The Delegates of Erimead {kingdomkeylight & Irell Starling}

[Irell Starling]

When we have character profiles or any other important information we want to keep track of I'll list it here.

[Irell Starling]

”If peace could really change the world it would have happened already.”

Name: Jader Sappoh
Age: 23
Job: Second Commander of The Black Coalition

Bios: At the age of twenty-one, Jader became at High Knight in Erimead. With that power he hoped to change the world for the better. But the more he traveled throughout the lands, the more he realized how drastically the country needed to change. When he spoke out about this to his superiors he was silenced and then eventually discharged. Jader been in The Black Coalition for over a year now and is dedicated to this group which promises real change.



”There’s no need to sugar coat things. You want me to babysit for you.”
Name: Laural Falco aka “Red”
Age: 21
Job: High Knight

Bios: Laural has just been promoted to the rank of High Knight and her first assignment is to escort one of the delegates to the summit. She is not thrilled to say the least and would rather the trip be over as soon as possible. Nevertheless, she is very loyal to Erimead and believes that civil war should be avoided at all costs, even if she does have to spend the next few weeks babysitting.

[kingdomkeylight]

Awesome characters now heres some of mine for now XD.
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"War, peace it really doesnt matter to me I get paid either way hun."
Name: Yuno Cagou aka Night
Job: SpearWoman/Scouter
Age: 24
Bio: Mercenary who's worked for the Black Coalition for about four years now. To her the trouble of war simple means more money for her pocket. Of course she is loyal to the group, but no one really knows if her opinions really matches theirs. When she was a child her father a weapon master taught her the spear to protect her mother, and younger siblings which she did until her fathers corpse was returned. After that she decided to split her ties with the others of her family to take care of herself.

"You say what I am doing is pointless? Well the people of Erimead have spoken much louder a opposite thought. And trust me your blade pointed at me wont make much a difference."
Name: Alphonse Swerch
Age: 19
Job: Delegate of Erimead
Bio: Clearly younger then most appointed for such a task Alphonse's skills however out weigh his age very easily. Though not exactly a fan of such a dangerous trek he has yeilded to the voice of his people to represent them at this meeting of powers to hopefully find a truce before Civil War breaks out. Coming from a noble family this young Delegate is quiet the gentleman always thinking of others before himself.... which is the reason he got stuck with this task. Alphonse would very much like to avoid blood shed.... and as such has no skill with any fighting styles then with a pen.

"Such matters are not ours to voice anymore.... the next generation will decide the path of the future."
Name: Isa Santoka
Age: 30
Job: Kings Guard/ temporary guardian of Alphonse
Bio: Was actually the original High knight until he felt his student Laural was better suited for the position. However a year after joining the Kings Guard unit he was specially requested to guard Alpohonse as a insurance promise to the Swerch family there son would return home alive. Having actually been friends with Alphonse's father and mother Isa gladly took the job.

[Irell Starling]

Awesome! Is there anything more you'd like to cover before we begin?

[kingdomkeylight]

Nope nothing is coming to mind anyways at the moment so either you can start or i'll make first post tomorrow night.

[Irell Starling]

Since I started the OOC, you can start the IC.

[kingdomkeylight]

And heres the IC, I didnt post for Yuno since the coalition is more in your control. Also sorry if the post seems short I wasn't really sure what to start with.

[Irell Starling]

Not a problem. I like how you set up the scenery so nicely. Few people I have wrote with do.

[Irell Starling]

Good post, I don't know if you are aware but you frequently misuse 'our' and 'are' which are both pronounced the same. "Are" means to be while "Our" possessive pronoun for a group of people.

Ex.
We are in trouble.
Our problem is that the enemy is attacking.

It's little confusing, I know. Is your native language English?

[kingdomkeylight]

Yes english is my native tongue. I usually mix up are, and our quiet a bit though....so I apologize if that happens from time to time.