Well, I'm planning on writing a book. It's very optimistic and ambitious but I think that if I pace myself, and write piece by piece I might just get through it. I have a plot and I've been working on it here and there for the past couple of days.
I'm going to be posting my installments here, most likely a post will compose of a page book wise. But that might change from time to time. Anyway I would much appreciate any thoughts, criticisms or ideas for me to include into this book and it's story, most of all I think I would want people to tell me how they perceive the story so far. I do actually reveal the ending and some important points below so if you don't want to know don't read beyond, however if your particularly good at separating pretending the story hasn't been spoiled for you I want to know if you can obviously see the twists coming and if it's engaging ect. And of course if not, how I can make it so.
I hope everyone who reads on enjoys! below is my current story plan and such if you want to see the story and what it entails, however I will write a synopsis of the storyline so you don't have to read the plan and spoil stuff before you get to know the actual storyline. That will probably be up tomorrow.
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Pariah's & Paragon's
Antagonist - Pannan The Necromancer
Protagonist - Kagan the Warrior Priest
Side Character - The head of the local noble house
Side Character - A homeless man with disdain for the townsfolk and especially the Noble house who is willing to help the Necromancer.
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A town is disturbed by ghostly figures ect, one night it goes to far and a carriage escorting the lady of a local house is stopped in the marshes outside the town. The necromancer attacks, killing both the driver and the Lady of the house. The townsfolk find her body but have no idea what it is that killed her, they tell the head of the family, a noble man who is terrified by the news. He sends for a Priest to join the town to help them find out the culprit. They get Kagan, a Warrior priest. Unsettled by the priest the town reluctantly use his help and tell him everything. The priest knows exactly what the problem is, a Necromancer. Who is looking for another of the Ex-Inferis volumes.
Horrified by the fact the townspeople become very selfish and scared. Kagan vows to do his best to get rid of the Necromancer, despite the fact he has never dealt with one before.
Pannan has Volume 2 of Ex inferis, whilst Kagan knows about Necromancers because he read the first Volume. Pannan is obsessed with finding the other volumes because he believes they will increase his power. At some point the two meet and converse, Pannan asks how the Priest knows so much about Necromancers and he replies that he had read Ex inferis. Laughing Pannan asks how the tales of power and the allure of being a bridge between life and death did not persuade the Priest to become a Necromancer himself. He replies that it is not his destiny, he read it to know his enemy because he knew he would meet a Necromancer one day. Finally Kagan states that it didn't matter anyway, the book did not tell of how to become a Necromancer, only what they are, how they do it and...their weakness.
The Priest attacks the Necromancer, a large fight ensues whilst in the library, wrecking the whole building. They finally reach a standstill, with Pannan panting he exclaims that none of what the Priest has said is in the Ex inferis volume. Wide-eyed the Necromancer joins the dots and quietly asks the priest "What Volume of Ex inferis?" The priest not realizing the danger quickly answers 'The First of course!" The Necromancer Once more unleashes his power, but this time with no restraint. "Where is it!!" he yells as he brings the priest to his knees, "Where is the first Volume!" The fight ends, the Priest nearly dead and on his last legs, the Necromancer out of energy and dead on his feet himself after using so much of his power.
Many days pass, allowing the both of them to rest. Kagan, who has the volume on his person is now a direct target and wherever he stays will be targeted by the necromancer. As such he decides that it would be best if he leaves the town so save it's occupants from the crossfire.
Beginning
The attack near the town + the Priest, Kagan, coming to the town to try and help out with the Necromancer
Middle
The confrontations of the Priest and the Necromancer and the development of their characters and the plot. 3 Main developments.
End
The two are thrown into confusion when it is revealed that they are in fact, brothers. Pannan read and took the second Ex inferis volume when he was young after Kagan was given the first to read. In here the Homeless man, who had become a good friend of Pannan's dies at the hands of the Priest, solidifying the Necromancers hate and disdain for his brother.
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24 Chapters (4(5-6-5)4) Roughly 20 pages per Chapter 480 pages
Beggining portion of the book, 4 Chapters that encapsulate the Necromancer and his search for the book which quickly evolves into a confrontation with the Priest.
1) The Attack on the cart in which the lady of the noble house is killed. This marks the arrival of the Necromancer.
2) The townspeople are worried about the deaths and so pressure the head of the noble household to act and involve the Church, they agree and send for one of the higher ranking Priests of the order to arrive from the Capital.
3) This marks the arrival of the Protagonist, Kagan the Warrior Priest. Coming to the town he is told the situation and immediately reveals that a Necromancer is at work. Realizing that this could be his moment he prepares himself to combat the evil at work. At the same time Pannan, the necromancer makes an ally of a homeless man on the street. Willing to help him he shows disdain for the noble house.
4) Pannan's past is revealed somewhat and he explains his purpose at being in the town in depth, he is in search of a book. An ancient volume of the 'Ex inferis' series, using his homeless friend Pannan searches the library but he is told that any book of value would most likely be stored in the personal Library of the noble family that runs the town, all the while he is leaving clues to which the Priest picks up on.
-------------------------- Middle of the book, split into three sections. The first is the encounter between the Necromancer and the Priest. And Pannan traveling back home to learn the origin of the books and why his father had them.
5) Pannan breaks into the library of the noble house, there he is frustrated with the fact he cannot find any books of relevance. The priest who had taken his time to find the necromancer finally shows up at the library and confronts Pannan.
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2) The other two Volumes come into play as Pannan finds the third but the priest get's to the fourth first. With the power of the third Volume the Necromancer is running rampant with new rejuvenating power, but the fourth volume, now in the hands of the priest tells a dark secret that will lead to the ultimate showdown and the fall of the Necromancer
3) At the last, Pannan has been dragged to his knee's by the priest and the power of the last Ex inferis volume. But Pannan searches for the answer to the question he had never asked, why did his father have the Ex-Inferis Volumes. He thought it would be for his training as a Priest, to research his opponent but with all the information in the first Volume what would be the use in the last three? Meanwhile Kagan fights over himself with the allure of the books, alluring him to the powers that he could gain if he used the anthology to become the most powerful Necromancer the world has ever known.
The family of the two brothers.
Father used to be a Priest however he did own the Ex inferis volumes, how did he get them and why did he have them?
Last edited by Everblight; 01-03-2013 at 03:24 PM.
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