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    My first advanced RP (name pending)

    So this will be my first ever Advanced RP, I've been meaning to do something in this section for a while. And at present all the Rps I'm in seem idle... Best time then to dig up an older idea, tweak it a little, and put it in this section.

    This RP is inspired by the Shin Megami Tensei series, and is something of my own take on the Persona sub-series, though many other elements are present as well.

    There exists a plane mirroring our own, it has no name and never interacts with the ordinary world. This plane is a warped version of Earth, constructed out of human subconscious. Fears on Earth give rise to demons here, dreams are represented physically here. Demons war with each other and with docile constructions. It is a warzone.
    Humans have never traveled here, indeed, 99.9% are unaware of it's existence. There is a way in though. Rarely, individuals who are dreaming may instead enter their subconscious. This most often happens to lucid dreamers and those with minor psychic abilities. Visiting the subconscious mind, sometimes called an “inner world” doesn't guarantee entrance to the plane of mind though. When someone who is dreaming their inner world realizes what they are seeing, that everything reflects them personally, they may gain control. Within everybody's inner world is a door, this door leads to the plane of mind. When the door is opened within an inner world however, the plane of mind begins to affect reality. Demons may surface, and it is a sign of the end times.

    Within the plane of mind, human beings are changed. Within an ordinary dream, the dreamer's form varies, and in an inner world, the dreamer is always exactly like on earth, but in the plane of mind, they take a different form. They become a representation of their entire being, a form almost indistinguishable from the Demons that wander. Inner forms vary, but they are rarely human like. They are also all powerful, capable of magics and fighting Demons. Of course they need to fight the Demons, because even though they don't appear human, the Demons recognize them as a source of power to be consumed.

    If a human were to survive long enough within the plane of mind to return to Earth, they will find no time has passed, but also, Magic starts to manifest in reality. Those who return will have a trinket on their person back on Earth. It is similarly a part of their subconscious. The trinket can open a direct portal to the plane of mind or the owner's inner world, and ultimately, should the holder gain understanding of their self and be in a time of great need, will allow access to magic on Earth.

    Will you open your door?

    So that's the gist, this is still rough and some things may change. But things will begin with our characters first experiences within the plane of mind (I am looking for a good name for the plane that isn't a simple description, please suggest any ideas!) and return to reality. Note that they will not meet up immediately. Instead, circumstances will drag them back to the plane of mind a little bit later and they will meet up there, then return to Earth which will be under significant supernatural attack by that point.

    Please wait for me to finish up my character before you start on yours. It will help give an idea for how some things work in the RP.

    Character Template.

    Name: First, Last, Nicknames. Middle name is optional.
    Gender: If you really want to, put sexuality here too.
    Age: I don't particularly care, just no mix of really old guys and preteens or anything please. I like 15-25 as a rough range personally.
    Appearance: Use both a picture and words if you can, pictures can't say everything. I understand you may not have a picture you want to use and that's alright.
    Biography: Some detail please. 3-4 paragraphs at least.
    Personality: You can be really detailed here or be really vague and explain more through IC posts, I don't mind.
    Interests: What he/she likes to do, hobbies and such.
    Skills: some overlap with interests, but just because you are good at something doesn't mean you like to do that.
    Possessions: Things the character keeps with them. Think cellphones, wallet, etc.

    Inner World Sheet.
    Name: The character names their own inner world.
    Description: what is it like, is it based on something from Earth? Is it completely empty or do subconscious beings inhabit it? Can it change a little bit? And where is the door?

    Inner Form sheet
    Name: Named by the character, again
    Appearance: Can be monstrous, should contain a lot of the character's personality in subtle ways. Keep away from being too close to human. An anthropomorphic creature is fine but an eternally armored knight isn't.
    Themes: What does it represent?
    Abilities: What can it do? Remember both physical and magical abilities.
    Personality: An inner form doesn't necessarily act like the person it represents. Think of it like how you act different around certain people or circumstances. Remember that it is also a gift of power and that may influence the personality too
    Trinket: Appearance and traits. Also what it comes from.

    Constructive criticism is welcomed!
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    Hopefully this will help explain a few details on how things work.
    Side Note, thank God for the auto-save. My browser crashed when I was halfway done and I nearly lost this...


    There, I feel the folks of the advanced RP section may judge me thoroughly, so I did my best on the character. I didn't reveal everything, wanted to save some things for later.
    Back, sorta. not gunna be involved in too many RPs for a while, still getting my writing skills back.

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    Character Template.

    Name: Richard Matthews

    Gender: Male

    Age: 32

    Appearance: Richard stands at 5ft 9in, and weighs 225lbs. He has dark brown hair, and bright green eyes. If you could ever see them. He's muscled, and athletic. And he wears this mask always. Why? That will be explained in his bio.

    Biography: Richard served in the military for many years, before a horrible accident put him in retirement. He was with his squad, heading out to relive another squad off patrol duty. They met and were about to go their separate ways, when they were ambushed. Most of the squads died immediately, in a hail of gun fire. Richard managed to dive behind a rock, and was in the midst of calling in back up, when the ambushers brought out a flame thrower.

    Luckily and unluckily for Richard, they didn't quite know how to properly use it, and ended up turning their backs to one of the squad still alive. He took the shot. An explosion followed, apparently they had other explosives with them for the explosion was much bigger than it should have been, and Richard was thrown from his hiding spot. The last thing he remembers is searing heat, intense pain, screaming, then everything went black.

    When he awoke, he was in the military emergency room, swathed in bandages. A doctor came in and told him to get some more rest, he needed it, after what he had been through. After that, Richard faded in and out of consciousness for the next few days. When he awoke and was lucid, the doctors broke it to him. He was the only survivor of the ambush, and the flames from the explosion left him horribly scarred, with the mask he had been wearing that day melded with his skin. Removing it would cost money. Money Richard didn't have. So, he opted to leave it.

    After being discharged, Richard moved into seclusion, rarely going out. He made enough money from investments he had made before going into service to not have to leave the house much. To occupy himself, he largely read , crafted objects, and played chess either against himself, or online. His fascination with flames, the very thing that left him like this, began with his dreams.

    Strangely prophetic dreams, always outlined in flames, or with the sound of flames crackling in the background. These are largely out of his control and have happened rarely. But, he trusts them, and for some reason has a fascination with flames as a direct result of that. He became adept at manipulating fire through little gizmos he built. He has begun feeling a restlessness, a need to do something though he doesn't know what, recently. It's a nagging feeling at the back of his mind, an itch he can't scratch.

    Personality: Richard is calm, and views things with a realist's views. He is neither optimistic, or pessimistic, but takes the situation at face value and tries to figure out a way to deal with it. In his soldier years, he was friendly, cheerful, and loyal, though it remains to be seen if those traits still exist in the man today..

    Interests: Largely reading, though he enjoys crafting gizmos from whatever he has on hand, and playing chess.

    Skills: He can create something useful out of almost any material given to him, has some proficient skill in CQC, retains information fairly well. His inner form grants him instinctual....open formness, and being extremely accurate with anything that needs to be aimed.

    Possessions: A swiss army knife a simple one, just some blades, a nail filer, a can opener, a screwdriver, and a few other things he added on over the years, a box of matches, his combat knife, and a pendant he wears around his neck that is a small ruby, the back worn smooth by an unconscious and incessant thumb rubbing it.


    Inner World Sheet.

    Name: Base Camp

    Description: It is exactly like Richard's base camp before the ambush. Indistinct barracks and other buildings orderly arranged, soldiers marching here and there, orders being shouted, vehicles and supplies being moved, with some minor changes. There is a large library and work shop in the same place, a huge crackling bonfire in the middle of the camp, and the outer edges are surrounded by a wall of flames. The flames are an unending, with no breaks in them. Except for one place. Where they turn into a hall, that leads to Richard's door. Richard has never thought to explore the flames because, he has been kept largely occupied and happy at the main camp

    Inner Form sheet

    Name: Pyro

    Appearance: Pyro is literally living flame. It can take any form it wishes, but will always be flames.

    Themes: It represent's Richard before the ambush as well, it's friendly, cheerful, loyal and is rather hard anger, which is funny if you think about it. And of course, Pyro is a direct representation of Richard's fascination with flames. And as for the form shaping it represents both Richard's desire for freedom and his wish. His wish is to be free of the mask, to 'change' his form some how, and well freedom to him is tied directly into that.

    Abilities: Pyro's physical abilities are...lacking. At most it's fast. It's living flame after all. Most of what it touches burns. Though with concentration, it can create a minor barrier to actually hold items. It's magical abilities, however, are supreme. It can fire fiery projectiles of any size and shape at will with extreme accuracy, it can make anything, other than itself, out of flames. Flaming sword? You betcha. Flaming ball of fire that goes ahead? Yup. Another Pyro? Don't tempt it.

    Personality: Pyro is largely the opposite of Richard today. He is calm, Pyro is easily excitable. He views things as a realist, Pyro is a permanent optimist. It's friendly, cheerful, loyal and is rather hard anger.

    Trinket: A pendant that stays on Pyro no matter what form it takes. It is a ruby, in the shape of flames, and is the only thing solid about Pyro. It does all the basic set of things Trinkets do, but is largely thought based. You think what you wish it to do, it does it. It can absorb a fair amount of heat as well.
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    I'll have a CS up tomorrow! I'm definitely digging this idea ^^!

    Hey everyone! I'm currently in the trenches of finals week at Uni, so I won't be around as often as I'd like to be. If my responses are slow; I assure you, I am not ignoring you. Promise! I'm just super crunched for time, so please bear with me!

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    Just realized my character's initials spell Day, unintentional, but amusing.
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    Indeed.



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    I promised a CS, but it isn't done yet. My apologies there; I'm sure I'll have it done by tomorrow!

    Just reread the initial post, and if you're still looking for some name ideas for the Plane, here are some:

    Oblivion
    Pandaemoria
    Nephilia or Nephilim
    Purgomorta

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    Just some ideas. Feel free to discard or change them ^^!

    Hey everyone! I'm currently in the trenches of finals week at Uni, so I won't be around as often as I'd like to be. If my responses are slow; I assure you, I am not ignoring you. Promise! I'm just super crunched for time, so please bear with me!

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    Interested in this, expect a CS to be up today.
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    Personally, I like Purgomorta



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