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    Magnificent Bastard Jorick's Avatar
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    It's alright, nothing great. Also not shitty, so there's that. There were a couple issues with comma placement, but everything else was fine. 7/10.


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    Jorick has spoken, it is law.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jorick View Post
    It's alright, nothing great. Also not shitty, so there's that. There were a couple issues with comma placement, but everything else was fine. 7/10.
    Alright? I was hoping for good. ):

    Well, that's fine. I haven't written in ages, so I suppose I'm out of practice enough to excuse this first foray.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kill Bones View Post
    Your mom swallowed my pride






    ...Fucking fucktoasters, what am I, twelve?
    Fucktoasters?
    That shits toasty, yo.
    God Aza, stop changing your sig every fucking minute.
    BUT BUT I have to warn people about Squee in broken English D:
    Never, you say?



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    Quote Originally Posted by Foxes View Post
    Alright? I was hoping for good. ):

    Well, that's fine. I haven't written in ages, so I suppose I'm out of practice enough to excuse this first foray.
    Yup, being out of practice is a decent excuse. I've seen some of your writing in other times and places that'd easily rate a 9/10.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jorick View Post
    Yup, being out of practice is a decent excuse. I've seen some of your writing in other times and places that'd easily rate a 9/10.
    It's been so long since I've written anything I have no idea what you could possibly be referring too.

    Ew, rusty.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Foxes View Post
    It's been so long since I've written anything I have no idea what you could possibly be referring too.

    Ew, rusty.
    Well, there was that GoT RP that you made a couple posts in. Also random Spam things you did.


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    Can you rate my writing?









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    Quote Originally Posted by KuroTenshi View Post
    Can you rate my writing?
    If you really want me to, I guess. I'm no professional reviewer though, dunno why you'd care about my opinion.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Jorick View Post
    If you really want me to, I guess. I'm no professional reviewer though, dunno why you'd care about my opinion.
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    God Aza, stop changing your sig every fucking minute.
    BUT BUT I have to warn people about Squee in broken English D:
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