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    I.N.F.L.U.X. [ OOC / Sign Ups ]




    Reboot of "I n f l u x"

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    The FIL-46 "Raptor" Gunship propelled itself through the night sky, the engines roaring as Reaver Squad prepared themselves for landing on the planet below. The marines of Reaver Squad were looking forward to touching down, as they've been aboard several battle cruisers and have constantly been in slip space every since they had left the Cacharias Sector. Lieutenant James Hounder took the brief moments before touchdown to review the twelve Imperial Marines under his command. There was a silent weapons check between the members of Reaver Squad to ensure there were no last minute glitches in their equipment. Staff Sergeant Miranda Veils, the energetic pilot of the gunship tentatively rubbed her eyes as she turned behind her.

    "Alright boys, we're coming down into a nearby canyon, it's about two clicks from your objective so it should be a good place to touch down and get your feet wet before you guys start pushing towards the nearby city."

    Lieutenant Hounder nodded towards the pilot, pressing his hand onto the communications display integrated to his helmet, "This is Reaver to Bastion, Reaver squad is touching down on the planet surface now, we'll move in to investigate the planetary distress signal in a few moments."

    Lieutenant Hounder waited for a few seconds, but there was no reply from their Battle Cruiser. Lieutenant Hounder looked up into the night sky at the Bastion, which was slowly orbiting over the small planet. "Bastion, do you read? This is Reaver squad, I repeat, we are landing on the surface in a few moments,"

    Sergeant Veils pressed a few buttons on her heads up displays before turning to the Lieutenant, "I don't think you're going to be able to reach Bastion, this damn weather's putting a number on our communications."

    The Lieutenant shrugged, "Understood, put us down."

    As the Raptor fell to a slow hover and touched down upon the dirt surface of the small planet LARIAT-TWO, the twelve soldiers hastily disembarked from the Raptor Gunship, scanning the nearby plateaus with the barrels of their rifles. It wasn't long before a series of eerie screeches and unknown noises rang out from the darkness. The Imperial Marines scanned the area with their Night Vision heads up displays, but there was nothing to be found, although the noises seemed to be getting louder and louder. Lieutenant Hounder opened up his communications channel once more to get confirmation from their battle cruiser.

    "This is Reaver actual to Bastion, we've touched down on the surface and are preparing to move out, over."

    There was a slight pause, before a crackling response came over the channel, "This is Bastzzzzt to Reaver actual, zzzt. You need to get back here immediately! zzzt! The ship zzztt. The ship is under att-"

    Lieutenant Hounder bit his lip, "You need to repeat that Bastion, we didn't get that."

    "Sir! Multiple contacts sighted!" A marine beckoned

    The Lieutenant shouldered his IR-667 rifle, glaring down the sights and towards the nearby treeline. The Lieutenant's jaw dropped as hundreds of shambling humanoids eerily emerged from the nearby treeline. The soldiers of Reaver Squad began barking targets toward each other, and an orchestra of small arms fire rang out in an immaculate chorus. Lieutenant Hounder put two magazines worth of ammunition down range towards the shambling corpses that were slowly drawing closer and closer to the Landing Zone. The twelve men simply didn't have enough firepower to keep the unknown horde at bay. Suddenly, the Raptor Gunship's 35mm cannon blared, cutting down targets in a 180 degree angle in front of the gunship. The engines on the Raptor began to flare and the propellers began to come alive.

    Sergeant Miranda Veils opened the hatch of the cockpit and poked her head above the glass, "Hounder! You need to get your asses back on the gunship! We're going to get overrun!"

    The Lieutenant nodded as a terrifying scream pierced through his ears beside him, he turned to his left to watch in horror as his squadmate was ripped to shreds by one of the shambling corpses. The Lieutenant quickly gunned down the creature with his rifle, but it was too late, the landing zone had been overrun by these creatures. The Lieutenant pulled back to the side of the gunship, firing off another barrage of rounds in front of him. The Lieutenant felt helpless as his men were mobbed upon and brutally murdered by hundreds of corpses. Lieutenant Hounder and three of the remaining survivors climbed into the gunship in a panic, hundreds of these creatures were in arms reach of the ship, their decomposing arms reaching onto the sides of the hull.

    "Get us out of here Miranda!" The Lieutenant beckoned, firing his rifle in a vain attempt to stall the horde.

    The pilot panicked, "I'm trying goddamnit!"

    The Raptor Gunship's propellers blared, and the helicopter lifted a few feet from the planet's surface, but the decaying flesh of the horde was already upon the craft, the creatures were climbing over the sides and clawing their way onto every nook and cranny of the ship.

    "Come on! Lift off!" The pilot smashed her fist into the side of the gunship as she pulled as hard as she could on the vertical throttle. The Raptor whirred, but the weight of the horde on top of the craft was just too much for the gunship to bear. The rotten corpses dug themselves into the propellers and engine blocks of the gunship, and after gaining approximately ten feet of altitude, The Raptor crashed back down into the surface below. With no means of escape, the corpses climbed aboard the gunship grabbing a hold of the remaining survivors of Reaver Squad. Lieutenant Hounder fired the few rounds he had left in his magazine before the rotten claws of the horde dug into his flesh, his screams muffled by the groans of the oncoming horde. The pilot stared in horror as the creatures climbed onto her ship and mutilated the remains of the men that she'd served with for many years. Sergeant Veils punched open her cockpit, and made a desperate attempt to flee the downed craft, to her horror, however, the creatures were already climbing overhead. A shambling monster climbed into her cockpit and its rotten flesh grabbed hold of her latex flightsuit. The doomed pilot shrieked as the monster's sharp claws pierced through her flight suit and into her soft skin, "No. Please. No." the pilot begged, shuddering as the monster happily began its feast upon the young pilot. The pilot tried to shake free from the creature's grasp, tears dripping from her eyes in fear as the creature ripped into her flesh.

    There would be no survivors in this darkness.



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    Synopsis

    In an era of space colonization, technological revolution and cultural change, the Holy Ecclesian Empire has expanded humanity across the distant stars. An autocratic Imperial faction, the Ecclesian Empire is a brutal imperial force that holds dominion over thousands of human colonies spread across the galaxy. Under the watchful eyes of Emperor Malcolm II, the Ecclesian Empire stands as a golden age of the ever growing human empire. After numerous assassination and coup attempts in the Ecclesian Empire, it was agreed that a specialized Bodyguard force outside of the Imperial Armed Forces' jurisdiction was necessary to maintain explicit order in the Empire. Thus the Imperial Praetorians were born.

    It has been thirty years since the founding of the Imperial Praetorian Project, a planet known as Lariat Two in the Cautellan System has gone dark with multiple distress signals beaconed to Imperial Command. The Imperial Armed Forces deployed "The Bastion" an Imperial, Siennan-Class Battlecruiser to investigate. This Battlecruiser was never heard from again. As Lariat Two was an important industrial and manufacturing planet, Emperor Malcolm II found it explicitly necessary to deploy his personal Praetorians to the scene, as the Imperial Armed Forces proved to be incompetent in handling the delicate situation of the disappearance of an entire planet. The Genesis, a prototype Battlecruiser attached to the Praetorians was sortied to investigate the disappearance of The Bastion and to investigate the planet of Lariat Two.


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    The Praetorian Project




    Praetorian 8th Unit "Archangel"

    You are a Praetorian. A genetically enhanced and modified warrior raised outside of the jurisdiction of the several branches of the Imperial Armed Forces (IAF). The Praetorians answer to none other than the explicit will of the Royal Family themselves, and are tasked with working as elite, undercover operatives, bodyguards and shock troops for the Imperial Royal Family. Donning the infamous "Eclipse" system, the Praetorians are feared across the galaxy. The reputation of the Praetorians are so renowned, Grunts across the Imperial Armed Forces have been known to deploy human-sized dolls that look like Praetorians to instantly draw fire and instill fear into the enemy. While it is always a welcoming sight to fight alongside one of the most renowned Special Operations units in the galaxy, it's also a good sign that shit will hit the fan, if it hasn't already.

    You serve as a member of a newly formed Praetorian Unit known as Archangel Squad, you have been deployed alongside a prototype Battlecruiser "The Genesis" to investigate a paranormal disappearance of an entire human colony and a missing Imperial Battlecruiser on the planet known as Lariat-Two.

    The Praetorian Project is a complicated project with many niche's:









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    Birth Name: The Birth Name of the Praetorian. Optional.

    Alias: Praetorians discard their Birth Names in favor of Call-Signs, these serve as names for Praetorians.

    Generation: "First and Second Generation Praetorians are almost as different as night and day, but they share one thing in common, they both will kick your ass." - Cpt. Hounder, 103rd SF Ranger Regiment

    Age: Please take the Generation into consideration. If you want to have an exception, please contact me via PM.

    Gender: Same rules as above.

    Appearance: A picture is preferred, but I would also like you to have a written description to accompany it. Real Life pictures and artwork are acceptable. Try to avoid overt anime themes if possible.

    Personality: Obvious.

    Biography: Where is your Praetorian from? How did they become a Praetorian? What missions have they been on, if any?

    Armaments: Each character has 3,000 Points to spend, please refer to the munitions section above

    ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE
    The ECLIPSE System contains a highly versatile, adaptive A.I. software that controls the many systems of the ECLIPSE unit.

    Name of A.I.: The name of your Artificial Intelligence program.

    A.I. Personality: The adaptive learning technology in the Artificial Intelligence tends to give each A.I. a personality.
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    Praetorian 8th Unit, Archangel Squad



























    Other Character(s) (Subject to change.)



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    I know begging gets me nowhere. But I really want into this RP. Haven't been this excited for a game that I wasn't GMing in a while.
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    Birth Name: Forgotten. Unfortunately. His AI knows it, but does not tell him.

    Alias: Raiden

    Generation: Second

    Age: Twenty

    Gender: Male. Unusually.

    Appearance:




    Personality: Raiden is childish, treating violence and his missions as a game. He was so heavily conditioned in the Second Gen program that his personality is warped to something that sometimes doesn't even seem human. His understanding of death is poor. He mostly works towards his mission, whatever it is. With a determination and single-mindedness that at times, could seem admirable, but otherwise, obsessive.

    When interacting with others, he is totally helpless. Often not understanding the need for communication at all other than basic orders and direction. He is almost like a tool, something to be ordered around, rather than a person. This is not to say he does not have his own ideas. Indeed, if he didn't, he would be a very poor operative in a world of vague directives. He is good at working out stealth and infiltration plans.

    Most of his personality is influenced by his AI. This AI was made to control him, provide extra conditioning constantly, and keep him in line. Raiden believes that his AI is his friend, but the AI is only acting around him. Telling him what he needs to hear to do certain things, and occasionally messing with his mind to complete the objective.

    Biography: Raiden was born to an upper class family in the research division of the government. His mother was zealous about the Praetorian project and pulled strings to get her son in immediately, despite not being totally able to handle the conditioning and gene manipulation. Because he essentially grew up being prepared as a Praetorian his whole life, he has little to no knowledge of a normal life.

    His father, on the other hand, did not want their son immediately used as a soldier and a test subject. He tried to rescue his son during the early project, but not long after he lost his son, his wife (whom he was suspecting of having some sort of personality disorder by now) murdered him. Keeping her son in the program at all costs. In addition, she crafted a specialized AI for him. His AI is designed to subtly control him through it's actions, and also create a dependency on his suit. This was in addition to the usual Second Gen conditioning. Which further harmed his mind.

    As he rose through the training, he found a preference for blades, like most Gen Twos. His AI, designed to make him go against the curve wherever possible, convinced him to pick up firearms as well. Handguns mostly. Instead of making him a Gen Two that focused on guns, Raiden became well rounded, decent with both close and mid-range combat. Though at long range he is lacking.

    Raiden's Alias was randomly assigned. A combination of conditioning and his AI's additional manipulations made him accept this as his actual name. Leaving his old name behind at first, and then forgotten entirely. His AI occasionally tortures him into staying in line by revealing this knowledge, which will then be promptly forgotten.

    His first, and so far, only, mission. Was more of a test for him than a mission. Numerous insurgents with potentially sympathetic motives were all assassinated by him. The catch was, it was a long term mission. Five years long in fact. Raiden infiltrated the rebel group and rose through the ranks, guided by his AI and conditioning into being a believable insurgent himself. Indeed, he may have actually believed himself to be on their side. Unfortunately, he was a textbook Manchurian Agent, on secret orders from his AI, he murdered those who had come to trust him. And destroyed this entire rebellion from the inside. None of them ever suspected him. Most of this operation is remembered by him as a standard assassination mission.

    He was assigned to Genesis as a spy, stealth operative, and potential assassin, should anything in the mission go awry. His AI may possess information about the operation that would be beneficial to the team to know, but likely not sharing.

    He was trained to use his suit's powers for stealth and emergencies only. Relying mostly on his own combat skills. He is resourceful therefore, but not always as effective as those who use their suit more freely.

    Armaments:

    Two SYER-336 Stinger handguns. Held on both sides of his waist. With four extended 28 round magazines on hand. He prefers to only use them when necessary and conserve ammunition.

    He possesses a Seraph 19L, though traditionally an officer's blade, Raiden prefers it's simple, straight design for direct combat. It is sheathed on his back, and he typically holds it in a reverse-grip style. Though he is capable with it in a normal style as well.

    Finally, he has the Seraph 19S, the second blade was modified to merge into his left gauntlet. On a simple muscle controlled input, the blade will extend from his wrist (yes, just like the Assassin's Hidden Blade) and can also be detached entirely as a backup weapon. Or even used in tandem with his other blade, though that's a rare technique for him.

    Theme Song: Hope you don't mind me adding this.


    ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE
    The ECLIPSE System contains a highly versatile, adaptive A.I. software that controls the many systems of the ECLIPSE unit.

    Name of A.I.: Azzy to Raiden. His official name is guarded as a secret.

    A.I. Personality: Azzy was programmed as a sort of restraining bolt for Raiden. Keeping him focused on the mission, mentally capable, and combat ready. He can be demanding, brutal at times, but also apparently kind and caring. Their interactions are strange. Azzy is coming to hate Raiden though, and their relationship could sour if he rebels.

    Kay, Done. Tell me if there is anything you want me to change.
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    That was fast. Very fast. Didn't even get the chance to reserve the next posting spot for myself haha.
    Whoops. There ya go.

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    The image above was retrieved during Thoran's first deployment from one of the video feeds inside the rebel's fortress.
    Credits to Shimmering Sword on Deviantart.

    Birth Name: Thoran Anders

    Alias: Prominence One

    Generation: Second Generation Praetorian

    Age: 24

    Gender: Male

    Appearance:Thoran, like all other Praetorian is an epitome, if not surpassing one of human physical prowess. He stands at slightly less than seven feet and weighs in at an impressive 300lb. when out of armour. Though he doesn’t look it, with his relatively slim frame, his muscles have all been honed to the highest possible degree.

    Even putting aside his physique and height, he looks quite memorable. He is affected with heterochromia, one of his eyes being crimson red and the other azure blue, making it quite easy for others to remember him. With a light, almost pale, complexion Thoran looks as if he doesn’t get much sunlight, which in a sense could be true. His ethnicity would be hard to place, a mixture of European and Chinese. His head is shaved, though Thoran doesn’t bear any impressive scars from his training or missions. At the least not where people can see them.

    His chest and legs are a mess though, after the several close calls. Minor scars stretch from his knees all the way up to his stomach, gifts from a certain “friend” who liked to take pot shots at his crotch. A large scar spans from his right shoulder all the way to his lowest left rib. Another goes vertically down his back from left shoulder to hip. Both serve as reminders to Thoran that, though strong beyond belief, Praetorians are still mortals.

    Personality: One of more mentally stable Second Generation Praetorians, Thoran isn’t affected by any obvious instabilities. Outside of battle and unbefitting, some would say for someone of his designation and strength, Thoran is rather easy going. He’s learned to let most things simply go, not taking things too seriously most of the time. The first few times he didn’t, before he really understood his strength, had a few people ending up in the hospital. Not the type to hide his emotions, whether he’s unhappy or excited, it’s quite easy to tell. So despite his large intimidating stature, it could be said that amongst the Second and even some of the First Generations, Thoran is one of the most human. Granted that doesn’t mean he’s easy to get along with, as his personality is almost slacker-like, but at the very least there's little chance he'll snap without notice.

    When on duty though, his personality takes a complete 180, his training and A.I taking over. Professional, ruthless and efficient Thoran has learned that emotions rarely have a place on the battlefield. Regardless of how he feels during a mission he’ll keep it locked behind a straight face and finish his task as best as he can see fit. In times of desperation or extreme stress though, Thoran has been known to sink into a cold berserker state. An utter disregard for his own safety combined with the single-mindedness that only wants his mission complete, means a big bad Praetorian.

    Biography: Thoran was born to a rare couple, his father one of the First Generation Praetorian that managed to leave service alive, his mother one of the many that worked on the scientific side of the project. His father left service as a Praetorian when he was only 30, a survivor of the mission that wiped out the others of his squad. While the loss was great, their mission was a success, but his father had been too badly injured to continue service. As a result he retired from the military, awarded for his valour and bravery, to lead his own life. That life became entwined with Thoran’s mother after Baldr was scouted out as a trainer for the Second Generation Praetorians.

    Thoran was raised as a possible candidate for the Second Generation Praetorians from his birth. The child went through the same enhancements for mental and physical capabilities though having loving parents around him seemed to be enough to ward off any mental corruption that occurred in so many other subjects. Unlike most other Second Generations, Thoran was brought into the program quite late, at the age of 14. Out of his own free will as his childish idealism had been crushed by his father, who had wanted Thoran to understand completely what he was getting himself into, Thoran began his training to become one of the Praetorians.

    Despite starting late, thanks to the enhancements and training his father had put him through, Thoran was no weaker than any of the other candidates. Surprisingly, he actually did better than many others, able to think quickly on his feet and out of the box, compared to the by the books method many Second Generations preferred. Sure he lacked a bit of theory and “professionalism” his peers had honed, but he got results. On the side to the standard training all Praetorians went through, his father also taught him from his own experiences. Things that many of the Second Generations had forgotten or just outright ignored. Trusting one’s squad mates and in turn reciprocating that trust. Cold steel over intangible energies. All things that made him different from a Second Gen, but not quite a First.

    His first mission came in when Thoran had just turned 18, just slightly over 4 years of training under his belt. The call for reinforcements came in during a subjugation of rebels that had been on the rise on one of the outer rim planets and Thoran was deployed in a test of his abilities and a rite of adulthood. Normally a Praetorian wouldn’t have been deployed, but then again normally reinforcements wouldn’t be needed in bringing down rebels. Thrown into live combat was something even the most brutal of training regiments couldn’t prepare Thoran for. The explosions conjured by artillery, the constant ringing of machine gun fire all mixed up with a cacophony of human voices. Evidently, the rebels were far from being unprepared insurgents, forcing the Imperial Armed Forces into a prolonged siege against their fortress.

    Thoran’s mission was simple, infiltrate the insurgent’s base and drop the defense system that prevented the Armed Forces from establishing a foothold. Simple, but not easy. A solo covert operation, Thoran managed to slip under and pass the defense field, during an assault on the fortress that was meant to cover his activities. Whoever was commanding the rebels seemed to have read up on the List though, and Thoran was greeted by a hail of gunfire and troops the moment he stepped foot into the base. Pinned down and losing ground, Thoran and his A.I unleashed all the energy contained in the four Ionized Generators, resulting in the creation of what was dubbed to be an Avatar.

    It was a perfect mix of defense and offense, if wasteful. Bullets were stopped in their tracks as they impacted against the energy given form while Thoran ripped through the rebel’s ranks, a literal berserker. By the time the defense system had fallen, many of the rebels were already dead, torn to shreds by the rampaging Thoran. The Praetorian didn’t escape unharmed though, nearly dead from the various injuries sustained by going against dozens of enemies by himself. It would be a long time until Thoran would be able to serve again, but the accomplishment of his mission proved him no longer just a trainee, but rather a fully-fledged Praetorian, complete with his own call sign Prominence One.

    It’s been 6 years since that mission and Thoran has returned to active duty many years ago. His mastery over the Eclipse armour has improved and despite his relatively young age, he’s served the Royal Family on many missions. Though not a veteran by any means, he’s no longer green and has long since earned his stripes.

    Armaments:
    Primary Armament (1800 points Total)
    • 24 Inch Barrel IAR-667 – With Mark V Suppressor Unit, Vertical Fore-grip and Digital Optical Scope (1250 points) Carries 11 7.92mm Case-less, 30rnd Magazines (550 points)

    Secondary Armaments (1200 Points Total)
    • SYER-336 Stinger – With Detachable Suppressor (900 points) Carries 3 0.44 28 rnd Hi-Capacity Magazines (300 Points)

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    Name of A.I: Shiek-20, Referred to as Sakky by Thoran

    A.I History/ Personality: Shiek-20 is the official designation assigned to the A.I within Thoran’s Eclipse suit. Due to Thoran’s more natural behaviour, Shiek is also much more human like than many other A.I. Transferred from the Eclipse Armour onto Thoran’s imbedded PC after their first mission; Sakky has been Thoran’s constant companion over the years. Though A.Is are genderless, Sakky has taken to using a feminine voice when addressing Thoran.

    Shiek’s personality is slightly strange in that it is always a foil to Thoran’s. It’s odd for sure, but seeing how it makes for great conversations between the two of them, Thoran rarely cares. Shiek is serious whenever Thoran’s out of missions and operations and described by Thoran as uptight, strict and a no-fun allowed sort of guardian. During missions and operations though, Sakky switches to a more casual and energetic personality, strange as it is. Genki is the best way to describe Sakky as Thoran puts it, and despite how distracting it may seem, Thoran actually finds Sakky’s constant bantering and commentary relaxing and focusing, even in the most stressful of situations.
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    Birth Name: Lucas Alexander

    Alias: Atlas

    Generation:
    First Generation

    Age: 41

    Gender: Male

    Appearance:


    Atlas stands at 5ft 11in tall. Under the helmet and armor is a lean framed man, to some not seeming to have enough muscle to work with the armor, let alone on the level a Praetorian would require, but this would be far from the truth. With a clean buzz cut that he regularly keeps up with and patchwork scarring alongside the left side of his face, due to an explosive that tore through his helmet in a much earlier mission, and the previously mentioned lean frame that hides the surgery from making him into a First Generation Praetorian well, out of armor his appearance is highly deceiving if one overlooks the scarring pattern across the left of his face. In armor, he ignores the borderline religious tradition of the Second Gen Praetorians to keep the white armor appearance, using whatever paint job would provide the best ability to blend into his surroundings, without taking Generator power to due so.

    Personality:
    Atlas is rock steady and a cool operator, using plans as outlines and general direction rather than a series of steps to be followed, in order, to complete the mission at hand. When given leeway to operate how he sees fit, he'll often vanish into the surroundings, heading for vantages and high points to flank and call out incoming threats, not trusting technology when he can use his own two eyes. This flexibility extends itself to his interpretation of rules and regulations, being borderline insubordinate at times, but knows when not to push the line, and his luck, even if he feels he has found a more expedient way of getting a task accomplished. He does have trouble dealing with non Praetorian personnel however, a mental issue where he has lost the connection with other people due to the vast majority of people having not gone through the same training and combat experience, even having trouble getting along with Second Generation at times, though this is far rarer and only comes up when disagreements occur.

    Biography:
    Lucas Alexander was born into the tradition of a military family, and while it wasn't a terribly well known or even prestigious one, it was a tradition one could be proud of on a general sort of basis. His father put him into military academies and schooling, raising him like a soldier would be expected to operate within a platoon or squad. He was accepted into the Spec Op program when he enlisted with the Imperial Army, his father having gotten the attention the boy needed from the right people. He more than earned his place, and picked up a highly free thinking and questioning way to deal with things, constantly fluxing to adapt to new situations. While helpful on the battle field, this made a strenuous relationship with his superior officers, rarely being given the job to turn in reports or deal with higher superiors, most NCO's and even some CO's were capable of dealing with the man, giving him the leeway to accomplish his tasks how he saw fit. Granted, this meant he would never advance very far when it came to promotions and command opportunities, but this would suit Lucas just fine. He'd rather head out and, with a team, finish missions than lead, or worse, plan and not even go along for missions.

    When the opportunity arrived to enlist with the Praetorian Program, Lucas did so without a moments hesitation. The chance to grow even better at what he did, plus the potential for a new field of operations completely appealed to him. What he didn't say was that he hoped that, with the potentially unorthodox way the Praetorians would be made, he would have more leeway to get things done how he saw necessary. While the vast majority washed out, Lucas made it through both the training and surgeries that made him into what would be called a First Generation Praetorian. Lucas chose the codename Atlas, abandoning the name he was born with in favor of a new name that he would go by from now on. His first mission lead to the injury that scars his face now, being deployed and a high explosive round ended up smashing through his helmet, and incapacitating him after the primary objective was completed. Most of his squad were not so luck to begin with, a trend that would lead the First Gen Praetorians to be branded as failures. Atlas would disagree with this assessment, pointing out the successful missions despite the casualty levels, but it didn't stop the progress into Second Gen Praetorians.

    It didn't take long for Atlas to recover from these injuries, taking every chance he had at solo operations or working with other surviving First Gen Praetorians. He rarely felt at ease dealing with them, considering the vast differences despite their equal goals, and this was better than his ability to deal with regular IAF and people in general. It was an unforeseen consequence of the surgery and training, losing his ability to sympathize with non Praetorians, and an uncomfortable dealing with most Second Generation Praetorian groups. Granted, when it came to any Praetorian, he would lock down the uneasiness and show no issue. He often left IAF forces he was in contact with to their own devices, simply heading off on his own to accomplish why he was there and leave, often never saying a word to the regular forces. Psych evaluations would potentially force him to the sidelines, but he managed to avoid this fate by showing he was capable of at least playing nice with others. He spent many years doing a variety of missions, from solo infiltrations to full blown engagements with a team of Praetorians, he has experience in a variety of tasks, and has learned to keep his gear and mindset even more flexible than it used to be before volunteering for the Praetorian Program

    Armaments:
    IAR-667 (1200 Pts Total)
    + 11.5' Barrel
    + Mark V Suppressor Unit
    + Digital Holographic Sight
    + Vertical Foregrip
    + x4 7.92mm 30rnd Magazines

    SYER-336 Stinger (1300 Pts Total)
    + Detachable Suppressor
    + x4 .44 28rnd Hi-Capacity Magazines

    SF-6 Archon (400 Pts)

    Other (100 Pts Total)
    x1 Fragmentation Grenade
    x1 Electromagnetic Grenade

    ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE
    The ECLIPSE System contains a highly versatile, adaptive A.I. software that controls the many systems of the ECLIPSE unit.

    Name of A.I.: LAZARUS

    A.I. Personality: LAZARUS mostly operates on the level of operating the threat detection and communications systems that Atlas is too busy to micromanage. While the relayed information is often given in a emotionless replication of a human voice, the A.I. will borderline insult and call out Atlas if he happens to miss something in the environment that might have been important. Despite this, the two work well together, LAZARUS alerting Atlas of trouble and other such issues while Atlas utilizes this information in conjunction with what he has gathered to deal with most situations at hand, while seeming to be little more than a glorified secretary to most other people.

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    Birth Name:Bruce Buru

    Alias: Dusty

    Generation: First Generation Praetorian

    Age: 36

    Gender: Male

    Appearance: Bruce stands at an amazing seven and a half feet tall and has pale skin. He ways slightly over 350 pounds and he is over average build. He has ice blue eyes with a golden ring around his pupil. He has short, dark brown hair with a five O'clock shadow. A large scar goes from the middle of his forehead and crosses his right eye. The scar ends at his jawline. This scar was caused by a knife slash that ended up being one of the most painful injuries he got. Though this is the most noticeable scar, there are many other scars on his back and on his right arm. Mostly from explosions causing shrapnel to fly into his back and arm. His left leg seems to have been burned. When he wheres shorts you will be able to see this. He has other small scars like one near his upper lip that goes up to his right nostril.

    Personality: Bruce Buru AKA Dusty, is a very serious man. Humor is not in his nature and he's always thought of the negative side of things. Celebrating is not him either. A victory is a victory to him, nothing more. You may find him quite boring. But Bruce is an experienced combat tool, the way most people look at him. He knows what to listen to and what would be a bad idea. Bruce can be trusted no matter what the problem is. Tell him what you need and consider it yours as soon as you tell him. He is willing to take hits for his team. He can give respect but he doesn't give it freely. You have to earn his respect in order for him to trust you enough. His head is hard to get through so breaking him is not easy. He will not say anything of his past, of his family, or of his military experience. His experience he shows on the battlefield where as his constant serious behavior comes from his past and family related problems. The best thing I can say to you is good luck getting to know him.

    Where it may be hard to know his character it is easy to figure out that whenever combat comes around he will be a bit over protective of his teammates. Even though he is not in lead he always has alternatives for different ideas. As being in one of the strike teams before being a Praetorian, Bruce was taught to come up with quick back up plans in case shit turned for the worse. Bruce had always the fast and more efficient plans when they had to regroup and attack after holding there position for a bit longer.

    Biography: Dusty was once called Bruce for a while before his nickname. He was a cheerful baby boy. That was until he was five. On his birthday both of his parents died in a car accident that wasn't found out until it was way too late. It wasn't until three days later the car was found crushed a giant oak tree that fell during a storm. Bruce had no family left. An investigation was launched on the odd death with Bruce's parents. This was because when they looked at the direction the tree snapped, it seemed to have been cut down by a saw of some sort. But this didn't explain the odd burn marks where the tree was cleanly cut. As the tree was being cut up to be removed from the vehicle, an odd discovery was made. The side cut with the chainsaw was rough where as the other side that had burn marks was perfectly smooth. Investigators had no clue what to think. Bruce was quickly put under protection with a safe foster home and was told that his parents would be coming to get him soon.. Bruce escaped this place when he found out about his parents at the age of thirteen, which led him to do research on his whole family.

    By the time he was eighteen, he had complete knowledge of his family, his father was a commander for the Royal Family's ground troops and his mother was the first women admiral in the Royal Family. When Bruce investigated his family's death on his own he was dumbfounded to find the case undetermined by investigators. Bruce took matters into his own hands. See as it was surely an unexplainable death for both of his parents Bruce couldn't bear to see the crushed bones of his mother and father. A year later, hard work followed to his brother who ran away from home because of being in trouble with the government. Bruce found out that his parents helped his brother escape the government. It wasn't until later that Bruce came to the conclusion that a senator of the Royal Family planned the assassination and hired an assassin to kill off Admiral Kate Buru and Commander Jack “Hammer” Buru. Later after Bruce's theory, his brother, Mack Buru was killed with several bullets in his body. He also found at that his brother was part of the Royal Family's service

    After Bruce found out his family was dedicated to serve the Royal Family, Bruce joined as a grunt at first. But he was recognized. Eventually he was placed as a special forces. He was part of the elite of the elite. He got along quite well and when he turned 26 he was out of the service for a while. Two years later he was married and had two children. Sadly, they were murdered as well. They were tortured in front of him. Bruce has no happiness and everything can turn for the worst in his opinion. He has nothing with happiness or excitement in his life and as serious as you can get because of all the death. Two years after his wife and children were killed, he was summoned to go back into service. Bruce took it not for the money, but for the killing, for saving his race against any threat around the galaxies.

    Bruce was thirty and has been in service as a Praetorian for six years. He used a prototype he named Karina, which they call the “smart” A.I.'s. You can say Bruce and Karina have a strong bond that is six years strong and hard to break. Bruce cares about his A.I. friend and they rely on each other the most. Bruce relies on Karina to use the functions of his suit where as Karina relies on Bruce to kill the enemy. Both do their jobs and they do it well, which makes them a great team.

    There was only one person that has ever seen Bruce's face since the armor was on him. That was one of the Royal Family servants that work around the house. Bruce does not like the scars all over him. The scars that cover his body. They are injuries of the past that stay with him forever. He has no choice but to accept them. If you see his face consider it a gift for the time being. Because no one has seen his face for years. The rumors that the servant spread about Bruce's face are quite true. You should follow them so you don't get anything wrong.

    You may find Bruce an interesting man, or an odd man. Which ever way you look at it he is the same from both points of views. Same personality, same expression behind the helmet that you will never see. No fear, no excitement. A strong man both emotionally and physically. Maybe one of the best men you would fight along side with on the field. He has good combat experience. You can count on him. You will count on him as a teammate and a great ally. Good luck with Bruce. Good luck with Dusty.


    Armaments:

    Primary (1400 Points):
    IAR-667 (700 Points)
    24 Inch Barrel (250 Points)
    Mark V Suppressor Unit (100 Points)
    Digital Holographic Sight(50 Points)
    Vertical Foregrip(50 Points)
    7.92mm Caseless, 30rnd Magazines x5(250 Points/Other Section)

    Secondary(s) (1500 Points Used):
    Syer-336 Stinger (800 Points)
    .44 28rnd Hi-Capacity Magazines x3(300 Points/Other Section)

    Sf-6 Archon/ Style 1 (400 Points)

    Other (100 Points Used):
    Fragmentation Grenades x2(100 Points)
    Total Points Used: 3000/3000

    . : : A R T I F I C I A L I N T E L L I G E N C E : : .
    Name of A.I.: Karina

    A.I. Personality: As a female A.I., Karina and Dusty get along well together. Almost like a perfect couple. But Dusty and Karina do not like to think of it that way. Karina is quite a nice A.I. She has emotions just like a human. She is one of the smart A.I.'s in the universe and she is currently a prototype. She tries her best to use humor with Dusty to cheer him up and sometimes she is even excited. But no matter what, Dusty is always serious and always answers in that same deep and calm voice. Karina has a joyful character and may be the best A.I. you have ever met.[/hider]

    Note: This is a previous CS of mine in the previous INFLUX OOC I am unsure if anything is wrong with it even after checking it over. If there happens to be anything wrong with this CS please let me know.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GodOfChaos View Post
    Note: This is a previous CS of mine in the previous INFLUX OOC I am unsure if anything is wrong with it even after checking it over. If there happens to be anything wrong with this CS please let me know.
    Nope, everything's fine!

    Nothing's changed, really. Lazy man I am.
    Lie down baby
    Arch your back now
    Maybe you can help me get what I want
    Curve your little spine and tell me that you're mine
    It's all about the game and what you flaunt



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    WEll make it two lazy men. I did not want to make another character or change anything on the CS.

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    Pretty much finished my character. Wanted to do something different. What does everyone think?
    Back, sorta. not gunna be involved in too many RPs for a while, still getting my writing skills back.

    My username for every other game is the same as here, mostly playing League of Legends right now



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    Looks fine to me, though I only skimmed it over. I will be thoroughly reading everything tomorrow morning.
    Lie down baby
    Arch your back now
    Maybe you can help me get what I want
    Curve your little spine and tell me that you're mine
    It's all about the game and what you flaunt



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