Survival! Broken Realms

[Rtron]

....okay....I don't see what the problem is....but if you want me to edit, I shall.

[Shimmerene]

...The only truly major and famous battle he participated was the Battle of Thermopylae under the spartan commander Leonidas. He barely escaped the final slaughter with his life. Spent the rest of his years until now going from battle to battle, war to war, until he settled down in the Alaskan frontier. Did I mention he's extremely long lived?

Not sure how I feel about the backstory for your character, but vaguely alright with the werewolf aspect. This is a sci-fi RP, as implied by the fore-ward when the viewer sees the "Each of them, though similarly bound, hail from a different alien race".

As said, it's not entirely your species that is the problem, it is the backstory and the longevity of your character.

Right, I understand that. It's why I used the word Longevity. I do have issue with a human/werewolf character being thousands of years old, and trust me, I can come up with all sorts of inventive ways to end a character in this RP.

I have bolded and underlined the points you should re-read. Also, as I skimmed over it the first time, you are referencing a major historical/fictional battle, which had no survivors. In any version. While I understand this is not in the Advanced section, there are still standards to be adhered to. Also congratulations, you forced me to learn a feature of the forum I had not used yet.

[Rtron]

That was kinda my point. Noted by history as dead,etc. etc. But, I'll edit.

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The quote feature? Or the bold feature? Or the underline feature?

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[Shimmerene]

The quote feature? Or the bold feature? Or the underline feature?

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Honestly, I don't think it's a concern as to which feature it was(M-M-M-MULTI-QUOTES) but the new background is better. Still need at least three more people before I open the OOC and IC.