There's no need to write as much, but I would like at least a paragraph (5 lines or so)
The Dai Li are Ba Sing Se's special police
There is a metal bender police in Ba Sing Se, just like Republic city
There is a different instance, explain in post
Whatever, I don't care
Yeah, I just kind of kept writing... It probably rambles in some parts, but it makes for a pretty good first post, I'd say.
I must not fear.
Fear is the mind-killer.
Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration.
I will face my fear.
I will permit it to pass over me and through me.
And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path.
Where the fear has gone there will be nothing...
Only I will remain.
There's no need to write as much, but I would like at least a paragraph (5 lines or so)
I just wrote 1 page. Might write more next time![]()
Sorry for no posts, but I am at my gf right now so I don't have much time. I will have something up soon
Alright, things are getting started, I like it. A question about the combat, though: The fact that we have each have three specific moves doesn't make us Pokemon, does it? As in, every action has to be one of those, or maybe a dodge, but that's it. I'm hoping we have a little more literary license than that... For example, if there is water on the ground under an opponent's feet, and Pona has a chance to encase the feet in ice, would she be able to? I understand that specific enhanced abilities like Still Bending, Multiple Targets, Bend-assisted movement, etc. require earning that ability, but I'm talking about basic bending moves that aren't part of our move list (extra e.g. an earthbender kicks a few rocks at an opponent, a firebender simply shoots fire out of his/her fist, an airbender blows wind in one direction, blowing back an opponent).
I must not fear.
Fear is the mind-killer.
Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration.
I will face my fear.
I will permit it to pass over me and through me.
And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path.
Where the fear has gone there will be nothing...
Only I will remain.
It's kind of hard to describe an interesting fight scene with just three moves. I added "martial arts" to my character feats so I can throw around punches and kicks![]()
The basics are always available, just no tricky or complex stuff unless you earned it. I just wanted to emphasise a personal style that every bender has. Think Meelo's fartbending style or something
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Cool, good to know. I figured as such, but wanted to make sure.
I must not fear.
Fear is the mind-killer.
Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration.
I will face my fear.
I will permit it to pass over me and through me.
And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path.
Where the fear has gone there will be nothing...
Only I will remain.
Oh, good to know.
I've noticed it's my turn to post. It's late over here, so I'll post sometime tomorrow during the day; either during midday or after school. A bother, but bear with me for now.![]()