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    Sobetsu: Cloaked Rancor

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    Information on Sobetsu


    Plot 1: The last war took place over 100 years ago and the rural land of Sobetsu has been in a long period of peace and contentment. However, this contentment has become boredom for many and though the crime rate has been minimal, many citizens have been acting out in various ways. With the occasional seat-changing of the Mages and Masters, these are the major events that have become major spectacles for many. Though tradition still stands, the privacy of such matters has dissipated.

    Kazan is a secluded country by choice. The war placed an unwanted stigma on its citizens. The Royal Court has been entirely rebuilt and reformed from the contastrophe those 100 years ago and the Kyoujin and Regulators have become the past and even myth to some. A group of misfit children, however, have been up to no good within the city of Seizo. Right in the middle of the Fire Country and major manufacturer of the volcano-surrounded land, this large city is robbed and taken advantage of by a clan called "Hagetaka" of its innocence and security.

    Though, just labeled "nusience," they are growing exponentially and the threat on the city is becoming ever weary of these hooligans.

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    *This is around what I'm looking for in a final product for a CS


    Plot 2: The Kingdoms are on the brink of a Civil War. The Republics still attempt to resurrect their shattered government. The Parliament is facing famine and, thus, a strain on their relation with the other Nations. The Democracy is charged with the clean-up of the Earth-Fire Wars that ended three years ago. With the terrorits group of Regulators disbanded and the assassin's organization of Kyoujin extinct, Sobetsu is ready for a time of peace, but one man seeks to take advantage of this turmoil and usurp the country for his own. Some people rumor the man to be Takahashi Masaru, the former leader of the Regulators even when many witnessed his 'death.' Still, the remaining terrorists and assassins have re-grouped with pirates and attempt to ally with the various clans throughout the country and overthrow the worn-out and archaic governments to make their own and rule evenly over all people. Freedom of choice is being threatened and the collapse of the Mages' Conclave with half of the Masters' Council being killed during the Riots, protection from the highest of Elementals is not certain. For now, the Isles of Jisuikafuu keep to themselves and train those who survived the attacks, leaving the Nations to fend for themselves. It won't be long until the Change occurs under the One.

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    *Note: This is more than I'd ask anyone to come up with
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    WIP? Please advise!

    Name: Serina Monde

    Sun: Leo (Resolve)
    Rising: Scorpio (Technique)
    Moon: Aquarius (Speed)
    Age: 20
    Sex: Female
    Height: 5' 3"
    Weight: 112 lbs
    Eye Color: Amber
    Hair Color: Blonde
    Type: Normal
    Rank: N/A (Journeyman)
    Occupation: Student
    Special Ability: N/A

    History:

    Serina was born in Hisen but her father, Theo Monde, whose job as one of the few representatives of Hisen meant she constantly travelled to different places and grew up in different cities and towns. Serina, however, did not mind the constant travelling. In fact, she enjoyed it and she inherited her father's interest in building connections with the different cities and territories, no matter how futile it could be.

    The increasingly active citizens in the recent years made it difficult for Theo to perform his job well, and he was afraid that the situation might turn dangerous for him and his family. He decided to train Serina in some sort of self-defense and weapon handling. She learned how to use a Tanto with her father's help, and a bit of hand-to-hand combat.

    Theo's suspicions became true when he visited Kazan wth Serina and her mother for the first time. Serina found Kazan interesting, and she learned about the growing notoriety of the 'Hagetaka' clan. An unexpected turn of event occurred when Theo had a heart attack and did not live through. Serina deeply grieved, but decided to stay in Kazan, intrigued by the growing name of the Hagetaka clan. Her mother could not convince her to leave Kazan even if she wanted to. In the end, her mother returned to Hisen while Serina stayed, with the promise that she would return in a year.

    Combat:

    Serina has learned how to fight with a Tanto. She is quick on her feet and although she prefers not to hurt others, she does not hesitate when unsheathing her sword. As such, she should not be underestimated (but she should not be overestimated either). She may lack strength, but she is rather efficient at making her way through a fight. Her bravery probably helps her through occasionally.

    Personality:

    Serina is rather naive. She believes in negotiations over violence, and believes that peace will be obtained by understanding both parties and coming to a conclusion. She is braver than she seems, as she does not run away from danger, yet also very friendly. She likes to converse with people and get to know them. She is also curious to a fault, so she might actually place herself in dangerous situations due to her curiosity. It would not be surprising for her to ask any kind of question.

    Clothes, Appearance, and Equipment:

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    Serina has short blonde hair that is parted by the side, and large, curious eyes beneath long eyelashes. Her nose is small and pointed, while her lips are always glossed with a tint of pink. She usually keeps a small smile upon her face and gives off a warm aura. She has a fair skin tone and her cheeks have a rosy tint.

    Anyone can easily deduce that she has womanly figure, but her chest is small while her waist narrows and her hips are slightly voluptuous. She chose to wear a revised version of a yukata, only that she cut off the skirt so that it would reach around her mid-thighs. The outfit is black, while it is tied around with a white obi. She wears brown sandals on her feet.

    She wears her Tanto strapped to the side of her left hip.
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    I'm wondering if you read the Society and Culture portions of the thread. There is no technology outside clockwork. Guns are present in the country south and southeast of Sobetsu, but no where else. They can certainly travel from country to country, but even after 100 years (which is what the current descriptions are based off) the use of guns would not be wide. Otherwise, licenses would not be necessary to wield a firearm. Sobetsan life is rural and colonial, though they choose to stay behind technologically. "Jeans" and "sneakers" are not part of the apparel in Sobetsu, either. Really, just the minor stuff. And the picture doesn't seem to be working.

    Otherwise, very nice. As you can see, I don't require unnecessarily lengthy CSs since most character development will be done during the RP. (It's just nice to have a good idea of what your character is like)

    And this would require more reading on your part, but if you're interested, you can read about Hisen's government here.

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    Alright, wonderful! Thank you for pointing those out for me. I will edit my template.

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    added a second plot choice...

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    RESURRECTION...

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    Is this roleplay still on?
    Through Time that slashes, through the Wind that rings in my ears, I hear you.

    Come, hold my hand as you step carefully into this circle which I have drawn.
    Random Music

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    It very much is. How much have you read? How interested are you?

    You'll get more information about myself and a FAQ in the IntChk, though. (linked in the OP)

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