Aluressa

[Hostile Angel]

You died.
God has cast you out of heaven.

The Devil has forsaken you.
The only place to go is :
Alluressa

​Welcome to Aluressa I am your angel, adviser, and guide; Saint Vania.
I am also the decider of whither you shall enter heaven.
God has cast you here for your unthinkable sin, one that surpasses the depths of hell itself.
You have no memories of your past life and now you forever wander of void and paradise.
Weep not God shall forgive you if your repent the sin but as your memories were erase so has the memory of the sin.
But as you discover our land, little by little you will remember but it will hardly give you any go.
Hard thy challenge is it is your key to salvation.

As she disappears the darkness you have enter has turned into a forest and a few see a town in the distance.
This world is neo-earth, a world without impurities; melancholy; or hate.
But it is avoidable; you must cleanse your sins.
Some have already decided to forget the tract and live here forever.
Never fearing death and finally gain a second chance at life
But the fact remains :
Is immortality more important than salvation

The Land Of Alluressa:


Forest

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Towns
Old Country

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Criste Montra

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Del Juan

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Your Home

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Your Tract Begins:

(Appearance

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:

Do you believe in any religion (if you don't then you might not accept want salvation or realizing there is a god want too:
Room:
(photo)
Hobbies
Immortality or Salvation:

[Wolfbat9008]

Name: Leonardo
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Personality: He is sensitive, kind, and very much used to being alone. He never was much for attention, even though he's very lonely inside and yearns for friendship.
Religion: None, though he isn't quite Athiest. He never really stuck with anything, though he does believe some great force is out there. Now, he's sure of it.
Room: http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20...15-d47t82f.jpg [Attic]
Hobbies: Drawing, or any form of art for that matter. Except painting. He sucks at painting.
Immortality or Salvation: Immortality, though he could switch at some point near the end.

[Hostile Angel]

Uhm not being picky here but can you stretch out the personality and hobbies like for each word at least a sentance. Plus nice foreword when IC starts it would start off on a good note

[Wolfbat9008]

That better?

[Hostile Angel]

That better?

I kinda of meant each word is put into a sentences not all the words are describe in a sentence. This might be bad on my end for describing it right

[Fabricant451]

Name: Sheena Monroe

Age: 27

Gender: Female

Personality: Sheena is unstable and often lets her emotions control her, this often leads to her getting into a verbal shouting match with whatever unfortunate soul happens to be closest to her. Outside of being a bit too...loud, Sheena is generally a friendly-enough person though with a bit of a short fuse. She is unapologetic both when angered and when normal, firmly believing that people she fights with deserved it. So long as you don't ever disagree with her or otherwise make her upset, Sheena is all smiles.

Religion: She was once a follower of Christian Hedonism but eventually dropped the Christian aspect. While not technically a religion, she is very much a hedonist.

Room:

Her wallpaper has no designs and is just a dark black; her room is one of the smaller ones as she doesn't need much space to be happy.

Hobbies: Her primary hobby is performing, specifically music. She always told her family and friends to bury her with at least a flute so she'd have something to do in the ground. She also enjoys telling and coming up with jokes, though she wouldn't call it a hobby. One hobby she has aside from music and performance is eating and drinking, often to excess. Especially anything containing strawberries.

Immortality or Salvation: Sheena is still not exactly sure.

[Hostile Angel]

accepted

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Name: Sheena Monroe

Age: 27

Gender: Female

Personality: Sheena is unstable and often lets her emotions control her, this often leads to her getting into a verbal shouting match with whatever unfortunate soul happens to be closest to her. Outside of being a bit too...loud, Sheena is generally a friendly-enough person though with a bit of a short fuse. She is unapologetic both when angered and when normal, firmly believing that people she fights with deserved it. So long as you don't ever disagree with her or otherwise make her upset, Sheena is all smiles.

Religion: She was once a follower of Christian Hedonism but eventually dropped the Christian aspect. While not technically a religion, she is very much a hedonist.

Room:

Her wallpaper has no designs and is just a dark black; her room is one of the smaller ones as she doesn't need much space to be happy.

Hobbies: Her primary hobby is performing, specifically music. She always told her family and friends to bury her with at least a flute so she'd have something to do in the ground. She also enjoys telling and coming up with jokes, though she wouldn't call it a hobby. One hobby she has aside from music and performance is eating and drinking, often to excess. Especially anything containing strawberries.

Immortality or Salvation: Sheena is still not exactly sure.

accepted

[Wolfbat9008]

Fixed again. How about now?

[Hostile Angel]

Accepted

[Hostile Angel]

Bump