Name: Maxwell Thomson
Age: 17 and 3 moths
Powers: Archery,Biokenesis, Photokinesis.
Strengths: Making people lose control of their bodies (short range and does not last very long) Healing his wounded friends to get them back into shape fast. Very good long range fighter
Weaknesses: Can’t fight efficiently if the enemy is close to him, is not the fastest runner and can quickly be tired out.
Appearance: Usually wears white shirts and jeans, around 180 pounds and 5`9 high. His hair is black as the night and eyes green as gems.
Weapon: Bow and arrows (Flying sparrow) a wooden bow witch is enchanted with a paralyzing poison. So every shoot fired is made poison.
Personality: Maxwell is a caring and takes time out of his every day to help people, this of how he meet most of his friend’s. His loves music and plays Piano, before he knew he was a demigod he was bragging about himself being so good a Piano player that he made people go into a hypnotic state. He is a very out spoken person, be mean to his friends and watch as hell fires rise in his eyes. His ADHD makes it difficult for him to focus so his mind is at most times somewhere else then where it should be,. He tries to be a ladies man, but he is a mess around girls.
Maxwell was born a only child, and stayed that way for a very long time, he lived with his mother Raven in a small apartment just south of New York city. His mother tried everything to get him into a good school, but nobody would take a kid that had his issues.He could not keep focused for long periods of time, never learned to read well or spell. His mom told him it was okay and that it was nothing to be ashamed of being what he called himself a stupid nothing. He felt like nobody could ever like a kid like him and that the only reason his mother still had him was because she had to. He knew his mother loved him and only wanted what was best for him, but he felt like he was making her life difficult. The only joy he had in life was singing to himself and how ever to happened to hear him.
Then one day they were at a school for music and fine art and Maxwell sat down at a Piano and started playing. He was a natural talent and the school took him under it wing. He felt that someone finally accepted him and liked him. Quickly he got an audience that was listening to his songs. Then one day when he was playing for himself a kid came up to him and asked if he wanted to be his friend. This kid was Roger and Maxwell did not know it at the time, but this was going to be his best friend. They ended up spending all day at school together and when they had the chance the nights to. Roger was a always happy and made Maxwell feel better when he was blue, Roger also was the only one who seemed interested in knowing him and not just his music.
When Maxwell turned 14 he saw a kid getting beat up by some guy from his school, he ran over and yelled for them to stop, they didn't stop. This was one huge mistake by them, Maxwell placed his fist right in the jaw of the biggest of the bullies and the split quickly after. This was how Maxwell meet Henry, a kid that was the same age as Maxwell deep blue eyes and a cute smile. Henry had really low self image and Maxwell felt like it was him before he noticed his gift for music. Maxwell, Roger and Henry turned into their own little group, they spent every waking moment together and had loots of fun and they also looked out for each other.
Just a year after he had started school is mother married a guy from the marine, his name was Gordon and it did not take long before Maxwell felt like this was his new father. Together Gordon and Raven got a child named Elis. Elise was a wonderful kid and she was in fact the only girl other than his mom Maxwell could get close to without stumbling in his own words. He was rather a mess around girls, but still they came to hear him play and Maxwell did not mind that at all.
Around his 16 year birthday he was attacked one the way home from school, he was attacked by a gargoyle and hadn’t it been for a his friend Roger he would have been killed. Roger turned out to be a satyre and he killed the gargoyle fast and then took Maxwell home to tell the story of how his father was a Greek god, under this conversation a bow and arrow came over Maxwell’s head, Apollo claimed Maxwell as his on. Soon after a rather heated conversation with his mom about why she never told him he was a demigod Maxwell was sent to camp half blood
Hope its okay (2nd change is done)