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    Once Upon a Bayou



    The Rising Sun bed and breakfast was closed down for nearly 6 month. When asked why, the owner June always claimed it was due to renovations, despite no construction crews being seen on the property, and the plantation looking the same now as it did when it was closed down. Then finally, with short notice, the Rising Sun opened up in the peak of the summer humidity, welcoming in a handful of new guests.

    That first evening was rather slow and uneventful. Dinner was served by Anelie to their rooms, and June only made an appearance to inspect each room before the guests were allowed to settle in for the night. One by one she pressed her ear to the wall, listened for a moment then left without saying a word.

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    Samuel:
    Sleeping in room 111 wasn't easy. The smell of paint fumes from the recently covered door combined with the loud chiming of midnight on the grandfather clock in the library was distracting. Needless to say it was enough to stir him from his sleep, and apparently someone was in a similar situation. The light patter of footsteps approached down the hallway, stopping briefly at each door before continuing on, as if they were listening for something.

    If Samuel got up, he'd see that there were even more people awake at the witching hour. Outside his window he would catch a glimpse of several cloaked figures walking towards the front door of the plantation. It definitely wasn't something you'd expect out here in the bayou, or anywhere for that matter. Halloween was several months away.


    Simon:
    In addition to the loud chime of a grandfather clock striking midnight, Simon would wake up to the sound of a creak he had heard earlier that day. Some of the floorboards under the rug had made that noise when he walked over them on his way to bed. Something or someone would have to be nearby to create that distinct noise, but if he got up, Simon would find he was still the only person in the dimly lit room.

    Outside was a different matter. There was movement out of the corner of Simon's eye and a flicker of light. Walking down the long driveway were several cloaked figures holding flashlights to navigate their way to the front door.


    Juliet:

    A sound of a commotion outside her door would wake up Juliet. It was a crash that tore her out of her dreams, then a string of strong curse words in Spanish followed. If she peaked out her door she would see a man standing in the stairwell nursing an injured hand against his chest while looking down into the darkness as if waiting for something.

    He stood completely still for a moment then slowly turned around and looked over his shoulder at Juliet.

    "Senorita." he whispered. "Did you hear that? El Canto. The singing..."

    His expression was dark and almost sad, like a feeling of dread.


    Abraham:


    A cold chill woke Abraham up just as a distant clock struck midnight. Despite it being summer, the night care was still cool as it came in through an open window in his room. A window that had been shut when he went to bed. If he looked around, everything would be where it should be, so if there was an intruder, they hadn't taken anything.

    If Abraham went to close it, he would notice several cloaked figures making their way to the house and the sound of someone singing. It was a woman's voice and despite the song being lovely in terms of tone and melody, there was still something chilling about it. The language wasn't anything he knew, though it sounded vaguely Latin or something along those lines, so he wouldn't be able to hear what the woman was singing about, but it would seem foreboding.

    The cloaked figures didn't seem to be able to hear the song from where they were, so they continued their way towards the plantation.

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    Lets take a quick look at your life for a moment, shall we?

    Oh, here we go... the earliest memory. Your fifth birthday! See, there's you in quirky little glasses in pigtails sitting on your booster chair that you've used ever since you were a year old! I w- I mean... you were such a short little thing, weren't you? Ooh, ooh, ooh! You're about to blow out the candles, look at y- Oop. You just threw up all over the cake... unfortunately, you spent all day eating ice cream the day before out of pre-celebration. Also, you were playing in the water while the air was cold. That's what you got for living in Colorado. "Waaah, mommy! Daddy! My cake's ruined!" You cry out through your tears. Unfortunately, your parents or friends couldn't attend, so you just got all your stuffed animals and that creepy little ventriliquist doll your brother used to scare you. But it was for good reasons too! You kept sneaking in to his room to play with his Black Sabbath CD's! You didn't know any better, but at least he didn't beat you all the time! Your relationship is still severed though. Your party was poorly prepared... its a good thing you didn't eat the cake you prepared yourself, because you added rat poison by mistake.

    Here we are at prom, everyone staying away from you because of that whole rumor that you were Lucifer's daughter after they realized your actual birthdate was June 6th of 1966. You're in a lovely white dress with your shoulders revealed and your date is the captain of the debate team, who is actually good-looking. Suddenly, your date comes out of the bathroom crying with a black eye, soon after being stuffed in the locker purely because of the fact that he asked you out to prom. He chooses not to speak to you for the rest of high school, not holding a grudge, but scared of what might happen. Last you heard, he was a taxi driver. What happened to you that night, you ask? Nothing, really! You didn't get your foot flushed in the toilet after someone spiked the punch, requiring the work of ten firefighters to get it out, no siree!

    Regardless, you've had some tough times, but you've also had some good times! Such as staying in this lovely bed and breakfast for instance! The owner is a very nice woman and you've totally forgotten the fact that you're investigating the whole false renovations for six months with no construction team on board, haven't you? No, no, no, nope... don't panic, you've got this. The first thing you need to do is grab the urinal cakes and moth balls from your duffel bag. You and your short term memory, it'll be the death of you. You should stop collecting your thoughts... you drift slowly off to sleep.


    Underneath the covers, cozy after going through her journals, Juliet was sleeping comfortably as ever. She excused herself from the others to get some shuteye before she came up here. But it seemed like that would end soon as you hear explicities in a foreign language. Juliet tossed the blanket aside and crept by the corner of the door, peeking out to see the spanish man who spoke in such an ill manner who noticed her as well... no, not in that manner.

    The singing, he mentioned... but what singing?

    "El canto? Was it... a male or female voice? Where'd you hear it come from, Mr... sorry, I didn't catch your name before." She said, looking down at his injured hand. "How did... how did that get injured, by the way? Would you like me to go and ask someone for a first-aid kit?"

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    Simon laid awake in his bed staring at the ceiling. It had been so long since he had slept in an actual bed. So long in fact, just laying there was almost uncomfortable. It was uncomfortable in the fact that he felt like he was some kind of alien-like thing that did not belong on such a comfortable piece of furniture. Simon sighed to himself and turned over onto his side, directing his gaze towards the blank wall. Thinking about being uncomfortable only made him more restless. It would take time to fall-asleep, it always did, he would lay awake staring out blankly until the soft grasp of sleep grabbed him without him even being aware. This was the way he had always slept, on the streets, on a bed, it would never change.

    Simon finally drifted off into dreamland, but not for long, the sharp chime of a grandfather clock woke him up in a heartbeat. He shot up and sat upright nervously. Simon rubbed his face with his hands and thought to himself, I'm still not used to this place, at all. A slight creaking noise could be heard, it was the loud creaky floorboard he had tripped on when he had first walked into the room. It was strange int he fact that it only creaked when someone walked over it, although Simon didn't figure this out on purpose. He had only figured it out after tripping over it a couple of times. Slowly, Simon turned his head to see who was in his room, he looked over to where the floorboard was, and there was nobody there. There was nobody even in the room, Simon thought to himself with relief, I'm just imagining things, yea, I probably just thought I heard that.... As he was thinking to himself, light caught him from the corner of his eye, outside the window, figures hidden by the black of night were walking down the driveway with flashlights. Simon carefully slid himself out of bed and walked across the room towards the window, this time avoiding the creaky floorboard. He looked out at the figures and wondered of their identity.

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    Abraham felt cold chills going down his spine. Something was causing coldness, but he felt too tired to think about it. His eyelids went open and scanned the room. Aha. The window was open.

    - Jesus, I knew this place was old and shabby... - Abraham mumbled under his nose and slowly rose up and walked towards the window. Although being tired and careless at the moment, he was surprised by the strange sight. Cloaked men, walking towards the plantation... who they hell they would be? Slowly, trying to get no attention from these strange visitors Abraham closed the window. It creaked silently and could only be heard from his room.

    Some things really disturbed Abraham at the moment. Who they hell they are, what do they want and why are they coming towards this place? Perhaps the owner of this plantation has organized some kind of strange mask ball where they would have to follow this strange dress code. It's hard to tell anyways, since he had just woken up from comfortable sleep and was largely skeptical that anything suspicious would happen.
    - Wait... I left the window closed and as it pops open I come to see these strange people... coincidence. And nothing more. Right? - Abraham thought and looked around his room. Everything seemed to be in perfectly the same place as he had left and Abraham was more than confident of his memory and of his ability to keep a good watch on his stuff. Feeling struck out of his sleep permanently, Abraham got dressed up in his casual jeans and long sleeved shirt. Under the cover of the darkness of the hallway, Abraham slowly crept out of his room and went towards the stairs. He strongly felt that he needed to talk with the owner of this place, yet he was suddenly stuck again. Beautiful voice was singing downwards the stairs, but the Abraham couldn't recognize the strange language. Although such a voice should be deemed very beautiful and likable, it felt more than unpleasant. Dread went trough his whole body and Abraham felt that he should be careful as he began to understand that something was quite not right. Adrenaline went rocketing sky-high and the curiosity took the best of him as he proceeded towards the stairs. Stopping only at the middle of the stairs, he crouched and inspected the darkness. He heard some voices, and one very much sounded like Spanish tongue and he stood there, listening to darkness. Cold sweat dripped from his forehead as every single bit of his mind told him to get out of there and he could also feel his heart beat against his chest as the fear and excitement climbed higher and higher.

    - What if I get caught? - Abraham thought. Maybe he does get caught. Who knows?
    Midway in our lifes, I astray
    from the straight road and woke to find myself in the dark wood.

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    CRACK. CRACK. CRACK. The M16 pushed back into Samuel's shoulder after each shot in the burst. The insurgent returned fire, missing wide and hitting the fuel tank of the truck Samuel was using for cover. Samuel popped out and, again, fired a controlled burst, this one making contact with the fighter and dropping him lifelessly to the ground. He sprinted out from behind the truck as the puddle of fuel expanded beneath the truck. He slid into cover behind a short half-wall that ran parallel to the building the 3rd Battalion had been tasked to assault, but he was not far enough to lose scent of the petrol fumes. Beside him, his machine gunner unleashed a volley of rounds at the building, sending the fighters ducking for cover. "Sarge!", the machine-gunner shouted towards Samuel, "They won't hold up much longer. They aren't sticking their heads out as-".

    A hail of large-caliber fire that was coming from a large gun mounted on a pickup interrupted the gunner. The technical was speeding around the corner and into the courtyard at a break-neck pace. The man assisting the gunner had upper body torn off and thrown against the wall behind them as a .50 caliber round hammered his fragile body. Samuel shouted along the wall to another one of his men, "Johnson!". His grenadier hollered back in response, "Roger Sarge!". Johnson's M203 spit out a grenade from below the barrel of his gun, making the reverberating sound of the clock sound of a clock. It hit the truck with high velocity and high explosives. The clock struck again. The technical turned into a flaming wreck on wheels. It screeched across the courtyard to where Samuel had just been. Something wasn't right. It chimed again. The clock. The fumes. Samuel looked over. He saw the puddle of gas the truck was heading for, and he saw the truck's tanks that was still leaking. The clock again. It would go off. The gas. The air around them. The clock. The fumes.


    Samuel bolted up in his bed in a cold sweat. His heart was beating rapidly. As the dream was still fading, giving way to reality, he stared straight ahead as the real world came to him. His short and fast breathing was only interrupted by a stream of quiet curses. "Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck". He still smelled the fumes, but as he became more awake, he realized it was the paint. He leaned back against the head board, and took deep breath. Samuel wiped his brow with a still shaking hand as he started to control his breath. It was just a dream. He moved to the edge of his bed as the clock finished tolling.

    As it died, he head someone moving in the hallway, seemingly listening in to each door to see if they were awake. It's probably June, Samuel thought. He leaned back onto his hands and looked out the window. The bayou was a magical place, but his eye was instead unexpectedly drawn to several cloaked figures who were making their way to the front of the plantation. That was strange. Who could be coming around at this hour? Not only that, but cloaks? What was this, the 19th century? Who the hell wears those anymore? They were either here for some sort of Dungeons and Dragons thing or didn't want to be seen. Samuel was betting it was the latter. Who would it be though? Was someone trying to rob the plantation? Could they be running from someone like the police or a gang and wanted to hide?

    The more Samuel ran through possibilities in his head, the less he liked it. He put on his jeans, threw on a pair of socks set down by the side of his bed, and made sure his knife was in his pocket before opening the door to look out into the hallway. "June? Is that you?", he called out, "I need to talk with you". Not immediately seeing here, he stepped out into the hallway to get a better look, reaching his hand into his pocket to feel his knife. It was likely June, but the feeling of a weapon in his hand comforted him until he knew.

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    Samuel:

    No one was in the hall right away, but after a long moment he'd see a figure coming toward him from the parlor, which was the direction of the main entrance. All the lights were out and it was quite dark, and this person didn't seem to notice he was there until they were standing in the threshold leading into the hallway.

    The figure let out a little scream, half-muffled under their hands.

    The parlor lights flickered on by the switch at the doorway and Anelie was standing there, someone Samuel would recognize as the quiet, awkward housekeeper. "Merde!" she exclaimed, and even if he didn't know any French, it was obviously a curse. "You scared me half to death!"

    She was wearing a yellow floral sundress, nothing close to the cloaks, but she was holding a jacket and small purse under her arm. Her auburn hair was wind-tousled and she was obviously spooked, as if caught coming home after curfew.

    "S-sorry," she continued, smoothing her clothes nervously. "Did you need something, erm, Samuel, was it?" Anelie offered an anxious little smile, hoping to smooth over her bad impression.


    Simon:

    Being on the first floor as well, Simon likely heard Anelie's shriek from his room, though it was distant on the other side of the house. If he checked the hall, however, he'd find he wasn't alone –– another patron, one he'd recognize from earlier that day, was in the hall, probably just coming out of the bathroom.

    "Oh, hey Simon," Nicholas spoke up softly, recognizing him even in the dark. "Sorry, did I wake you? Shhh, keep your voice down…" The singing was closer than the scream was, and Nic frowned. "What's that?"
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    Samuel flinched slightly and put up his hand as the initial burst of light surprised his eyes. Anelie, he thought as his eyes adjusted to the light.
    "Merde! You scared me half to death!". Although it was obvious from context, that words was part of what little French he remembered from High School. In fact, that was probably the word he and his friends used the most. Imagine that..., Samuel briefly smirked to himself, Mr. Hart was right. French would be useful. Eyes adjusted, he took a closer look at the french expat. It initially seemed like she was wearing a cloak, but it was just a simple jacket. It looked like she had just been outside as opposed to heading out there.

    On top of being a little taken aback, the girl was flustered. "S-sorry. Did you need something, erm, Samuel, was it?", she asked with an awkward and anxious smile. "No, I just couldn't sleep. I heard someone out here, so I figured I'd come out to let them know I saw a few guys heading towards the front. They seemed a little sketchy to me, but I figured one of you guys would know better. You look like you were just out there. Did you see anyone yourself?". As he spoke, a thought hit him. He had the person outside was a blind June or, though not likely, a possibly hostile someone sneaking around ahead of those cloaked guys. He neglected to put a shirt on. Samuel turned a little red at this thought. "Um.. hold that thought". He leaned into his room and grabbed a shirt of the ground, throwing it on. God damn, that was smooth, Samuel thought sarcastically.

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    Julie and Ab:

    "Si." Thomas whispered looking back down the stairway. The singing had abruptly stopped, maybe the person had heard them. "A woman's voice, and that song... it sounded like something my mother used to sing me as a child, but... different somehow. Something is not right here..."

    His voice drifted off as he was lost in his own thoughts. Whatever he was putting together, he wasn't going to let them in on it.

    "Lo Siento, Senor. Did I wake you as well?" Thomas sighed when Abraham approached. Yet another 'civilian' to worry about. "I do not suppose I could convince you two to go back into your rooms and leave this to me, could I? No, probably not. Alright, por favor, stay close and keep quiet."

    Carefully he made his way down the stairs as quietly as possible, and they made it to the bottom floor just in time to see a group of cloaked figures entering the Library and closing to door behind them.

    Thomas pressed a finger to his lips for them to be quiet, then crept close enough to hear muffled voices from within.

    "This is ridiculous, June."

    "Are these really necessary?"

    "I thought there was going to be snacks."

    All the voices belonged to older women except for the next:

    "We shall begin now. Take your places." Which belonged to June. Apparently she was holding some sort of meeting. The room fell silent after that.

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    Well, he seems to have evaded the subject on the injured hand as well as his name! Unless he's distracted on the current... situation at hand. I mean, I would be too. Actually, I am.

    Abraham had made his way towards the hall where they were, immediately noticed by Thomas. If he thought he wasn't gonna get caught then he was indeed wrong. Thomas seemed to have a keen eye for quickly scoping out people. Although luckily Juliet was a very sneaky person... mostly due to her light frame. She remembered so many times when she would sneak out the sewer rats she took in to be treated for scurvy of her house at 4am while her parents were asleep. Which brought her to the story of how she got scurvy! Before she could actually tell that story, the man spoke of a trek downstairs to investigate the singing. "No... you also couldn't convince me that brussel sprouts were good for your health. Anything that digusting is not healthy. I'll even have brocolli instead of that... but I prefer red potatoes and carrots." She said with a dorky smile that revealed two buck teeth. She immediately hid those and sidled along the staircase down to the bottom floor to witness the doors of the Library closing.

    Someone likes their privacy. What's those noises? Females... a woman was singing earlier, could it have been one of these women? The last voice sounds so familiar. Heading out the front door would be so unprofessional and it could also attract attention. Luckily, I ventured around the ex-plantation and made note of the rooms! Except for one... I'll have to inquire about it a time. When I get the opportunity and items needed to enter.

    "The Library has windows, don't they? Through the courtyard and the porch. We could go through the front door, but that's not my style. Hm... that sounds like something a young mafia shark would say. There's a way through that room right there, then through the parlor and the gallery. We could catch a glimpse inside?" Juliet questionably suggested in a whisper.
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    - What exactly is happening down there? - Abraham spoke to Thomas in low tone. He followed him downstairs and gave a short look at Juliet. She appeared more than dorky than ever, considering that awkward smile and her remark on brussel sprouts that really seemed out of place. Abraham had already put her in certain class of women. Somewhat nerdy, but with good looks and they have no clue that they are actually kinda good looking. Nor she ever will understand that she has quite good looks. It's curse for these women as it's curse for women who are really fat but tend to wear closely fit clothing believing that they look good.

    They had made their way downstairs and Thomas made a signal to stay quiet. Abraham listened to voices coming from the Library and he could feel excitement raising with every word he heard. Great. They are having some kind of strange meeting and they don't have snacks. Apparently June is involved in this too. June felt strange to Abraham even if there wasn't anything special about her, though some of her habits were really out of place. Silence was again disturbed by Juliet who spoke about her plan that would involve them to creep to Library windows to see things closer.

    - I don't really think it's a good idea. Their meetings sounds very private and it's more than obvious that this is not for our eyes to see. But... - Abraham looked directly in the eyes of Juliet. She appeared to be very excited and she was obviously yearning for some kind of adventure. Why shouldn't Abraham help her to satisfy her needs of something exciting? - What the hell. We can try to sneak to Library windows by following your suggested route. Lead your way, I have terrible eyesight in darkness. -
    Midway in our lifes, I astray
    from the straight road and woke to find myself in the dark wood.

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