seek the great treasure, a treasure most of you are pretty sure doesn’t exist. Most of you are convinced you’re working for a nutcase with too much money and time on her hands and that this job is easy cash. But you will soon find that this ‘easy expedition’ won’t turn out quite so simply as you had hoped…

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    Position: Zee Captain

    Name: Tychus Maverick

    Age: 33

    Gender: Male

    Species: Human



    Personality:
    Dutiful, pragmatic, Machiavellian, bitter, quick to anger but responsible. Proud, which can be a disadvantage sometimes and lead to hubris. Tychus is very introvert and does not open up to anyone. Oh, and he has trust issues.

    Strengths/Talents:
    Quick wit - resourceful
    Keeps a cool head under pressure
    Military experience as a lieutenant and later gunship pilot.
    Confidence - self-consciousness is for the weak-willed who are not convinced of their own abilities and potential.

    Weaknesses/Vices:
    Not very likeable
    Likes the drink
    Direct (others would say impolite - in yo' face yo)
    Obstinate - sometimes translates into being old-fashioned
    At times a narcist - Tychus knows a lot and is well-travelled and read, he will not hesitate to let you know his opinion is the best opinion.
    Criminal past


    Equipment:

    • Pistol & small-arm
    • Suit & helmet (titanium plated withstanding heat and cold - assume all crew has these)
    • Wrist-pad & scanning equipment
    • Logbook (yarr!)
    • Stash of bourbon


    Bio:
    Tychus Maverick is the son of a miner and a factory-worker from Kormesh, Marzan. He did not have many opportunities while growing up and suffered some domestic abuse even. When his mother died he was left to take care of his two little sisters at the age of 14 while their father lost himself in alcohol abuse.

    Fortunately for them they managed to be enrolled into a charity program funded by Infinity Enterprises. Foster families were found for the two girls, while Tychus himself was sent off to a boarding school.

    It was on the annual charity conference where he first met the progeny of their benefactor, Charlotte Young -daughter of Maura Young. For some reason he was charmed by the fresh princess in front of him, congratulating him for successfully enrolling into the Federal University of Higher Knowledge. She joined him there several years later even and the two engaged in a secret relationship to not shock the tabloids.

    However, by then the funds of Maura’s program had run dry. Which strained Tychus to fend for himself and support the costs of his education and accommodations for both his sisters. In spite of the close relationship with Charlotte Young there was no more support from Infinity Enterprises under new management. And Tychus knew Charlotte could do little about it. After two years of exhausting studies and part-time jobs, Tychus fell in with the wrong crowd in an attempt to make sufficient money.

    Before completely graduating, Tychus Maverick was forced to drop out of higher education and engage in smuggling operations for the shady organisation he had been working for. At this point he stopped seeing Charlotte and his sisters, for he refused to put them in jeopardy.

    His way out was joining the military. With his certificate of higher education he enrolled as a junior officer and rose to the rank of lieutenant. Afterwards, after discovering his skills with piloting, he was transferred to the Federal Fleet where he took on the throttle of a gunship.

    However, at the age of 31 the law caught up with him as the empire of the shady character he had worked for came crashing down. Seeing as he was Marzan-born, he was trialed on Marzan as well and sentenced to the penitentiary institution they referred to as ‘the Pit’. Only recently did he get out due to arm-twisting and the pulling of strings…



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    Position: Local Historian

    Name: T'si Lokani

    Age: 28

    Gender: Male

    Species: Kowari



    Appearance: T'si has the usual reddish-brown skin that is common among his people and he has deep read spots all over his body that resemble the old leopards of Earth. He stands at 6'1" and only weighs about 160 lbs. His long, black hair naturally drops down to his mid-back and he always keeps it in a loosely braided ponytail. His orb-shaped eyes are a deep red. His nose is wide and relatively flat, while his ears are smaller, at least for a Kowari. He has a scar on his left arm, large puncture wounds from an animal. He wears a simple, black cargo pants, a white t-shirt, and black finger-less gloves.

    Personality: T'si is a bit of an oddball among his people, even his fellow historians. His passion for the galaxy radiates off of his fascination with pretty much everything. He has a strong sense of danger and adventure because he knows that it yields the best rewards. Since he is still so young, he feels like he has a lot to prove and is always eager to undertake a new expedition. He has true courage, not an absence of fear, but the mindset to ignore it in order to do what must be done. He tends to be much more vocal than most Kowari, who are relatively quiet.

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    Equipment:
    Journal
    Personal rations, mostly for Ma'nico.

    Sample containers


    Bio:
    The expedition knows little about T'si, it was hard enough finding a Kowari willing to venture into the dark side. He grew up to be a fisherman on the coastal territories, but as he delved into the rumors and stories of the dark side he found a love in the history of Kowar. Kowar has seen such a terrible war and nobody truly knows the consequence of it. He got involved with the underground, a group of ambitious Kowari and the only ones on the planet that were willing to do something about the mysterious past that was taken from them.

    T'si is a young scholar and highly mistrusted among his people. He has taken two expeditions into the dark side before and each time they have only made a few kilometers in. Usually, his team would lose their nerves and run off which doesn't leave him with much choice but to turn back. He has a good idea what resides in the dark side and hopes the crew of this Eos will have the guts he has been searching for to take him the whole way. Overall, he has been mysterious, but extremely friendly to the Eos crew and likes it that way. The less they know, at this point, the better.

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    Position: Pilot/Driver

    Name: Wes Hammel

    Age: 30

    Gender: Male

    Species: Human

    Appearance: Wes stands at a modest 5' 8", not particularly large for a man his size, though he was a fairly muscled build due to his extensive time laboring on machines and operating heavy equipment. His hair is a deep brown color, often cut short in a crew-cut fashion as not to inhibit his sight while operating vehicles, and a full goatee of matching colors. Typically spending his time outdoors, as he makes many trips to Goa and Marzan alike (prior to being brought onboard for this mission), he has a fairly tanned complexion, and his vibrant green eyes are easily noticeable, being the most prominent feature of his otherwise average appearance. He wears a standard issue Federation pilot's jumpsuit when he is operating a vehicle, navy blue in color with white stripes along the heart beneath the Federation insignia. In his downtime he typically is seen in an under-armor styled shirt, a red, grease stained ball cap which he has donned his "Lucky cap", a pair of baggy jeans and combat boots. He always carries a small backpack on his back, regardless of where he is, full of simple tools. Never know when you might need them.

    Personality: Wes is playful and sarcastic by nature, almost childish. He loves to crack jokes and lighten the mood, even in the most inconvenient moments, and often is chastised for his inability to watch what he says. His mantra, "Humor is the best medicine." largely dictates his actions, he always vies for a laugh to ease up tense moments. His sarcastic side and tendency towards being a loudmouth has earned him quite a few warnings from his superiors, mostly from his smart-aleck comments. He is quick to point out the obvious, and is usually the first to land a retort if someone lets a less-than-well thought comment slip. While rude comments may slip out, he is overall a kind individual, offering words of encouragement. He has no issue with other races, extending discontent only towards those he feels deserves it. He is not quick to judge, but certainly quick to speak. He has somewhat of a cocky side to him as well due to his ability as a pilot, not too often is he met with a mission out of his capabilities. It's also to note Wes seems to display some signs of insecurity, and his outbursts may be a result of a deep-rooted need for attention and approval.


    Strengths/Talents:
    - Exceptional pilot
    - Friendly
    - Trained in small arms, as is standard for most Non-Civilian Federation pilots


    Weaknesses/Vices:
    - Inability to hold his tongue, recieves a lot of heat from his superiors for it
    - Insecurity makes him anxious sometimes, making getting to him difficult]
    - Overconfidence in his abilities, rarely does he meet a challenge he can't overcome
    - Finding hate coming hard, he can blindly trust sometimes
    - Moderately skilled mechanic, needs others to fix things often

    Equipment:
    - Federation issued PDW-42 (think a futuristic P90 variant)
    - Small satchel of basic tools
    - Comm Helmet (When in ship/vehicle)
    - Hunter's Knife

    Bio:
    Wes was born on the Federation Space Station to human parents, both of with were involved in the Federation (his father was a pilot as well, his mother studied medicine on Goa). Due to his mother's absences, he spent a great deal of time with his father, developing an intrigue in mechanics at an early age. The innerworkings of these ships, which could traverse nearly any terrain effortlessly, astounded the young boy. He would spend what time he wasn't in school or with friends in a hangar, observing mechanics and pilots go about their daily routines. On occassion, if one allowed him to, he'd sit right with the crew and watch them work, always asking questions surprisingly complex for his age. So it was no surprise that when he came of age, Wes enlisted to be a pilot, only too eager to follow in his father's footsteps. Thanks to his father's previous service, he was accepted into the ranks relatively easily, many children of his father's friends being amongst his peers. This was the first time he developed any real relationships, his childhood argely having been focused on simply spending time around these machines.
    At the start of Wes' training two things were made apparent: While he was fairly talented at repairing and maintaining these machines, his operating skills were sub-par at best. This was largely in part due to his chatty nature, becoming easily distracted while operating. Over time, though the chatiness far from subsided, he learned to multi-task more efficiently, and though many wished he'd control his mouth as well as he did the vessels he commanded, they were pleased with his progress. After three years of nothing but hangar duty he was finally offered his first mission to Goa, a trade envoy. The trip went smoothly, he had no issue on his first true mission and was given high marks for his efforts. Up until this point, he has taken on various jobs, trading, transporting goods and on occasion troops.
    NPC:
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    Last edited by Vena Sera IV; 01-04-2013 at 09:02 PM.

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    Up From the Ashes Phoebas's Avatar
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    Looks good Vena Sera, my only question is with his ability to fix things. Jorick is working on a CS for the engineer, whose job is to fix the vehicles, as it were. It is understandable that Wes would have some mechanical skill, I just want to make sure it is known that Jorick's character will have superior knowledge/expertise within the RP. Besides that it looks great. Do you mind sending me a writing sample by PM? It can be something you have already written up for a previous RP.

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    I'll alter things then, make an average mechanic with exceptional operator skills and Jorick is welcome to the former. And certainly, I'll have a draft up for you momentarily.

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    Position: Engineer

    Name: Lincoln Kingston

    Age: 45

    Gender: Male

    Species: Human

    Appearance: Lincoln posesses the looks of one well on his way to becoming a stereotypical mad scientist. His hair is graying and very thin on the top, always sticking out in disarray no matter what he tries to do to fix it. His face is rather wrinkled for a man of only forty-five years and his eyes seem to hold both great knowledge and a distinct lack of caring about other people, when they're not unfocused as if his mind is off on another planet. Lincoln is a rather spindly man, looking almost emaciated. He's on the tall side of average height, but he tends to slouch and make himself look shorter: a posture gained from countless hours spent hunched over a workbench.

    For clothing and such, Lincoln doesn't make any great effort to look nice. His wardrobe consists of very plainly colored and cut garments, never bothering to keep up with fashion or even look very presentable most of the time. He long ago affected the style of wearing a white lab coat, though his lack of caring about presentation plus his frequent work with machines (and thus dirty parts, oil, grease, and so forth) has turned it into a grey and stained lab coat instead.

    Personality: Lincoln tends to keep to himself, quiet and reserved. When he does bother to open his mouth it will be either something rather intelligent or something horribly socially awkward; experiences with reactions to the latter have led to him being even more quiet than his introverted nature would account for. More often than not he can be found in his workshop or some other secluded area tinkering with a bit of machinery or reading a weighty science text of some kind. Lincoln does not like people and will often make remarks wishing death upon them for a variety of reasons; the few people that he does tend to get along with are those who are also quiet types who keep to themselves and those with enough intellect that he feels they can at least attempt to keep up with his own, which are rather few and far between.

    Strengths/Talents:

    Genius. Lincoln can make some very smart people look like drooling chimps compared to his vast intellect. He is the kind of man who might come along only once or twice in a generation, one whose brain seems to operate at levels an order of magnitude greater than simple humans. He is not being vain and overconfident when he claims to be the most intelligent man alive, for he could very well be correct.

    Mechanical and electrical engineering expertise and mastery. If you need something repaired or created, Lincoln can probably get it done. He is no average tinkerer, he's the kind of man who can make crafting a machine look like an artform. He will regularly go above and beyond the requests for repair or creation that are given to him, largely because he can't help but think of improvements on old designs and wish to put them to the test; it is a very, very rare occurence for these experimentations to end up malfunctioning, and even then he can probably fix the problem with ease once you bring it up to him.

    Passable skill in a variety of other fields. Though Lincoln's main interest is in the fields of engineering, he dabbles in other fields on the side as well. Atop the basics of mathematics, physics, robotics, and such that he uses all the time in his engineering pursuits, Lincoln is also fairly skilled in the areas of chemistry, quantum mechanics, nanorobotics, and computer programming. These are not to the degree of his mastery of engineering and related sciences, but still enough to impress.

    Well read. When not fiddling with a new machine, Lincoln can usually be found reading. While his typical reading material is of a scientific nature, he also reads other things; rarely will he bother with fiction, but he has been known to read historical, philosophical, and other less sciencey works now and again. This rarely serves any practical purpose, but he does know a little bit about a lot of things and could probably hold an intelligent conversation on any topic.

    Very logical thinker. Problem solving is this guy's forte, it's what he does with his life. All of Lincoln's engineering and scientific pursuits have been drivent by logical thought and wanting to solve some issue/improve things. He's definitely the person you want thinking about how to solve any kind of problem you come across.


    Weaknesses/Vices:
    Introverted and socially awkward. Lincoln keeps to himself and is not very adept at social interactions, leading to potentitally awkward moments or even alienation if he screws up too badly. He won't necessarily shun contact with other people, and there are a select few he is moderately comfortable around, but he would be perfectly happy to live the rest of his life in solitude.

    Unemotional. Lincoln has a hard time expressing or symphathizing with emotions, such that he comes off as something of a robot to most people.

    Physically weak. Lincoln doesn't do much in the way of exercise, he's not strong or fast, he's fairly lacking in endurance. Any average human could easily take him in a fight; hell, even most Goans could give him a sound thrashing. Defintely not the guy you want to rely on in a fight.

    Misanthrope. Or, well, not quite hating humanity, Lincoln harbors some hate for all living beings. He would be rather happy to see all organic life destroyed and replaced with the perfection of AI and machines, which leads too...

    Omnicidal ambitions. Lincoln harbors a dream to one day wipe out all living things and replace them with machines. He believes that life is the worst thing to happen to the universe, but that sentient beings are necessary for the universe to be able to observe and interact with itself. Biological life comes with horrid things like greed and ambition and the capacity to destroy whole planets through the unreined practice of those two traits (such as happened to Earth). Lincoln dreams to craft the perfect AI, lacking in any artifact of human emotion but possessing the same (or superior) intelligence and capacity for creation and innovation; once such an AI is created, he would want to systematically destroy living things and replace them with machines controlled by this AI. It's a rather insane goal to have, but they do say genius and insanity are two sides of the same coin.


    Equipment:
    Lincoln:
    Emergency tool kit (basic tools, scanner, extra wiring, basically just the stuff needed for quick field work)
    Custom built wrist mounted computer/communicator/scanner hybrid
    Custom built wrist mounted mobile electronic library containing copies of Lincoln's full collection of books
    Modified laser pistol (same power for less energy, gyroscopic balance assistance, and computerized aiming aid)


    Chut:
    Full tool kit
    Explosives kit
    Custom built crossbow (a contrivance of Lincoln's, can shoot lasers or standard bolts depending on the setting)
    Quiver of bolts (mostly normal metal bolts, a few modified with explosive tips)


    Bio:
    Lincoln was born and raised on the Federation Space Station, the child of two mechanical engineers who worked on maintaining the station. From a young age it was clear that he was a brillant child, learning to read up to a third grade level before he entered school thanks to the educational toys and books his parents got for him in lieu of boring old building blocks and such. He was accelerated through school to attempt to place him at an appropriate level, but he kept on learning faster than they could teach him. By the age of ten Lincoln was already surpassing his parents' skills in the field of engineering, a prospect with both excited and chagrined them. At the age of fourteen became the youngest person in living memory to graduate the Federal University for Higher Knowledge with a degree in Mechanical Engineering. By the age of twenty he had also acquired a bevy of additional degrees in Electrical Engineering, Mathematics, and Physics before he tired of the academic world and devoted himself to a more solitary pursuit of knowledge.

    Due to his many innovations and improvements to various machines and systems in place on the Federation Space Station over the next handful of years, Lincoln was in a way taken in by the government. He was not hired in an official capacity (because he refused), but they paid him a weekly stipend for continuing to work on things as he saw fit and as they requested. He became rather renowned in intellectual circles for his work, such as the creation of a new water recycling filter system that took a quarter of the time to work compared to the previous model, enhancements to vehicles, and tons of upgrades to weaponry courtesy of the more militaristically minded folks coming to call at his workshop.

    Lincoln Kingston is also known as one of the poorest rich men ever, due to the fact that his variety of inventions to make daily chores easier (sold under the name of the Kingston Corporation, run by some savvy businessmen who saw profit in the genius's work) garner him hefty profits but all of that money ends up being sunk into new research and experimentation rather than going toward any material wealth. Kingston is something of a household name around the Confederacy due to this company, but most people aren't aware that he does more important work than make automated clothes folding dressers and robotic servants that respond to over a hundred voice commands, as the advertisements make much ado about.

    There is not much more public knowledge about Lincoln. Most only know him for the commercialized side of his inventions, some know he is a brilliant inventor and engineer. None are quite sure what the man's personality is like, other than that he keeps to himself and has no patience for fools. He has no living family, his only known associates are business contacts and a Marzai assistant. A detail of this man's life, such as one might see in a personnel file, would contain a long list of achievements and creations whilst having almost nothing in the personal life section.

    NPC:
    Chut, a Marzai, has worked as Lincoln's assistant for the past few years. He is large, thick, and green skinned as most of his race is, posessing the typical dark eyes of his people. Chut has no obvious distinguishing marks, but he was given an appropriately sized white lab coat upon being hired to work as Lincoln's assistant. Where the human cares not for his clothing, Chut keeps his pristine and white as best as he is able; this is a rather abnormal piece of clothing for a Marzai, so most people can tell who he is from a long distance away.

    Chut does not talk much, a trait which his employer found rather agreeable. It is not that he doesn't like talking or is particularly introverted, but rather that he is rather deliberate and chooses not to speak unless he has something worthwhile to say. Those who have engaged him in conversation have found Chut to posess a fine intellect and a strong philosophical bent, often ending up discussing topics of morality and the like despite starting out talking about something very simple.

    His past isn't extremely exciting: he worked for a mining operation on Marzan as their lead demolitions man before circumstances led him to leave and move to the Federation Space Station. There he found little work for a Marzai with knowledge of explosives and enough of geology to get by using them to blast out a mine. He did, however, find a quite possibly insane little old human who needed someone strong to do heavy lifting around his workshop. Chut hasn't been exactly thrilled to be doing manual labor, but he has the benefit of being paid ludicrously well for the simple work and having access to many avenues for education and perhaps future employment through Lincoln's library and his various business connections. Despite Chut's desire to feel more useful in his work, he hasn't left for greener pastures because he's grown attached and somewhat protective of the little man. He does hope this expedition will provide him with a chance to prove his worth as more than a set of strong arms, but he's content remaining in the shadows if that is his lot in life.
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    Up From the Ashes Phoebas's Avatar
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    Okey doke. First things first. Vena Sera, you are very much approved. Your writing is more than satisfactory. Welcome aboard!

    @Jorick, I think it's fine that your character is antisocial, and I also think it's good that he's a misanthrope genius, it will certainly make things interesting. As to the sciences thing, maybe if you toned it down a bit? It will make for good RP conflict if your character knows enough to be critical, but the scientist will probably be an expert in whatever their chosen field is. Maybe take out biology? Since he hates life anyway? It looks great over all however. Wonderfully done.
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    Is it too late for me to fill out the position as head of security?

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    I was planning to make my character a sentient android engrained with an evolving AI system. I'm assuming androids exist?

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    That sounds good in theory. Go ahead and write up a CS and I'll take a look see.

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