I don't know. I guess all the full helms have "compress beast face" enchantments on them since Morrowind.
But really, I guess all the Swiftails have shallower faces than other Argonians? Man I don't know, willing suspension of disbelief.
Reposting this here so my other post isn't super long:
Thane Shadow is an incredibly non-Argonian name. Argonian names are something vaguely tribal sounding OR are given in a "Verbs-Many-Nouns" sort of way. Here's a list for reference. It's also fairly bland and cliche.Originally Posted by Razers Shadow
http://elderscrolls.wikia.com/wiki/C...rim:_Argonians
You also gave very little information about his appearance, like his height, body build, scars, war paint, notable facial features, etc.
The term you're looking for is "Regeneration" and this ability seems incredibly broken. People from this Shadow clan (an incredibly bland clan name that is also rather non-Argonian) can apparently heal themselves of serious injury at will, and the only drawback of it is that it makes them live longer (which is not by any means a drawback). You made several glaring grammatical errors in your history, all of which I have highlighted for your benefit. The writing is very sloppy and your history is basically one very big run-on sentence. The second sentence of your history only addresses your character's personality and should be in its own section.
The Skills section of the CS applies to skills that are actually a part of the Elder Scrolls game series, like Light Armor, One-handed, Alchemy, etc. Assassination and Regeneration are not a part of that skill set.
You've also forgotten to add a minor skills section, and you've erroneously added a gear section as well. However, I do agree that it's probably a good idea to have a gear section so people aren't magically pulling stuff out of nowhere. I think you should seriously consider adding one of those to the character sheet, Maya.
What really grinds my gears is that your actual history is 95% about Thane's clan and not about Thane himself. Just look. I highlighted the stuff about his clan in red and the stuff about Thane is green:
I excluded the last sentence because, once again, it's technically personality and not history. Oh, and in case I didn't make it clear enough, remember that this is all just one long, run-on sentence.Thane is the last of his clan of Assassin's Known as the Shadow clan, raised from a egg they knew how to fight and adapt in every part of Tamriel but what made Thane's Clan so uniqie and that was the Clan's trademark ability and that's Regeration with it they were able to recover injurys that they took in battle and freak accidents but it did have a cost, when it's used it makes the person live longer judging by the wound, but even with that abillity they were all killed by someone who betrayed the clan and had them all killed, but that's all just a memory now to Thane because he was only a child at the time and he used his Regeneration once in his life and that was at the clan was killed.
It's not a good sign when you can literally tell us not one thing that defines Thane as his own character. Everything that's about him ties back to his clan. What about his life? His dreams? His aspirations? His childhood? How was he raised? Did he like his parents? What's his favorite color? ANYTHING! You've told us nothing about Thane himself, or his ambitions or motivations, which means it's impossible for us to care about him as a character because there's nothing for us to care about.
It seems like you put very little effort into this profile, honestly. I don't really know if this RP's right for you. I don't want to sound elitist, but it seems like you'd be better off in Free.
