Calamity - Mercy for The Devil (OOC)

[Pumpkin Prince]

[Demonkin]

[Human]

Name: Susan Holmes
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Nationality: Canadian
Element: Fire
Personality description: Susan is good at playing the straight man, though she has her own playful side. She’s also determined, dead-set on improving herself through training. Not much is capable of getting her down, though plenty’s capable of ticking her off.
A brief description of appearance: Short, blonde hair with a black ribbon in it. Wears a thigh-length, hooded blue over-cloak. Underneath she wears a black suit with dress shoes.
The defect that defines you as a demon (tattoos, birthmarks, eyes): Susan’s right eye is a bright, crimson red.
Biography: Susan worked in the police for many years, with many commendations and a reputation for being a capable officer who could follow orders (though if you asked, she’d insist she was a loose-cannon with every barrel cocked and loaded). However, once the Demonkin were rendered visible to the Angelus, the true face of the police force was revealed to her as she barely escaped with her life. Jobless and with nowhere to go, she decided to join the fight against the demons.
Weapon: Vulcanus – A large, two-handed, single-bladed axe that synergises with Susan’s fire abilities.

[Demon]

Name: Surt Belenus
Element: Fire
Description of appearance: Red fauxhawk. Wears a black jacket over a red shirt with a chain, as well as black jeans.
Personality: Surt is well and truly a scrapper, always itching for a fight. His irritable attitude and lack of respect often gets him branded as a punk, though underneath that he has a strong sense of honour and valour.
Weapon: Hephaestus – A war hammer wielded in one hand, with a crimson head. Engraved on the handle are the words Fire, Walk With Me.
Alignment: Neutral Good

[Rinn]

[Demonkin]

[Human]

Name: Susan Holmes
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Nationality: Canadian
Element: Fire
Personality description: Susan is good at playing the straight man, though she has her own playful side. She’s also determined, dead-set on improving herself through training. Not much is capable of getting her down, though plenty’s capable of ticking her off.
A brief description of appearance: Short, blonde hair with a black ribbon in it. Wears a thigh-length, hooded blue over-cloak. Underneath she wears a black suit with dress shoes.
The defect that defines you as a demon (tattoos, birthmarks, eyes): Susan’s right eye is a bright, crimson red.
Biography: Susan worked in the police for many years, with many commendations and a reputation for being a capable officer who could follow orders (though if you asked, she’d insist she was a loose-cannon with every barrel cocked and loaded). However, once the Demonkin were rendered visible to the Angelus, the true face of the police force was revealed to her as she barely escaped with her life. Jobless and with nowhere to go, she decided to join the fight against the demons.
Weapon: Vulcanus – A large, two-handed, single-bladed axe that synergises with Susan’s fire abilities.

[Demon]

Name: Surt Belenus
Element: Fire
Description of appearance: Red fauxhawk. Wears a black jacket over a red shirt with a chain, as well as black jeans.
Personality: Surt is well and truly a scrapper, always itching for a fight. His irritable attitude and lack of respect often gets him branded as a punk, though underneath that he has a strong sense of honour and valour.
Weapon: Hephaestus – A war hammer wielded in one hand, with a crimson head. Engraved on the handle are the words Fire, Walk With Me.
Alignment: Neutral Good

I think she's supposed to be two versions of the same person...

[Captain Jenno]

I think she's supposed to be two versions of the same person...

If you're referring to her demon form, it can be whatever takes their fancy, it's not constrained to the limitations of humans.

[lantgreen]

Is my character accepted*

[Captain Jenno]

[Human]
Name: Valos
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Nationality: Irish
Element: Fire
Personality description: Valos, as a human, is a selfless man, he cares more about others than himself, wanting to protect all of those around him. He is kind at heart but hard shelled, he cares for the smallest and most innocent of things. He is ruthless and at times reckless, but it all ends well.

A brief description of appearance: About 6'8" (203.2 cm) broad shoulders, rough chest, bulky build, short brown spiked hair, emerald green eyes. He wears dark jeans with a red muscle shirt


Goal as an Angelus: To defeat those who wish to cause and wreak chaos upon Earth
Biography: TBE
Weapon: Sword with lava flowing inside of it


[Angel]
Name: Archon
Element: Light
Description of appearance: He stands shorter at 4' (121.92 cm) his shoulders narrow, his chest small and weak, his biceps are equal to match his size but his forearms are slightly larger, his skin glows brightly and his eyes solid color of gold, his hair becomes white and long reaching the middle of his back. He has no wings but floats low to the ground. He wears white armor with a silver trim, his skin shows at his biceps, hands, and head.

Personality: Same as above but with more determination to protect, willing to disobey direct orders and put himself in danger to protect the slightest thing

Weapon: Naginata that glows brightly and can penetrate even the darkest of armor

15' long (457.2 cm)

Alignment: Pure good

I'll be honest, since Angelus get their powers from their Angel half, their element should really match (Also, light isn't an element, I specify they share a school with demons.)

Also, the alignment "Pure good" doesn't exist, it's a reference to your prototypical roleplaying alignments, which are as follows:

Lawful Good
Neutral Good
Chaotic Good

Lawful Neutral
Neutral
Chaotic Neutral

Lawful Evil
Neutral Evil
Chaotic Evil

Furthermore, this isn't a criticism to your character, but more a note for everyone: The point of The Angelus is that angels don't necessarily have to be good, not every Angelus needs to be a saint. In fact, I encourage the idea of corruption purely because it brings more depth to otherwise stereotypical characters.

You can resubmit this now, or wait until I launch the second IC/OOC, as this one has failed to do its job. If you submit it now, I'll link it to the new OOC in the 'Demon/Angelus Roster' I plan to put on the first page.

[lantgreen]

Alright..well it was a lot to take in at first and I know I missed a few things, plus you didn't or that I didn't see, any list of alignments so I just bs that part...I'll wait for the second part

[Captain Jenno]

Alright..well it was a lot to take in at first and I know I missed a few things, plus you didn't or that I didn't see, any list of alignments so I just bs that part...I'll wait for the second part

Sorry, I didn't mention the alignment list because I presumed everyone would know them: They're an important aspect of D&D, which is hardly underground, especially on a roleplaying site.