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    Well lookie here. I haven't got to the chance to update the OP but, NO MORE CHUNNIN! I need to say this. I shall say who's all accepted in a few and put people in the Roster. The only person who has a chunnin coming is

    SoleAccord, drop one of these characters to Genin. Either or. I don't care who. Whoever hits Genin....drop a few of the higher jutsu. At least 2 for Shinji including the S-Rank if he's dropped to Genin.

    Now on to review these too.

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    Told by Holocaust copy/paste wasn't a bad thing.

    One Handed Hand Seals - No or more so they won't be as fast as you say they are. As fast as you do normal handseals.

    Moisture Harvest - Okay...I don't mind it but, I could have sworn concentrating water molecules from the air took up more chakra to do. I could be wrong. I could not be.

    One Thousand Winters Scatter - Wait...so this is a Genjutsu that does both kinds of damage? Because no genjutsu kills outright. Not even Tsukuyomi and that's the strongest.

    Water Release: Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death - Yeah...thousand.....hell no. Drop the number. Not to mention it what, hits every area around you? Correct? If so, that above weakness you mentioned....that outta stay or else you just hit everything around you.

    Ice Release: Frozen Gravestone - So it constantly regenerates? Umm.......how about not. I don't care about it until it regenerates regardless of how much is left over.

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    Conductor - So he can basically repel most jutsu? Also regardless, the amount of chakra of the jutsu is the same amount you would have to use to repel and that's depending on the jutsu used.

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    So is this story meant to be advanced by a cast made up of children? I know you can use NPCs but if a war is going to break out then shouldn't older ninja be Heavily involved? It just seems odd to me that only kids are allowed.

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    Didn't see a limit on Chuunin, you said 'Genin and Chuunin only with 1 jounin', but I guess I'll decide later.


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    One-Thousand Water Needles of Death is canon and has been used before, and easily avoided by a genin-level opponent. All Sasuke did was jump high in the air to avoid it. Not sure why that's the worst of it when the S-ranks are much worse. All you have to do is know how to put chakra in your feet and jump like he did.

    No one can have fast handseal speed if their primary fighting style is based around ninjutsu, and we have to do everything at the same rate? Seems canon.

    One Thousand Winters attacks the mind and the body, but the attack on the mind makes the attack on the body appear much worse. Genjutsu makes things feel like its reality. Wouldn't be S-rank if it had no effect. Also, Yomi Numa is stronger than Tsukuyomi. If you don't want it in, I'll just make Mirrors the primary.

    Moisture Harvest could further its ease, it's just a throwback to Tobirama's reputation. I only planned for it to be for the Water Release but if its a probleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeem~

    Lastly, I DID say Conductor demanded a certain level of chakra to redirect an entire jutsu somewhere else. I didn't say 'small'. It adjusts based on size and strength.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Piercing Light View Post
    So is this story meant to be advanced by a cast made up of children? I know you can use NPCs but if a war is going to break out then shouldn't older ninja be Heavily involved? It just seems odd to me that only kids are allowed.
    Well, I do know that the rp is supposed to be more adventure-based, much like in Part I(Pre-Shippuden).
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    Quote Originally Posted by SoleAccord View Post
    Didn't see a limit on Chuunin, you said 'Genin and Chuunin only with 1 jounin', but I guess I'll decide later.


    ....:3


    1. One-Thousand Water Needles of Death is canon and has been used before, and easily avoided by a genin-level opponent. All Sasuke did was jump high in the air to avoid it. Not sure why that's the worst of it when the S-ranks are much worse. All you have to do is know how to put chakra in your feet and jump like he did.

    2. No one can have fast handseal speed if their primary fighting style is based around ninjutsu, and we have to do everything at the same rate? Seems canon.

    3. One Thousand Winters attacks the mind and the body, but the attack on the mind makes the attack on the body appear much worse. Genjutsu makes things feel like its reality. Wouldn't be S-rank if it had no effect. Also, Yomi Numa is stronger than Tsukuyomi. If you don't want it in, I'll just make Mirrors the primary.

    4. Moisture Harvest could further its ease, it's just a throwback to Tobirama's reputation. I only planned for it to be for the Water Release but if its a probleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeem~

    5. Lastly, I DID say Conductor demanded a certain level of chakra to redirect an entire jutsu somewhere else. I didn't say 'small'. It adjusts based on size and strength.
    I forgot to add such a thing.

    1. Yes okay but, you say Shinji has conquered the weakness of the air factor. That's the main problem I have. Kinda takes away the weakness of jumping if you can do it in the air too.

    2. Haha the sarcasm. No. I didn't say that but, on a chunnin who can do one handed seals...at a rate where you need some form of form of awareness to catch. I don't care about them being one handed seals but, the speed like I stated.

    3. So its stronger then Tsukuyomi? I can see that as your actually being hurt and dead or almost near dead. But Genjutsu actually killing.....nope. Being hurt...sure whatever. Death is not okay.

    4. I figured that much about Tobirama and Water but, as I've always thought that it used chakra to pull from water molecules and piece together for a jutsu. Leave it though.

    5. Okay.

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    1. The idea of him being able to control one thousand at once is difficult to believe, but once they're launched the jutsu is basically done. I think that as long as they go in a defined direction either inward or outward, that's it. If someone jumps I'm not going to have all those needles just change direction and go upward. I planned to have him touch upon the jutsu early on and think about how he could make it more useful than just using it and praying it hits, but I'm not going to have him immediately master it.

    2. One-handed hand seals is a difficult feat that few perform, so in regard to that I had imagined the person capable of something so extraordinary could create seals in record time. If you really don't want them to be fast, then I'll just keep the one-handed seals being one-handed and not fast.

    3. The goal behind genjutsu is to be as authentic, as 'real' as possible. It's a mix of genjutsu and reality, this is true, but it doesn't kill outright. You'll find yourself freezing to death slowly and agonizingly (in your head), but you're not dead unless he actually ..kills you physically. Mostly he's just beating on you while you're freaking out, thus the mutilation. It lasts like a minute, a very painful minute, whereas Tsukuyomi is 24 hours of pure hell. It's not stronger than Tsukuyomi, I said Yomi Numa was.

    4. Okay.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SoleAccord View Post
    1. The idea of him being able to control one thousand at once is difficult to believe, but once they're launched the jutsu is basically done. I think that as long as they go in a defined direction either inward or outward, that's it. If someone jumps I'm not going to have all those needles just change direction and go upward. I planned to have him touch upon the jutsu early on and think about how he could make it more useful than just using it and praying it hits, but I'm not going to have him immediately master it.

    2. One-handed hand seals is a difficult feat that few perform, so in regard to that I had imagined the person capable of something so extraordinary could create seals in record time. If you really don't want them to be fast, then I'll just keep the one-handed seals being one-handed and not fast.

    3. The goal behind genjutsu is to be as authentic, as 'real' as possible. It's a mix of genjutsu and reality, this is true, but it doesn't kill outright. You'll find yourself freezing to death slowly and agonizingly (in your head), but you're not dead unless he actually ..kills you physically. Mostly he's just beating on you while you're freaking out, thus the mutilation. It lasts like a minute, a very painful minute, whereas Tsukuyomi is 24 hours of pure hell. It's not stronger than Tsukuyomi, I said Yomi Numa was.

    4. Okay.
    1. Fine. No problems there.

    2. I can see them getting to that but, not right now. Just learning it is difficult as from Kakashi being surprised that someone knew but, the rapid speed of the one handed seals can be developed. Okay.

    3. Then its fine.

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    Shinji is a Genin now.

    Removed Gravestone. Dropped Ice Mirrors to A-rank and the ninja rank drop makes it much more difficult to maintain over a long period of time. Keep in mind it was only S-rank because I was told to make ranks up even if the jutsu don't have any. As a replacement Indomitable Will is also removed. We good now or am I forgetting something more?

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    Nope. We good.

    Haha....Hyuuga vs Uchiha.

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