Aaarg!

[KuroTenshi]

If there's bullshit advanced technological reasoning behind it, sure, go ahead. I'd still call it really cheesy, but do what you want.

Though walking into harm's way unarmed, which I understand is your character's problem, is probably pretty stupid. Are they the kind to take prisoners? You can make up a reason for them to take him prisoner, and then have him weasel his way out from there.

Is it really that cheesy?

And they would not be successful taking him prisoner >_> super soldier remember?

[Card VII]

Is it really that cheesy?

And they would not be successful taking him prisoner >_> super soldier remember?

I think it is. But you know, that's just me.

Rewrite the scene, but this time have a solution in mind. Maybe have your character use his wit to get out of the situation rather than muscle. Use a little tactics instead of outgunning them.

[KuroTenshi]

I'll try a rewrite

[Antarctic Termite]

I've written myself into a corner and can't figure out a way to get out >_< I'm trying to finish this one scene for a story but I can't bring myself to write it out. Should I scrap it and try again? Or keep it and listen to some writing inspiring music?

Listen to inspiring music anyway.

[♠Ace♠]

Didn't you write out an outline for the story before you began writing?

PointA->B->C?

If you know where you're going, it shouldn't be that hard. I'd suggest making a bulleted list of the main story points and happenings, and then going from there so you'll at least know.

- - - Updated - - -

Is it really that cheesy?

And they would not be successful taking him prisoner >_> super soldier remember?

I think the story is sounding a hell of a lot like RAGE right now.

[KuroTenshi]

What's RAGE?