Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: Prof.Nemo's CS Judge if you like.

  1. #1
    Senior Member ProfessorNemo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Posts
    1,041

    Prof.Nemo's CS Judge if you like.

    So pretty much this is a place where I plan to post some of my Cs's. Feel free to give me an opinion of what y'all think.

    - - - Updated - - -

    Name: Nikki De Monkey



    Age: 7

    Sex: Female

    Abilities: Steal small items,help Jason in the kitchen,dance,able to grab items with tail,very smart (for a monkey),can transport small items or letters.

    Battle Moves:

    Saru Saru Gorira : Nikki's arms change to that of a giant Guerrilla. Giving her arms a major increase in strength and power.

    Saru Saru Kumo: Nikki's legs change to that of a Spider Monkey. With increased agility and jumping power,in this form she uses her tail to help keep her balance. With this increase in abilites she can use the Black Leg fighting style.

    Saru Saru Ningen: Nikki's human form doesn't give her any special increases in physical ability. It allows her to speak English and gives her a human like apperance.

    Special Talents: Takes Jason's Battle Spice and distracts the enemy. Communicates to crew with charades.

    Weapon: Battle Spice

    Appearance

    Monkey Height: 3 Feet

    Human Height: 6 Feet

    Human Appearance

    Personality: Energetic and loves to play,very curious and has a habit of getting into trouble. Despite having an adult body,she still has the mind of a child.

    - - - Updated - - -



    Name: Jason Triden
    Sex:Male
    Age:20
    Height: 5' 9"
    Role on ship: Chef/Fighter

    Abilities: Cook,Hand to Pan combat,Able to identify edible/inedible plants. Hands are immune to fire/heat. Stronger than a normal person and a high level of dexterity


    Wok Wok Cannon: Slaming the bottom of his woks together at high speeds,he creates a strong blast of air and sound. This shot has the power to smash through wood and even steel !!!

    Tenderizer Barrage: Weilding a wok in each hand,Jason rushes the enemy and once he gets into range he begins to strike multiple times with pinpoint accuracy and speed.

    Lunch Rush Mode: By putting some of his Red Battle Spice into his mouth,Jason is able to increase his overall abilities ten fold. Once ingested his body turns a bright red as a slight steam begins to emit from his body as the effects only last for ten minutes. This can only be done once per day due to the strain on his body. Doing this move more than once could lead to disastrous results.

    Tsurai Stir Fry: Jason sprinkles some Red Battle Spice on his woks and then hits them together. All it takes is one spark as the woks catch on fire. This give his attacks bonus fire damage and last for five minutes. With another sprinkle of Red Battle Spice,the effects can be restarted.

    Damage Strainer: Using the back of his Woks,Jason can block bullets,strikes from swords,and physical attacks. So long as Jason can stand against the force of the attacks and he can keep up with the speed of the attacks. Other than that,nothing can break through his Iron Woks.

    Weapons of choice:

    2 Giant Iron Woks (Chinese Frying Pans): Jason uses these as giant mallets,his attacks mainly consist of smashing or pounding the enemy. For defensive purposes he uses the bottoms as shields that are strong enough to block bullets.

    "Battle Spice",small throwable bags of spice. Right now he has two types available,red and yellow. Red is a super spicy powder that blinds an opponent while yellow is a foul smelling knockout gas.

    Appearance:

    Affiliation: Black Crow Pirates

    Bounty: N/A He has just joined the crew.

    Background: From a very young age,Jason was always getting into trouble. Fights,petty theft,and disturbance of the peace. All in all small harmless crimes but crimes none the less. After being caught during one of his pranks he was given a choice, jail or community service. Not liking the thought of a cold jail cell Jason choice community service thinking he could just get out of it later. Sadly what he wasn't told was that he'd be working on a ship called the "Baratie". With no way off his floating prison Jason worked on the ship as a waiter counting the days till his freedom. As the days passed however,Jason's job started to turn into his passion. Watching the chefs in the kitchen Jason began to practice and train with every free moment he had. It had been 4 years since Jason had joined the Baratie crew. In that time his skills had improved from a simple waiter to one of the head chefs. With nothing else to learn from the Baratie crew Jason heads off to complete his
    Full Course Menu !!!!

    Personality: Kind hearted person,is very hotheaded about his cooking,loves to eat as much as he loves to cook,won't let anyone walk out of his kitchen hungry,can't stand wasted food and enjoys a good fight before a meal.
    Last edited by ProfessorNemo; 04-19-2013 at 06:10 AM.
    Yesterday is history,tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why it's called the present.

  2. #2
    Senior Member ProfessorNemo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Posts
    1,041
    Name: Mamoru Yakuma

    Age: 17

    Race of Monster: Shadow Elemental

    Gender: Male



    History: Since the beginning of the Elemental races,the Shadow Elementals have always secluded themselves from other races. For some,it was because of their feeling of superiority over over races. For others, it was due to their fear of being persecuted due to myths about evil deeds the clan had committed in the past. However,the true reason that the Shade race hid themselves from others....was due to a lack of trust. The Shadow Elementals refused to trust anyone outside of their own race. To them,the only friends and family one needs are cousins,family members,and others from their own kind. Even going so far as to have arraigned marriages to keep their species self-reliant. However,despite their attempts to remain isolated from the rest of the world,both monster and human alike, nothing can stop change from occurring. With each passing century,the future generation's curiosity about the people and world around them would grow. Still,none would dare to go against the races traditions....except for a brave few.

    Marcus had never been satisfied with his current place in the world. Forever hiding in the dark,watching the world move on while his people were stuck in the past. He was tired of reading about the world,he wanted to see it and experience it for himself. The other people in his village considered him to be a trouble maker,a dreamer,but most of all.....a bad influence on the other children. It had gotten so bad that they had expelled him from going to his town's school. While his family loved and supported his ideas and beliefs...they weren't willing to follow in his dream. It was around this time that the invite from Youkia Academy came in and offered him an escape from his world of black and white.....but at a cost. He would be the only Shade at his school. Sure there were other Elementals but he would be the only one of his kind. Still,his desire to see the unknown outweighed his fear of being alone. Taking one last look at his home town,Mamoru begins his long journey with all his hopes and dreams on the line.

    Personality: He's always been the type with an insatiable hunger for knowledge. To always want to know why things are the way they are. Although sometimes his inquisitive nature has lead him into trouble on more than one occasion. Still,despite what kind of trouble he gets in,once he decides on something he won't stop until he completes his goal. Although...sometimes the methods he'd use aren't exactly what could be called...legal. Unlike the people from his town...or race even,Mamoru tries to give people the benefit of a doubt and causes him to be a little bit over trusting. If he had a choice Mamoru would rather be betrayed then close himself off from the world. To him,to be alone and forgotten for the rest of his life is one of the things that scares him the most. He feels the best way to save himself from that fate is to go againts the rules and restrictions that time and tradition have placed on him. Although he doesn't like getting people angry or even getting into fights,he'll only fight when it's the only way to achieve his goals or protect the things important to him.

    Habits and quirks: He easily gets distracted by something new or something his never seen before. He also has a bad habit of stuttering when he gets nervous. Can usually be found with a book in his hand.

    Likes: Enjoys looking at the stars at night,reading books and learning about other monster cultures,likes to try new things,and watching fireworks.

    Dislikes: Hates being compared to the other people in his village,people who believe the myth and rumors about Shadow Elementals,dislike people who complain about something without trying to change it.

    Power(s) and abilities:

    Shadow Weapons
    Shadow manipulation
    Stronger at night

    Weaknesses:

    Weaker during the day
    Shadow weapons are weak againts concentrated bursts/rays of light
    Can't use own shadow as weapon
    Can't summon weapons without any shadows


    Other: The tatto on his arm is his family emblem. It less him sense other Shades in the area.
    Yesterday is history,tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why it's called the present.

  3. #3
    Senior Member ProfessorNemo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Posts
    1,041
    Name: Marcus Henning WIP

    Alias: WildCard

    Sex: Male

    Age:

    Appearance

    Abilities:

    Wildcard Shuffle: Using a new kind of teleportation technology in his playing cards,Marcus is able to instantly travel as far as he can throw his cards. After being thrown or used for teleportation the card returns to his deck.

    52 Pickup: Taking his cards he throws the whole pack up into the air. As the cards slowly fall to the ground,Marcus teleports between the cards and rapidly attacks the opponent with physical attacks. Attack doesn't stop until the last card lands on the ground.
    Last edited by ProfessorNemo; 04-27-2013 at 12:30 PM.
    Yesterday is history,tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why it's called the present.

  4. #4
    Senior Member ProfessorNemo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Posts
    1,041
    Name: Kuyama Mamoru

    Age: 17

    Class: C-1

    Appearance

    Height: 5' 9"

    Club: Go Home Early Club

    Personality: At first glance tho,most would consider him a trouble maker and a bit of a yakuza. Someone who'll start a fight just for his own enjoyment. However,thoses who know him would call him a kind hearted person. Someone who fights for those who won't stand up for themselves. He couldn't care less what people think of him. So long as he does what he feels is right. He's the type of guy who will completely ignore the rules if they get in the way of what needs to be done. A stubborn person who hates to admit when he's wrong.

    Background: Five...that's the number of times he's been expelled from school. It's not like he wants to get expelled but sometimes it can't be helped. Anyway,what's done is done as Mamoru looks forward to his new school. With every school in his old neighborhood banning him,he has no choice but to move with his older brother at his apartment. With his brother at college and his own school life to deal with,the two rarely have time to see each other. Now he has to readjust to a new town,new classmates & teachers but most improtant. He'll have to fight to reclaim his title as "Banchō" of the school ! It's not like trying to get into trouble was his hobby but...it was the only thing he was good at. Despite how hard his parents pushed him,he couldn't be like his older brother. The two were as different as night and day. Mamoru's hobbies consisted of eating,reading new manga,and playing sports and video games. Back home his parents forbid him to enjoy any of this,while his reputation at school forbid him from joining any sports clubs. As far as school....the only subjects he really liked were the ones they didn't give credit for. Lunch,recess,and P.E. are just about the only subjects he likes. As for his brother...well...lets just say he's as close to perfection as his parents could make him. Intelligent,Smart,Handsome,and popular to boot. It was for these very reasons...that people expected the same from him. In a sense...it was his "perfection" that Mamoru hated about his brother the most. However,none of that matters anymore. With their schools separated by an hour drive,the only expectations he had to live up to are his own.
    Yesterday is history,tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why it's called the present.

  5. #5
    Senior Member ProfessorNemo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Posts
    1,041
    Name: Mamoru Yakuma

    Age: 17

    Appearance

    Personality: Kind and polite,Mamoru is someone who holds manners above everything else. He doesn't like to fight,he would rather try to solve a problem diplomatically first. However,if you rudely attack his friends and loved ones he be more than happy to teach you a lesson. He tries to be a perfections but usually ends up sabotaging himself before he even begins.

    Bio: From a young age,Mamoru heard tales about his bloodline lineage. The Yakuma bloodline dates far back to the days of old,when knights and kings used to rule the land. There's even a rumor that his families bloodline might come from the legendary Mabuki "Excaliber" ! When he first was able to transform,Mamoru couldn't wait to attend DWMA. However there was two things about him that was always....off. First,was his dislike of violence. It's not that he didnt know how to fight but he didnt like to hurt anyone. To this day,he'll only fight as a last option. The second is....his luck. For some bizarre reason,Mamoru always has the worst kind of luck. It could be perfectly sunny outside until he steps out the door. It was because of theses two reasons that no one wanted to pair with him. He now sits and waits,hoping someone can help him escape his nickname "The Cursed Mabuki" through acts of greatness that no one would be able to ignore ! Sadly,if things don't go well with this last teammate he'll be kicked out of DWMA.

    Weapon Type: A combination of a sword & shield. This weapons come in two forms. The first is the combination form with extendable/retractable blade,think Assasins Creed,. The second form is a separate shield and sword.

    Abilities: (will be determined once you have your partner)

    Meister: Aoi Bloom
    Yesterday is history,tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why it's called the present.

  6. #6
    Senior Member ProfessorNemo's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2012
    Posts
    1,041
    Name: Mamoru Kuyama
    Nickname/Alias: N/A
    Gender: Male
    Age: 16
    Age Appearance
    Armor Appearance
    Sexuality:Straight


    Birthplace: The Land of Iron
    Village: Kounama

    Organization: N/A

    Clan/Bloodline: N/A

    Rank: Genin/Chuunin

    Chakra Nature: Fire

    Personality:
    Mamoru is a hard headed person,he has a deep love for his country and its people and won't allow anyone to talk bad about his homeland or his friends and love ones. Mamoru is respectful and usually has a serious attitude around him when training or fighting. Mamoru values honor and his morales above everything else and can't stand watching the strong preying on the weak.

    History: The way of the samurai....is dying. Each year the art and fighting style of the samurai is being forgotten as the world begins to change and evolve. Mamoru Kuyama, a young man from the iron clan wishes to give new life into the art by doing the only thing he can due...to try to combine samurai fighting style with ninja jujitsu. Some from his own clan say its a fools errand,others call it blasphemy, but to the young ronin....it's his dream. To combine power and defense of the samurai with the speed and skills of a ninja. Only time will tell if his dream will be realized or if the way of the samurai is doomed to extinction.


    Weapons/Items:
    Spoiler


    Special Traits:

    Samurai's Will: No matter how much damage he takes,Jason will always stand up no matter how much pain he is in unless knocked out.
    Ninja-Samurai hybrid: Mamoru can choose how he fights. If he wears his full samurai armour he is a bit slower but far more resilient than without. If you however descides to take off his armour, fighting more like a ninja, he is faster, stealthier and more manouvrable, but he'll be more vulnerable to all kinds of attacks.
    Inexpirienced Ninja: Due to his inexperience with most standard ninja gear, his accuracy with throwing weapons are poor at best. He might also be a bit slower at using any other ninja tools or tricks.
    Nitōichi (二刀一, "two swords as one") fighting style:
    A fighting style used to defend against projectiles (does not work againts jujitsu)and when surrounded by multiple enemies. However, this fighting style requires the user to stay in one spot.
    Iron Clan Helmet: The helmet visor is designed to protect against normal/low level genjutsu while the mouth gaurd protects against breathing in poison. He only wears this when he's using his full samurai suit of armour.



    Yesterday is history,tomorrow is a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why it's called the present.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •