So which character in your IC is yours? Both of them, Sieth and Ziek? I just finished your time-line and have to say it's pretty impressive. When I read the part about Sieth leading the Black Hawk Mercenaries in the most recent Kildra civil war it got me interested in his character. Did you plan on playing him? Got any more information on him?
Who's going to play the Heralds of Death or did you plan playing them to move the plot along at points?