Build-A-RP OOC

[EbonyNightmare]

Thank you! ^-^

[greenseal72]

tried to post earlier,it did not work ,so here i go again.

name:Mical Huasenok.
age:25.
gender:Male.
time period:3972AD.
appearance:6'1 and incredibly skinny,not very muscly,black hair,and very spindly(but nimble)his eyes are a light grayish blue color.
Personality:He's very kind but has absolutely no social skills what-so-ever,and thus doesn't interact with people much(of which on the planet im sure he will need to by this i mean the place their dropped into).
history:at a young age he was recognized as a intellect by the government in the u.s(naturally this is in 3972ad,of which i believe in the interest check,you approved, because it is technically a point in time in a actual location)he was then secluded from the world to pursue knowledge. It is because of this he has no social skills.
strengths:intellect,he is able to calculate things very fast and is incredibly knowledgeable about many things
weakness:Cant do much physically,and has no team skills.

[greenseal72]

also i assume the matter of being from the future is ok because you said it would be in the "interest check".

[EbonyNightmare]

Pern is a fictional world, and it's from a story. And, this is low-Casual. In your CS, you're not following the requirements..

Not accepted, unless you fix all that.

[greenseal72]

sorry i had just read some of the book,i meant to type pask,so sorry for that little mistake!,also could you point out the main details other than that mistake about pern(sorry for that little incident)so id the future thing ok?,if not ill go for a french revolution soldier

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i edited it,tell me if there's anything wrong afterwards,and if so tell me what,once again sorry for the pern thing that was a accident.

[BigBullCrocker]

Name: Adamska Reznov "Revolver Ocelot" "Ocelot"
Gender: Male
Age: 25
What Time Period You're From: Cold war
Appearance:
Personality: Serious, devious though if someone is being harsh to a lady he will step in, he believes in the old ways of respecting ladies and hating the americans.
History: Adamska was born into a military family. His father fought in world war 2 and his mother made bullets for the spetznas. He was taught how to use a revolver from a young age by his father and before he knew it, he was using three revolvers to trick shot cans. He would juggle the guns and juggle the cans in the air each time he would try to beat his record. When he was of age he took a security job during the cold war. He's killed his share of American spies. The last thing he remembers before waking up in the strange place is stepping into the new top secret experimental teleporter the Russians made.
Strengths: His revolver skills are unmatched, he can lead a team through the darkest of situations
Weaknesses: He would follow an enemy to the ends of the earth to kill them, he is too aggressive at times
Other: an*

[ActRaiser]

Name: Adamska Reznov "Revolver Ocelot" "Ocelot"
Gender: Male
Age: 25
What Time Period You're From: Cold war
Appearance:
Personality: Serious, devious though if someone is being harsh to a lady he will step in, he believes in the old ways of respecting ladies and hating the americans.
History: Adamska was born into a military family. His father fought in world war 2 and his mother made bullets for the spetznas. He was taught how to use a revolver from a young age by his father and before he knew it, he was using three revolvers to trick shot cans. He would juggle the guns and juggle the cans in the air each time he would try to beat his record. When he was of age he took a security job during the cold war. He's killed his share of American spies. The last thing he remembers before waking up in the strange place is stepping into the new top secret experimental teleporter the Russians made.
Strengths: His revolver skills are unmatched, he can lead a team through the darkest of situations
Weaknesses: He would follow an enemy to the ends of the earth to kill them, he is too aggressive at times
Other:

Um, I think that this isn't Earth, I only used some Earth like countries as an example for my character because familiarity helps me to form RP ideas.

[EbonyNightmare]

@greenseal: First, 'cant' is not properly punctuated. I don't care about errors from time to time, but you don't consistently use proper punctuation and capitalization.

Also, the future thing was fine, but it has to be a civilization we know of today, unless you'd like to describe the whole civilization and such to me.


Everyone:
Rules have been updated, please reread them.

[ActRaiser]

Whoah, I'm a little confused EbonyNightmare.

[BigBullCrocker]

Wait are you talking to me(Ebony)?