WOTM #23 Voting (Advanced)

[GallifreyanOddy]

Thank you guys who voted for me! I know it was a close call and all. ^_^

[Herzinth]

I am a sucker for peer pressure, and have been encouraged to reveal myself.

My story was Of Time And Dawn.



Good work, Oddy!

[Holmishire]

I am the writer of the Gatherer, and as you may have noticed from my review of it, I was not satisfied with it. As always, I only started writing it in the last couple days, and I put a ton of effort into the middle and just threw out the rest as fast as I could. So I like the middle and the very end (which I also put effort into) but I wanted it to be so much more.

@Chaos, thank you for the vote! I'm glad you liked it. I pretty much wrote the entry with that cliffhanger as my inspiration. Which is kinda weird, I guess, but it worked? (Maybe.)

@PlatinumSkink, I agree with the lack of detail/action in the middle. I was trying to figure out how to fill that gap realistically, but I was stumped, and just gave up. As for the world, I just threw a bunch of made-up words into the part where Caerys was inside the cavern, and I manipulated the introduction to fit. (Though now I can't help but expand on it and try to fix the story faults in my head.)

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Mine was "The Death of Death" which did not do too well, but it would be unfair to imply that I expected it to do well. Thanks for the nice comments though.

[Chaos662545]

Mine was A Fate Worse Than Death, which from what I can tell was good, just not good enough. Oh, and since this is over, could I put up the rest of the reviews on my first post except for my piece? I know it's a bit late but I'd like to do it anyway.

[GallifreyanOddy]

I'm pretty sure that is allowed Chaos.

@Platinum Skink, thank you for the kind words.

@Holmishire: Thank you for the review. I can see where the narration was off. I wanted to go back and fix that but as I read it over and over, I kind of fell in love with how I wrote it. Sometimes I can't help but write like that. I need to work on it. ^_^;;

[PlatinumSkink]

Hm. Heh.

I wrote the first entry. I was originally intending on writing a long story, but I wrote that rhyming thing first because I felt like it. Eventually I ran out of time which I was supposed to have written that story on and focused on what I already had and made it several verses longer. Overall, I am proud of what I wrote. Oh, and all you guys who read it are dead. But don't let it bother you~