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    A Farewell Transmission OOC (Closed)





    -INTRODUCTION-



    Greetings all! My name is Natalia, and this is A Farewell Transmission.

    I've spent quite a long time conceptualizing the world that this RP takes place in, and have struggled a bit in deciding how much information to include in this OOC. In the end, I decided to scrap some of the predefined stuff I've thought up as far as world info goes, and have decided to leave things a bit vague. I've also decided to allow the players to create some of the world themselves, like that it'll be a bit more collaborative.

    This RP will have a strong emphasis on mystery and exploration. I'm not looking for this to be a particularly "game-ey" RP, as I'd rather tell a good story then have us focus on attack formulas and leveling up or things of that nature. The most principal thing that I'm concerned with is making sure that we all have a fun time exploring our characters and how they live in this world.

    Anyway, this is an Advanced RP, so I'll be expecting a lot from its players. I would really love for the RP to have engrossing character and storyline development, and a lot of that stuff depends on you guys. Owing to that, the selection process will be reasonably strict. After all, I would really like to have some good, creative writers for this. Anyway, without further ado, let's move on to some world info!



    -THE CLOUDSEA-



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    -TECHNOLOGY-



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    -SOCIETY-


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    -CHARACTER TYPES-


    Regular Humans


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    Abyssers


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    Mancers


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    -CHARACTER SHEET-



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    ACCEPTED CHARACTER LIST
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    -NPCs-

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    -RULES-


    - No godmodding. I am confidant that everyone here knows the etiquette of RPing, so I won't go into too much detail. You should know what this entails (don't control other people's characters, don't kill anyone willy-nilly, ect).

    - No overly sexual stuff. Take that stuff to PM.

    - This one is important. If for whatever reason you plan on quitting the RP or plan on taking a hiatus, LET ME KNOW. I will control your character for you if you can't come online for a while, but if you plan on leaving, please let it be known. I don't want to be left wondering what happened to you.

    - HAVE FUN!!! (I know this is lame, but meh )


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    Thanks for reading!

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    YAY! Super stoked. Here's my opening thoughts for my character, happy to edit as needed so just let me know.

    I realize I'm making him sound like a bit of a killing machine badass but I tried to temper it realistically and he's going to be all but useless when it comes to charming people or keeping a ship in working order. Also, I promise not to turn him into a combat god or anything ridiculous, just liked the feel for the character.

    Name: Avriel

    Ring Name: The Butcher of Keldon Tor

    Age: 18

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    The advantage of having a mod interested in your thread, if moderator action is needed it gets done fairly quickly.

    Anyway should have my character up in a couple of hours

    Edit: Quick question, If all our characters are 19 or under, how are we getting our hands on a ship? Or is all that going to be part of the opening of the RP, if so don't mention why as I'd prefer to find out in play if that's the case.
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    Indeed, you can hope to have a sheet of mine up relatively soon as well.



    @Seagrave: Before I do my character I should ask (to save on redoing it if you disapprove of it) I was thinking about my character being a somewhat young scientist whose specialty is in the Nicolai Tesla school of interest. (Tesla Coils, Telepresence, 'Free Energy' development etc.)

    In short, a small case of mad scientist with a big case of large goals.


    (His Image so I don't lose the link.)
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    Presenting...
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    Cale Arkand

    Age: 16





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    Not exactly the novel others have put up, but I feel it gives the character a good starting point and room to grow.
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    Would this be open for applicants? Or just people from its interest check.

    made by the ever charming and talented Lillian Thorne.

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    No harm in applying; I think Seagrave's going to do some winnowing after all the applications are in.

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    Name: Lina

    Age: 14

    Appearance: Lina has odd yellow-green eyes and dusty blonde hair. She wears the same dusty raggedy dress she did as a child. She carries a longbow that is slightly taller than herself and 4 quivers of arrows. Two sealed and tied to her waist, one on her back and another one at her hip. She is short, standing only about 3’9”. Lina has numerous scars on her back from the slave drivers. She is also very dirty from rarely getting to bathe at all in her short life.


    Skills/Assets: She is an experienced archer, whose training began when she was tall enough to hold a bow. She developed a hyperactive style of archery which focuses on quantity over quality. Due to her size she does not have as much draw strength when firing. Instead of trying to snipe single targets she fires multiple arrows at once in a deadly hail of arrows those who witness call arrow rain. She is very observant and quick to notice danger of any sort. She can read but cannot write. She is agile and dexterous and is good at running very fast.


    Background:
    Lina was born a slave in the admiralty. By age three she was put to work, where she survived by being faster than her masters’ whips. For her insolence she was tied up and whipped to keep her in line. What was supposed to induce fear in her only induced rage and a longing for escape. One day when she was 5 she ran, and didn’t stop until her little feet game way. By that point she was at the docks. She snuck aboard a passing airship where she remained hidden among the cargo until the ship docked at Blackdown.
    Months after she arrived she was taken in by the happy homes orphanage. It was there she became a beggar and a pickpocket in service to Fagin who repaid her in food and lodging. Her experiences made her resilient. Fagin saw potential in her, and ordered her to begin training in archery immediately. She did. She wasn’t particularly strong, but she was fast enough to unload multiple arrows before others could make a move. In fact, it got to the point where she had to keep four quivers on her at all times to keep up with her excessive use of arrows. She was employed by the orphanage for some time before realizing she was still a slave to the system. She ran until she turned to find they had given up on chasing her. Her entire set of worldly possessions at this time was a rarely washed raggedy dress. Four worn quivers of arrows, all kept full. And a decent quality longbow she keeps strung at all times.
    She attempted to volunteer for the militia, but they wouldn’t take her as they saw her only as a vagrant with no skills worth their time. When they witnessed her abilities as an archer they were even more fearful to take her in believing that no person could unleash a hail of arrows like she could. She was refused from the service but they were willing to find her care. The city became her home after that, although most citizens only saw her as the vagrant.

    Personality: Lina is childish while fighting, but can be serious at times. Be happy you meet her during one of her brief serious moments, because she is normally extremely hyperactive. Lina was once enslaved, but escaped. That experience made her cynical, which she hides under a guise of childishness. She is quick to anger when she sees slaves, or anyone being denied their freedom.

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    Hellis - Yes, we are open for applicants! Please feel free to submit a character!

    Duchess - Your character is already accepted, but do you think you can submit (via PM) a character sheet that follows the one I posted? I want to eventually have all of our accepted characters in the opening post, so that people can look at them for reference if they need some quick information. Also, it would help a lot if you could condense her full backstory into a short-ish summary of her past. This is all just for quick reference. Thanks!

    Gat - That character is really great! And you're right, he does have room to grow (which I always like), and I'm glad that he won't have a problem socializing with others (we already have two character applicants that seem like they'll have issues with this). I have no qualms with Cale at all, except for one little thing. You're free to completely ignore me on this, but would you mind making him a bit taller? It's just that all of our character applicants so far, except for Avriel, seem to be really, really short. Again, you can keep him short if you really want to, but it's just a suggestion.

    About the ship. There's going to be a short period of exposition before things start to kick off. You'll all get your ship soon enough though, I promise.

    ElRay- First off, wow. Avriel is completely terrifying . I love the amount of detail you put into his backstory, and I admire you for going as far as creating separate characters that pertain to that backstory. It's really intriguing stuff!

    Anyway, there are some changes that I think you should make. First off, I don't think he should be the best abysser slavefighter on Keldon Tor at the age of 18. I guess I should've went into more detail on this, but the bodies of Abyssers degrade at a much slower rate than regular humans, meaning that at age 60 they'll still be kicking ass. This means that at the slave arenas of Keldon Tor, there would be older, even more fierce abyssers than Avriel. Sure, he could be known for his demonic-like fighting ability, and he could have the nickname "The Butcher", but only against non-abyssers. The point is that I don't want him to be too powerful against his own kind. He could still keep his character traits (which I love), but he needs to have room to grow as far as his fighting ability goes. If he's large and powerful enough to kill most other abyssers at the onset, then there's not much well.. danger if we have him around all the time.

    That being the case, could he be a bit shorter, like 6'5? I'm thinking that abyssers don't reach their maximum height until age 21 or something, so he could end up becoming taller. That's about it as far as changes go. Everything else, including everything about his backstory and Keldon Tor, is absolutely perfect.

    Kadaeux -A mad scientist character would be pretty cool, and I think might share some intriguing interactions with Duchess' character. But honestly, I have no idea what Nicolai Tesla worked on except for that they had to do with electricity, so I wouldn't know if any of that stuff you mentioned would exist in the game world. Regardless, I'm kind of against having a "Tesla school of science" in a fictional world. If you can come up with something suitable that might work in-universe (maybe something having to do with the highly volatile etheris substance), then I'd be happy to take a look at your character sheet.

    Mew - Before I get into anything regarding your character, is she an abysser or just a regular human slave?

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