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[PaladinFoster]

I need people to write harsh critiques of this, honest, blunt, and hopefully with a little artistic experience backing it.



I'll explain later.

[Squee]

wut. no.

I like it.
Need color.
It fucking sucks, man.

[Christiefries]

I like it. I wish it was in color though.

[Kadaeux]

Got definite potential. Looks interesting. Keep going.

[PaladinFoster]

Maybe I made it too good.

[Cpt Toellner]

Get some background landscape in there bra.

[CidtheKid]

Well, the planet looks kinda wobbly, I guess.

My second thought would be that there's not enough of the small mushrooms. The, uhh, floor thing looks kinda barren as it is. Besides that though, I don't really see much problems, and I guess it would look so freaking wicked with some really bright, neony colouring.

[PaladinFoster]

Good, there are enough flaws. I might improve it on my own time later, but this version is perfect for my needs.

[SmexySpiral]

I like yur mushrooms

[Rose Swan]

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