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    Mobile Suit Gundam 0100: Paradise Lost {Kanman & Jakeozzy}

    “I sung of Chaos and Eternal Night,
    Taught by the heav'nly Muse to venture down
    The dark descent, and up to reascend...”
    ― John Milton, Paradise Lost

    Being forced to hide in isolation can drive a person mad. Thousands of Zeon still remain in hiding in the asteroid belt even years after Haman ordered Axis to be moved into the Earth Sphere, many knew that the Neo Zeon's rebellion would fail and were afraid to leave for that reason. Many of the children born in the Asteroid Belt after the One Year War are old enough now to spark a revolution and thats what they intend to do. The remnants manufactured a large rail gun capable of shooting asteroids at targets orbiting around earth and causing mass destruction to the colonies and moon's cities. With the Asteroid Belt Zeon running out of resources they became desperate, sending a message that if they did not get their own independent colony near earth then the bombardments would continue.

    The E.F.S.F's response to this was to send a small Mobile Suit Task force to disable the Mass Accelerator built into the asteroid colony Paradise Lost, a massive immovable asteroid base larger than Axis.

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    EFSF:

    Lt. David Lynch
    JLt. Apollo Courtland
    Ens. Amy Valentine



    Neo Zeon Remnants:
    Col. Arkan Valaras
    Capt. Lotas Valaras
    Cmdr. Sergei Malik
    Ens. James Stepford
    Ens. Rosalie Laroche

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    Col. Arkan Valaras
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    Capt. Lotas Valaras
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    Cheif Warrant Off. 5 Alois Marek
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    Lt. David Lynch - EFSF
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    JLt. Apollo Courtland - EFSF
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    WO. Laura Valentine - EFSF
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    Col. Andreas Falken - EFF Intelligence
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    Cmdr. Sergei Malik - Neo Zeon Remnants
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    Ens. James Stepford - Neo Zeon Remnants
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    Ens. Rosalie Laroche - Neo Zeon Remnants
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    The Aurai, A Ra Cailum class modified for the long journey to Mars, is set to arrive at the Asteroid Belt within a few hours. Chief Warrant Officer Alois Marek sits in one of the waiting rooms along with a few other pilots. He is repeatedly throwing a ball at the ceiling and bouncing it back to him "I hear that these Zeon are crippled and unable to fight, I dont understand why we're sending a special forces team and a Ra Cailum to go and disable this rail gun. I don't like being this far away from Earth, even if the operation is only supposed to take a couple days." He just banters on to the other crew, trying to pass the time.

    But off in the abyss, aboard Paradise Lost, Arkan sits in his office which has all the walls as monitors viewing the space around the station. "Lotas, the Earth Federation has sent a pawn to come and stop us. Dont you think its about time they reacted?" Lotas sits in a chair opposite the desk from Arkan "I guess you could say that. How should we handle this, Arkan?" Lotas Responds. "How do you think father would have handled it?" Arkan asks.
    "He would probably try the diplomatic approach. Attempt to keep casualties at a minimum you know?"
    "Well not me. Take a team out and slaughter everyone on board that ship. Take whoever you see fit."
    "Yes sir." Lotas gets up from his chair and walks out of the room off to the mobile suit hangars to prepare.


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    (Le starting theme http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2pMqBZ-brDQ )
    "Haro! Haro~!" An annoying yet cute synthetic voice sounded near the waiting room. "No, come back! That's the Bridge! I'll get in trouble if you go in there!" A female shouted after the Cyan coloured Haro that was bouncing all over the halls. "Hello, Captain! Hello!" Repeated the Haro. "Sir, I am so sorry!" The girl apologized as she followed the ball around. "Get that thing offa' my bridge, damn it! If Colonel Falken didn't let you keep it, I'd smash it!" The Captain yelled. "Yes, Sir!" The girl replied, the sound of a metallic bang following. "Gotcha!" The girl said, quickly retreating from the bridge and exiting. "I'm very sorry, it won't happen again!" She called back. "Laura, abusive! Laura, abusive!" The Haro repeated itself sadly. "Oh just behave yourself for once, Haro... Go back to the crew quarters and wait for me there." "Okay - okay!"

    With the ordeal over, the girl floated into the pilot waiting room and let out a long sigh of relief. The girl wore a specialized G-suit, dark grey mainly, with navy blue stripes on the arms and zips. She got there just in time to listen to Alois' comment, but remained silent, calmly waiting for the call to the hangar.

    "...Do ye ever switch that thing off?" Wondered Lt. Lynch, but not in a bad manner. "If it's given ye' so much trouble, ye could just switch et off." He added. Laura gave him a confused look for a moment, then realized what he meant. "Hah.. It may sound strange, but it's like a pet to me. I don't like turning it off, even with all the hassle it brings." She said cheerfully.

    Apollo rolled his eyes in boredom at the conversation. "The sooner we kick their asses, the better. I just want to go back home and chill out. It's been a long tour." He muttered to nobody in particular.

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    Already in their normal suits, three pilots of Neo Zeon waited near their mobile suits for the signal to go out. Each of them itched for a fight, to get revenge for all of their comrades killed by the Federation. Their mobile suits weren't as top notch as the Feddies, but the pilots had skill to back themselves up, which took most regular EFSF forces by surprise via underestimating their opponent...

    The large man waiting by the cockpit of a white NZ-666 Kshatriya seemed to be meditating, or something along those lines.

    The young woman and young man by their mobile suits chattered excitedly about how psyched up they were for the battle. They knew their enemy was coming, and they couldn't stand waiting any longer.
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    Lotas floats out into the hanger and over by the most obnoxious lime green colored Bawoo anyone would ever see. "Listen up Zeon! This is our time of retribution. By sending this ship, the Federation has unlocked a whole new Pandora's box and we shall show them that we arent the helpless refugee's that they assume we are! Colonel Malik, I want you to join me in the slaughter. Two makes company, but threes a party..." He points over at the Ga-Zowmn "You, get ready to deploy! I want the Geara Zulu's to stay in the Asteroid Belt and guard Paradise lost. I dont want any of those slippery ReZel's to get by and cause havoc on the station. The Rest of you are to wait here and be prepared to launch. And dont get nervous, if you can dodge asteroids then you can dodge the shots from a few ReZel's and Jestas." Lotas gets in the Bawoo Attacker as its loaded on a launch ramp and the Nutter is loaded on the Ramp Adjacent. "Seig Zeon!" The attacker takes off down the ramp followed by the Nutter, weaving through the asteroids and out into clear space.


    "Haro Haro!" the small mechanical ball shouts out next to Alois. He jumps a bit and throws the ball with less power than the other times. The ball gently floats up to the ceiling and bounces off, stopping about 6 inches from the spot where it bounced. "Damn it, you made me mess up. Now I have to get that." Alois pushes down on the couch he was sitting on and floats up towards the ceiling, grabbing the ball and pushing himself back towards the couch. "Doesnt that thing keep you up at night? I would have melted it down by now if it surprised me like that all the time."
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    James saluted to the Captain, then kicked up towards the Geara Zulu, taking his helmet off once inside. "They won't lay a finger on home turf, Boss." He assured Lotas playfully. The dark green mobile suit carefully grabbed an assault rifle from the rack beside it, reminiscent of an old German STG-44.

    Rosalie floated up to the Ga-Zowmn without saying a word, climbing inside and firing the machine up. "It's time we put these Federation dogs in their place." She said cruelly over the comm channel.

    Sergei opened his eyes and climbed into the Kshatriya. "...Sieg Zeon!" He cheered, before the three mobile suits launched, the Geara Zulu staying back whilst the other two suits followed after the agile Bawoo.

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    "Surprisingly enough, it kind of knows me as a person." Laura happily said, rubbing the back of her neck nervously. "The last time it woke me up, I threatened it with a tire iron." She chuckled, Lynch doing the same. Laura grabbed the Haro again and opened the door, "Go find Mr. Falken. We're about to get busy, so you can't hang around near the bridge." She told the Haro. "No friends there! No friends there!" It repeated. "It's just for a while, go on..." Laura nudged the Haro, prompting it to follow her command and go piss off the Colonel instead. The girl sighed and sat back down.

    "...L.T, are we going out there or what?" Apollo asked. Lynch shook his head, "It'int up to me boy. The Capt'n will tell uz when ta go hunting fer Zeons." He replied quickly. Apollo just nodded slowly, unsure of what the Lieutenant said exactly.
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    The Nutter plugs into the Attacker and the mobile suit transforms into its humanoid form. "This is Captain Lotas Valaras to Paradise Lost, contact Pallas and Vesta and tell them to prepare for combat." He turns off the laser comm unit and switches to local comms. "Ga-Zowmnn pilot, you are my wingman on this mission. What is your name and rank? I may as well show the courtesy of knowing someones name if they are fighting along side me."


    "I dont think we were sent here just to kill them. After we disable the rail gun then I think the Federation government is going to begin negotiation." Alois responds to all this talk about deploying and hunting zeon.


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    "Ensign Rosalie Laroche, Sir." The woman replied. She appeared on the Bawoo's cockpit monitor as the Ga-Zowmn moved into formation alongside it. "Command away..."

    The Kshatriya flew straight at the Ra Cailum, covering behind asteroids every now and again. "Consider yourselves lucky... I won't let you live long." Sergei muttered at the ship.

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    "Oh please, the Zeon don't give a damn for negotiations. They're hurling asteroids at us, what makes you think they're even sane enough to negotiate?" Apollo laughed.

    "Even if that's true, we have to try..." Laura said hopefully. Apollo shook his head, "Pff, you sympathise with those nutjobs?" "Is it a crime that I would like to end the day without bloodshed?" Laura replied sharply. "Girlie, you're a soldier like us. You're here to kill the enemy if all else fails - and given that the enemy are batshit insane, I don't think we'll have any chance for peace."

    Laura looked down at the ground frowning sadly. "Believe what you want..." She whispered to Apollo, who couldn't hear her.
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    "Alright then. Malik you have free reign to do as you please. Ensign Laroche you stay on me and give me support. If things get hairy then we lure them back into the Asteroid Belt, I know they don't have the skill to pilot in there." The Bawoo rockets off towards the Aurai. As Lotas comes into range the wing binders flip out and all 6 missiles fire off at the ship. "Go, get in close and attack!"


    "All hands to battle stations, enemy mobile suits detected to the front of the ship closing in fast. All mobile suits prepare for launch."

    "How the hell did they see us coming. Command said the Minovsky particles in this area were so dense they wouldn't know we were here until we started shooting." Alois says running to the locker room to get changed. He trips as the Ship shakes from the missile impacts. He runs into the locker room and throws his normal suit on over his clothes as quick as possible then runs for the hangar. He kicks off from the balcony and floats over to his Byarlant. "Cheif Warrant Officer 5 Alois Marek, Rx-160 s Byarlant preparing for launch." The Byarlant steps onto the launch ramp and boosts upward, unable to connect to the launch platform.


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    "Alright, Captain... I'll handle some of their mobile suit squadron." The Kshatriya stopped eight hundred meters from the Aurai and unleashed it's funnels, which darted around the ship attempting to take out the anti-air turrets before the real battle started.

    "Copy." Rosalie replied, disappearing from the Bawoo's side monitor. The Ga-Zowmn transformed and fired it's small beam bazooka a few times at one of the launch catapults, boosting closer with every shot. "Come on, you unorganized rabble... Get out here and fight."

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    As soon as the CIC operator started speaking, Lynch and Apollo kicked out of the room and rushed to the hangar, each of them climbing into their mobile suits as quickly as they could. A few ReZELs and Jestas were already launching, unfortunately, straight into the funnels' overwhelming beam attacks.

    Laura followed out last, getting into the dark grey mobile suit's cockpit. "Great. We're going to have to do this the hard way then..."
    "Wait, don't go out yet. That's an order, Warrant Officer." Col. Falken interrupted her, just as Lt. Lynch and Ensign Apollo launched into the funnels, narrowly avoiding getting shot down.
    Laura seemed to turn docile, taking her hands off of the controls, the Unicorn remaining inside the hangar. "Roger that, Sir." She replied, emotionless.
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