Wolf pack remake OOC

[Amethyst]

So, I'll make the intro brief.

Rules:
1. Use common sense
2. Have fun
3. Please suggest things! This is one of the few RPs I've GMed, and I'm pretty new at this.

Characters so far:

Alpha female(Amethyst)-Luna Starswirl
Alpha male

Pack members:
Sapphire (MidnightLunar)
Alex (Izzybella)
Brutus (SquirlPowers)

Everyone else post here, I haven't forgotten you, just maybe name spelling and such.

My Requirements:
Basically, all I ask for in a CS is a picture/description, an age, and a list of powers and weaknesses. Add more if you like though.
All I ask for in a post is punctuation and spelling, and at least 1 sentence. Try to make sense, please?

THE STORY:
There was, somewhere in the world, a beautiful valley. There are trees, birds, and water. The water was poisoned by a "humane animal experimentation" facility, they dumped all of their waste chemicals into a stream in the meadow. All the trees and animals died.
In this facility, young wolf pups were being experimented on. The drugs and radiation they were given changed their characteristics drastically. They escaped, as yearlings, into the valley. They all had to drink the poisoned water to survive. Eventually the poison washed away and the valley rebuilt itself, but not until those wolves of the Toxic Valley pack had changed forever.

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Here's Luna: Character Name: Luna Starswirl

Age: unknown

Powers: She doesn't seem to age like the other pack members, and she can communicate with spirits (more than the medics can, even)

Appearance: She has bright silver eyes , silver fur with a white muzzle and belly, and under the light of the full moon has stars swirled through her fur. She is much, much smaller than an average wolf, which she blames on The Place. When she is having a vision, her fur starts to glow.

History: She grew up in the White Walled place, when she was a pup she was allowed to play with the other wolves, including Rune. This playtime did have consequences, afterwords she was stuck with needles that made her feel extremely ill. As she grew, the playtime went away. They stuck her with more and more needles. She began hearing voices in her head, and having dreams of great councils of starry wolves, who warned her of impending destruction. She knew she had to escape, but she didn't know how. Rune busted her out, and she went with him to start a new pack. Her dreams and head-voices intensified when they escaped to the wild. Soon she was constantly having visions and voices in her head, which made her go a little crazy. Rune helped her through the craziness, and she learned how to control her ability so that she only received messages at certain times. She went on to help recruit other wolves to the pack.

[MidnightLunar]

Name: Sapphire Stone (Or Saphy)
Age: 4 years old.
Powers: Sapphire can see glimpses of the futures, not much though. These foresights can happen at anytime and place, it varies.
Appearance: http://cynder275.deviantart.com/art/...Wolf-354277502 Sorry, couldnt figure out whole paste a picture thing! : P
History: Saphy used to live at the top of a mountain, with her parents and brothers, yes, brothers. She was the only girl. Which did cause a lot of chaos as the brothers used to gang up on her, but one day Saphy realised that these games were becoming violent and so she had to 'snitch'. Her parents showed sympathy for her as they were the only daughter they had. So, that ended soon. Saphy was praticaly on her own until one of her brothers, Blake, had started talking to her, then playing with her, hanging out together until they were the best of friends. However, one day Saphy was talking to Blake about the sunset, which had made its appearance. The eldest brother, Kiao, was watching from the den, parents were out hunting, this was his oppotunity. Crouching low to the ground, he spent a moment listening to their chats, untill he decided that now, was the time to strike. Kiao pounced and pushed Saphy off the mountain, she rolled down uncontrolbly before reaching the bottom of the mountain. She tried to stand, but it was useless, she was injured horribly, easy prey. Sometime later, a black wolf who she came later to know as Azuil, took her to his pack. There he raised her in secrect from the pack and trained her to be strong willed, but shy. Life was perfect until the day another pack claimed territory. They fought valiently, but it wasnt good enough. Azuil was kindhearted, and had mercy on the wolf he was going to kill, but the other wolf was heartless and pinned Azuil to the floor, before dragging him away. Azuil made Saphy run and to never look back, never. She managed on her own until she found the Toxic valley pack, and they let her join.
Weakness: Saphy has always been naive when it came to friendship, she can be friendly, just not easily.
Strengths: Hunting, suprisingly she had a talent for it.
Personality: Saphy is very shy and it takes a while before she actually warms up to someone. However, she can be very friendly once you know her. She is strong willed, femenine and quiet.
PACK POSITON: hunter, please?

[Izzybella]

Account Name: Izzybella
Character Name: Alex
Age: Three
Powers: Unknown
Appearance: Alex is an albino wolf with blood red eyes. His front right paw is stained red (read bio) a little bit and no matter what he tries to do it won't come off.
History: Alex's pack abandoned him when he was born because he was albino. He just laid there yelping trying to get someone's attention to help him. A mamma dog from a neighboring town heard him and raised him as her own, but left him in the woods to protect him from her owner. Once he was able to walk she taught him how to hunt and fend for himself. One day as she was leaving him, Alex followed her home. She didn't notice him and she made her way to the farm. She got slower the closer she got then her master called for her. She walked towards him and was thrown into a cage for dog fights and was killed. Alex went mad and jumped the cage to attack the dog who killed his mother. He ended up wining the fight without getting any of the dog's blood on him, but until after the fight when he stepped in a pool of it leaking from the dog's neck where he ripped it with his mouth. After this he ran away and found himself wandering into the Valley.
Position applying for within the pack: Hunter

I hope it's alright I just copy pasted from the old one

[MidnightLunar]

Does shade heart know about this? Btw?

[Amethyst]

It seeemed as though he kind of semi-abandoned the RP, but not in the truest sense of the word does he know about it.

Izzy, you're accepted.

[MidnightLunar]

Kasolia, come on, I know you see this.

[Amethyst]

Do you think anybody else is going to join?

[squirlpowers]

Ill join if you give me a moment ^_^

Name: Brutus nickname: IronClaw
Age: Four
Powers: Super Howl and hardened claws
Appearance: He's a typical Grey wolf slightly larger then most hazel/green eyes and a chip out of his left ear.
Bio: Brutus was a typical wolf of course he ran with a pack and was born under the alpha his right of passage was too slay a bobcat causing his pack problems out on his hunt tho human hunters tracked and killed his pack leaving him a lonewolf which made him stronger
personality: A courageous wolf ready too die for his pack. A strict attitude and a open heart for those in need

(ill take any position and ill edit if you need me too)

[Amethyst]

can you explain what super howl is? you're accepted btw.

[squirlpowers]

An incredibly loud howl for intimidating, somewhat paralyzing and a warning system