Out of Character :::Sins of the Past:::

[OhGodOfWriting]

I really liked the way you described the temperature/air on the ship. It made a lot of sense, while still really lending to the whole creepy vibe of things:

"It was cold, a stark contrast to the warmth radiating from some unknown source within the bay. The air around was comfortable, but he felt no movement of it, as though the ambient temperature of the bay was conditioned to go without notice, to de-synthetize, or perhaps make lull one into not paying attention to what is around them."

I had a bit of trouble fully understanding the following, however:

"Before them a thin corridor, well lit, of circling silver plated walls, with an array of black faced panels spacing as they walked. Information terminals, Alexander could only guess… or perhaps they were something else."

Did you mean circular silver plated walls? Or are they walking in an actual circle? xD

[Dr Jekyll]

the corridor makes a circut.. one big circle..