Want a lazy review of your writing?

[KuroTenshi]

Thanks Jorick :3 yeah I didn't describe the creatures because the plot I was playing was someone else's and I was afraid of describing them the wrong way

[Marrone]

I recall my wording being something along the lines of "if it's not allowed in the rest of the site, you can't showcase it in WOTM".

You didn't say "the rest of the site" but I'm sure you implied it. I'm fine with Lillian snipping it out. I rolled the die, thought that being in spam might help, thought that the explanations might help, but hey, if it doesn't than that's A-OK. It's supposed to be provocative and engaging, and if that's what it achieves, then I consider myself as a success, even if that strong emotion is rejection. But I mean, it was snipped because it disobeys the rules past a reasonable extent, and I'm not going to question the community standards and rules. If Lillian or any other Mod doesn't think it's fit for the site, I feel like they should take it off.

Still looking forward to the review on the John the Jump Roper. I got 'editors choice' on Teenink for it.

[Kason]

Hopefully this gives you something interesting to say to me

Im really hoping you have at least a bit of criticism. Regardless of its age as of now, that writing is among the better things I have produced.

[Charlie Sheen]

I would love an honest opinion from someone neutral... but I cant find even one link or address for any of my writing