Mass Effect: New Advent (OOC/CS)

[IAmZero]

Name: Velia Si'ona

Species: Asari

Age: 412

Appearance: Velia is taller than the average asari at nearly six-foot. Her skin is a dark shade of blue with deep purple highlights. A number of colorful natural "tattoos" appear over her face, back, and arms. She is athletically built, with particularly strong legs and arms. Her "hair" grows in waves that collect to a point near the base of her skull, then curve sharply upward. Her eyes are crystal blue with small flecks of silver dotted near the pupils. She typically wears modified asari commando armor with the insignia of her former commando unit painted in red on both shoulders. Her armor is mostly black with white seams and a dark blue stripe down either arm.

Basic Class: Adept; with advanced training in warp and combat abilities.

Abilities: Velia is a potent biotic, not quite at the matriarch level, but very powerful for her age. She is capable of creating and maintaining a strong barrier that can protect up to four people for several minutes of nonstop attack. She can also use mass effect fields to throw enemies with the force of 2000 Newtons, lift them several meters in the air for nearly ten seconds, and can create a powerful micro-singularity and a wide-range warp field. Like most biotic attacks, her attacks are most effective against unshielded targets.

Equipment: She wears high-end specialized body armor capable of stopping a mass effect slug from any conventional infantry weapon; the armor sports high shielding, as well. She carries a HR SevenX Heavy Pistol, a LRM Raptor SMG, and four Lift Grenades.

Personal Ship: MRS Amitia This ship is one of the fastest ships on the market, though it is nothing compared to the top-of-the-line military ships in use by the Council forces. The Amitia sports a single standard torpedo bay and railgun mounted near the nose. The small ship is designed to be piloted and maintained by a crew of one, but can support up to five.

Personality: Velia is young and ambitious. She acts quickly, pausing to consider the matter only for a moment. She doesn't look back on her past mistakes, focusing outward, instead. She has received some criticism for her work, some going so far as to call her reckless and careless. But she gets the job done quickly and fairly efficiently. The Council is pleased enough with her work to maintain her status.

Greatest Accomplishment: Velia considers her personal redemption from a petty mercenary with no future to a respected warrior and patriotic Spectre to be her crowning glory.

Worst Failure: She looks back on her former life with regret, but considers one incident to be her worst failure: the inability to protect Thessia from the Reapers. She does feel that she redeemed herself during the war, though.

Affiliations: Council Spectres, Asari Commando Unit 932 (aka "Altria," officially retired)

Biography: Velia was born and raised on Thessia, the Asari homeworld. She learned the Asari culture from the greatest Asari matriarchs. Asari are encouraged from a young age to explore the galaxy and learn the nature of other species, to experience life as it unfolds. There are lessons in that experience that Velia has just recently begun to understand. She spent most of her childhood on Thessia, leaving when she was just 95. She ventured the galaxy in search for new and exciting things. She found them in bars, various "mates," and drugs. By the time she was 120, she was a known mercenary working out of the Beta Gamma cluster. She operated with the elite members of the Eclipse, smuggling red sand, slaves, and weapons. She was arrested on the Citadel when she was 132, and served ten years in prison on Thessia. She was released for a single reason: to track down the leader of the Eclipse and bring her to justice. She was recruited by the Thessia high command for this mission following the murder of a famed Matriarch.

Velia agreed to the mission and, accompanied by a number of undercover commandos, tracked the mercenary gang down. Their attempt at infiltration failed and resorted to combat. Velia demonstrated her biotic potential in barriers and warp fields, protecting the commandos while they put down the resistance. Once the job was completed, Velia was offered a chance at redemption. If she agreed to train with the elite commando units, and to obey the law, then the high command would consider her sentence served. She didn't see any other option, considering she had just betrayed a powerful criminal organization.

She trained with the commando units and operated in several classified projects until she was nearly 300. By then, she had completely shed her old life and lived a life dedicated to chasing down and crushing injustice. She knew she didn't have the patience to become a Justicar, nor did she like the idea of never having a relationship again. Instead, she elected to work with Citadel elite forces on special missions - mostly taking on terrorist organizations in the Traverse and Terminus Systems. During her time with the elite commandos, she helped in the fight against the Reapers on Thessia.

Following the war, she was awarded greater command in her unit. Eventually, her expertise in barriers and her skill in ferreting out the unlawful caught the attention of the most infamous Asari Spectre, Shava. Shava suggested Velia to the Council as a new Spectre. Velia passed the tests she was given and, at the age of 355, was made a Spectre of her own right. Since then, she has continued to make a name for herself across the galaxy.

[Shoryu]

Well that makes it easier, you said 'paragraph' for pretty much everything, I was apparently over thinking XD hahah

[IAmZero]

:P A paragraph isn't that long.

[Shoryu]

But it's longer than what you used =P HEheheh, except in the history of course ^.^ I'll just go ahead and post my CS now and find out what needs changing specifically o.o I'm a little brained out right now XD hahah

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Name:Kll'eth V'tren

Species: Kestraai - Muandi Breed

Age: 347

Description:
Kell stands at only 4'5", and is exceedingly light weight, unless wearing his armor, and depending which type, which he does fairly often, though despite his diminutive size he can be quite the creepy and even imposing creature. He is often seen with a toothy smile on his lower mouth, and a more pleasant and relaxed one on the upper, and as for 'clothing' it generally consists of a robe-like suit, or simple 'shots' for decency sake, especially if he has to fit somewhere particularly tight.

His hair, and the tendrils there in, are a stark Crimson and Dark red respectively, constasting the soft black fur coating his form, which in turn making his eyes stand out even more with the Blue and gold spiral patterned Schlera. His mouths are a bit more defined as well by a dull red coloration around the 'lips', and other markings adorn his body, the most noticeable of which is the Green coloration circling his eyes [like the picture, and others will be of similar design] which bears a frightening resemblance to a mass relay's Shape. [otherwise details in the picture are pretty much staying]

The picture is practically ancient now =3 I need to get a new one done, but it is pretty freaking close XD

http://d.facdn.net/art/shoryuaminata...ryu_s_kali.png Incase the picture below doesn't show

Basic Class: Kestraai Engineer

Abilities:

Mainly reffering to the armor's ability to change it's weaponry function, though it takes time to swap from one to another.

Type 1: Spritzer: SMG type, releases a rapid spray of projectiles that will pelt targets and shred shields and flesh like a metallive school of piranhas

Type 2: Blasty: Shotgun Type, Collects a number of solid projectiles in the chamber before releasing a localized blast inside the armor's safety chamber to release the projectiles with deadly force for anything up close.

Type 3: Fury: Flame thrower style, Several ounces of Multi-fluid are collected and super-heated in a weaponry compartment and lobbed at the target under high pressure, the level of heat enough to blister and melt most things, but worthless against shields, though it may cling to the shield's radius until something else depletes the shield.

Type 4: Boomy: Grenade type, Creates a solid projectile in the palm of the claw filled with a volatile mix of Multi-fluid chemicals that will create a terrible explosion on impact, though it takes a good amount of fluid to create one, the resulting blast surpasses any normal grenade used by citadel races [quote: 'Normal grenade']

Type 5: Mass Driver: The most costly and powerful weapon that can be formed in the armor, producing a large launching barrel from the fore-arm as a baseball sized projectile is solidified within containing a unique mix of chemicals that, once given the force of launch, will cause the projectile to reshape into a deadly blade like disc capable of piercing most weaker shields and armor, and exploding on contact with a solid enough target not to pass right through.

Though combat usefullness is minimal due to the vulnerability it causes in the user by 'putting the mind elsewhere', It 'is' possible to hack mechs or high tech armored suits and disable or control various functions. [Like normal hacking, but stronger, more versatile, and with a far greater weakness.]

Simple for the Armor's ability to meltdown things it touches and draw it in to create more Multi-Fluid to be used, though it's Ineffectual to use as a main offensive weapon, when used on a weak spot, such as palming someone's face, it can be crippling to the target.

To put it simply, the Claws of the armor produce a vast heat, localized and contained with shielding, to melt down whatever it within the palm and then suck it up to the storage compartments.

This creates a little Cylinder, approximately a foot tall, containing a certain about a Gallon of Multi-fluid and a complex scanner. When an ally approaches it and requests ammunition or something similar, It will scan their equipment to determine what it is they need, and produce enough to use up 1/4th of it's contents depending on the type of ammo or other object required. of course it's not capable of 'higher functions', so only basic requests will work.

The Armor has the ability to construct rudimentarily programmed drones to carry out simple functions.


Type 1: Repair Drones: Creates a small sphere with a number of little arms and a container of about 1 Litre of Multi-fluid and are capable of carrying out simple Repairs as well as 'assisting' with other types of repairs.

Type 2: Kamikaze Drones: Think, 'semi intelligent floating mines', a sphere filled with a volatile mix of fluids and a rudimentary sensory system to detect targets, and it will charge at and explode at them.

Type 3: Gunner Drone: Similar to Repair drones, these carry a small ammount of Multi-Fluid within, or may be empty and just used as decoys, but can fire a gun perhaps on par with a standard heavy pistol with good targeting capabilities, but not all that much intelligence.

Type 1: Razor Claw: Multi-fluid used to create extended and very sharp claw extensions on the armor.

Type 2: The Spike: a Melee only counter-part to the Blast Spike, mentioned below, Used by the armor producing a spike from it's fist armor, with the explosive cahemicals 'inside' of it instead of behind it, causing it, once punctured into a target or surface, to explode.

Type 3: Palm of the Sun: A broadening effect is added to the Meltdown system, allowing the palms to be coated in molten Multi-fluid, where they can then be slashed at or just palmed onto a target to cause rediculously painful burns, or weaken most armors.

The suit 'has' a power source of course, normally it solely goes into powering important self repair functions, Shielding, or the various multi fluid functions.

This ability augments the Power source with multi-fluid fuel, normally minimal in terms of serious energy output, to put out a devastating increase of energy for a short time.

After using this, which can generally last between 2-20 seconds depending on the form of discharge used, it can take a good while to reboot the power and restore basic functions, during while he'll be slown down by the armor's lack of power and lose all advantages otherwise given by it.


Type 1: Super shield: For the duration of the over-charge the shielding capabilities are multiplied, widening it's range and strengthening it's ability to resist and even repel hostile weapons fire, as well as gaining a radial Electrical effect that can zap threats that get too close.

Type 2: Storm: The energy will be discharged in a general direction to strike at various targets within range, devastating to shields and generally causing painful stunning effects to targets without a shield to take the hit, or that lost shield, but anything around maybe a Krogans Constitution won't likely be fully stunned.

Type 3: The Blast: All of the over-charging energy is directed into the claws, creating a huge collection that will discharge in a single direction and likely over-power most shields and electrically vulnerable targets that aren't perhaps on the same level as a Heavy mech, which can still be stunned.

Personality: Kell has a habit of appearing to be utterly carefree and even childish, always smiling, laughing at things, making jokes, even if he's in the middle of a fight... That he's considered as an abassador of sorts is a mystery of the highest degree. Otherwise he seems to be highly unpredictable, and habitually shows things on the outside that have nothing do with his actual intentions for a situation.

Greatest Accomplishment: Nothing that the Council Races would know about yet

Worst Failure: Another, nothing they'd know about yet XD Though I wouldn't mind them being brought out IC with someone being curious about it XD Course I can fill em in anyway if needed =3

Affiliations: The Kestraai Planetary Fleet, And Citadel Council [Not a member, but bears similar status for diplomatic relations, He is considered to have an authority level a notch beneath a spectre rating, being of a newly met species, it wasn't exactly considered prudent to trust him with that level of access and Citadel race Equipment... not that he's complaining, he prefers his own anyway. Though to improve relations the status level was granted to minimize risk of 'the wrong kind of trouble' causing a shit storm the galaxy isn't ready for yet.]


Biography: It happened about one month prior to the 'return of humanity', Galactic scanners just SUDDENLY picked up a new solar system that simple appeared' on the edge of the galaxy, and all more detailed forms of scanning seemed to be unable to gain information aside from a very symetrical arrangement to the planets. Needless to say all kinds of 'freak the hell out' took place and the citadel prepared to scramble for an emergency, that was of course until the system produced a single ship, maybe the size of Normandy SR2, which made a bee-line for Citadel space, coming to stop before an alerted fleet with guns and shields ready, though no shots were actually fired though as the citadel recieved a very well translated message strangely in english reciting a classic line that none had heard in ages "We come in peace."

The Ship contained a ranking representative of different Castes of a previously unknown Species known as the Kestraai, which were revealed to have been living 'outside' of the galaxy to avoid conflict and notice by the Reapers. They of course detected the Galaxy wide event that wiped out the Reapers, and returned to investigate and to acquaint themselves with the 'modern' species, though the theories around their arrival, those that imply they can move entire solar systems, would hint that they are even more advanced as a species [not that it's relevant XD]. They were sent as diplomatic Envoys of a sort, though most were not of the abassadorial type or skills, they would be providing many different views and analysies of the reigning culture of the galaxy.



A month later, The singular members of the ship are in exploratory positions in various facets of the Citadel's personell, security, engineering, Communication, that suchj, and the Specific Abassador is scheduled to return to 'the new system' after another 2 weeks. However another interesting event has stirred up interest from someone among them, , and when the new humans meet the council again, they'll find an unusual little creature observing from an out of the way place, feeding his curiosity for these humans he'd heard stories about in the past.