Page 1 of 3 123 LastLast
Results 1 to 10 of 26

Thread: Aaarg!

  1. #1
    GenghisKuro KuroTenshi's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Here. On this site
    Posts
    15,224

    Aaarg!

    I've written myself into a corner and can't figure out a way to get out >_< I'm trying to finish this one scene for a story but I can't bring myself to write it out. Should I scrap it and try again? Or keep it and listen to some writing inspiring music?









  2. #2
    Harbinger of Mischief Whetfeather's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2012
    Posts
    2,227
    Hmmm. Maybe you could think up tons of awe-inspiring scenes in your head and try to work with those.


    Add me on skype and I might sing to you.



  3. #3
    ♠Class 'A' Offender♠ ♠Ace♠'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2010
    Location
    Last Home of Class.
    Posts
    15,783
    Quote Originally Posted by KuroTenshi View Post
    I've written myself into a corner and can't figure out a way to get out >_< I'm trying to finish this one scene for a story but I can't bring myself to write it out. Should I scrap it and try again? Or keep it and listen to some writing inspiring music?
    Give me a synopsis of what's going on currently.

    Quit while you're behind, new kid.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mephistopheles to the Lord-Faust, Goethe
    Life on earth would not be quite
    so vile had you not given him that shine of heavenly light,
    that he calls Reason, but which he uses, if at all,
    to be more animal than any animal.

  4. #4
    GenghisKuro KuroTenshi's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Here. On this site
    Posts
    15,224
    Quote Originally Posted by ♠Ace♠ View Post
    Give me a synopsis of what's going on currently.
    Okay, um, it's set in a dystopian/lawless world caused by a natural disaster and a group of super human homicidal maniacs known as Chaos (which disbanded when their leader and half the group suddenly disappeared). I have two main characters, one is Jaxon Banks a drifter and the other is Caleb, a guy with amnesia. The trouble I'm having getting past is this little town that they're in is currently being attacked by basically Chaos wanna-be's (think rednecks with heavy artillery) and they have the weapon that belongs to the leader of Chaos. Caleb senses it's there and he's starting to get his memories back but Jaxon is in the dark and thinks he's being an idiot because he's going to confront the rednecks himself with no weapons. Currently Caleb is standing in front of their vehicle, Jaxon is peaking around a wall with a shot gun and I'm stuck.

    Does that help?









  5. #5
    GenghisKuro KuroTenshi's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Here. On this site
    Posts
    15,224
    ?









  6. #6
    Crumpets Grif of Hearts's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2010
    Location
    Black lagoon
    Posts
    39,292
    Shotgun is one word.



    Guild Contests l Guild Guide l Suggestions/Problems l Ask a Comrade

  7. #7
    GenghisKuro KuroTenshi's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Location
    Here. On this site
    Posts
    15,224
    I know it was just a typo >_>









  8. #8
    Nevermore
    Join Date
    Nov 2010
    Posts
    15,560
    Quote Originally Posted by Grif of Hearts View Post
    Shotgun is one word.
    So is Grifspark, but you seem to be missing some letters

    Oh yeah

    I went there, Sparkles.
    So

    Bye

    Is the general gist of it

    Because fuck if I'm typing some poetic fucking bullshit

  9. #9
    Is feeling lucky Foster's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jul 2010
    Posts
    8,195
    Well, 'kickstart my heart' comes to mind.

    Try outlining key events you want to have happen, arrange them as bulletpoints into an order that makes sense, modify or remove events for later so that it all fits, then flesh out with details.

    If more detail is needed, but you can't think of a way to describe something in-line with the IC, use footnotes.

    THE IMPORTANT THING IS TO WRITE THIS DOWN AND RECORD PROGRESS
    "Just drive down that road, until you get blown up [by shells]"
    - General George Patton

    "After several men of the company had been blown up by shells, I noticed that a spirit of uneasiness became dominant."

  10. #10
    The Lop-Eared Urchin Herzinth's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2011
    Location
    With A Cactus
    Posts
    13,685
    Kill people.

    Glory Fades
    95



Page 1 of 3 123 LastLast

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •