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Thread: 2 Jedi V 2 Sith: LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!

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    2 Jedi V 2 Sith: LET THE BATTLE BEGIN!

    Creating this thread on behalf of Hue Ran, this OOC is for the arena battle with the same title as above.

    Hue Ran and DarkBane versus Fallenreaper and Fallenreaper's friend.


    CS Skeleton(subject to change at Hue Ran's return):

    Name:

    Race:

    Age Category(young, young adult, adult, middle-age, old):

    Lightsaber Combat Style(refer here, and scroll down to Individual Fighting Styles to learn more, be sure to includ whether you are using a single lightsaber, dual sabers, or the double-sided saber):


    Force Power(Masters can refer here, Padawans get only the basics listed):

    Push
    Pull
    Mind Trick
    Speed
    Jump
    Heal(I'm assuming sith would actually get drain, wait for Hue to confirm)


    Sith Alchemy, and any powers that are "auto-hit" are barred from use. Here's the rest of the rules from Hue.

    "The plot and timeline wont mean much, it will practically be two jedi and two sith meet on a agreed neutral planet and fight for survival. All other aspects are open for discussion. Keep in mind however that no godmodding or power playing will be tolerated, and you will be kicked out of the fight if it happens, this fight will be fair 2 on 2 fight, and you can not bring any NPC's in.

    Should the fight go well and a winner decided or one of the groups retreats we can of course set up a second thread to do it again.

    I must stress that because this is not era specific no canon characters are acceptable. "

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    Name:
    Jayda Enor

    Sith Rank:
    Apprentice

    Race:
    Zabrak

    Gender:
    Female

    Description:
    A lithe female in appearance, Jayda is about average of 5’10” in height with lean muscle built from her training on Iridonia. Over all, she has a curved, graceful appearance that was made more for appeal then battles yet there sharpness to her movements, seen through each step or fluid movement of her body. Most notably in her eyes, dark purple and slightly narrow, they seemed to pass right through anyone she catches in her watchful gaze. Her skin is a pale ashy color with a light hue of peach undertone making it seem more like living stone, black lips that curl up into a sadistic smile almost the same color as her outfit. Unseen by anyone but a chosen few, a vivid scar of her past sets there where a blade shot through her shoulder out the other side.

    Her top is simple fashion exposing her mid-drift that has a shallow v neck, the sleeves come down to the wrist before sweeping back in a wide opening. Calf length skin tight pants, the legs trail off into black calf high boot with crisscross pattern of red to loosen or tight them. Her hair has a dark tarnished gold look to it and the bangs rest just over her thin eyebrows, the rest of the shoulder blade length is wept back and braided into a single ponytail. This complements her two sets of horns, the smallest are lined from the start of her eyebrows to stop at the top of her head, six white bones total. The second set is visibly longer by half an inch or so and are grown closer to her ears, traveling about her head before stopping an inch from the back numbering about four on each side. The right ear has about three golden earrings pierced into the outer curve, close and small loops. She didn’t receive her tattoos in the traditional way since her Res Selenoren was interrupted and never began instead her Master had chosen the trials for her ascent into adult and the design that now scars her face for lack of tools. It was an honorable thing in his culture but marking her to remain forever between a child and adult, a disgrace even as she passed the tests.

    Age Category:
    Adult

    Lightsaber Combat Style:

    Dual Light sabers, handles altered like Tonfa.

    Form VII: Juyo

    Force Power:
    • Push
    • Pull
    • Speed
    • Jump


    History brief:
    Her father was a tlestri- a Zabrak that refused Res Selenoren- and her mother was human, both her and her brother was born off world on a home world Jayden long forgot. Despite this, she was raised fully in Zabrak culture thanks to her father’s determination that they both receive what he had as a child and could no longer give him. Jayda showed promise as a Zabrak, her adaptability and will outweighed the odds when her strength failed to be enough making her rather skilled for her age. This explains her habit of using certain Zabrak nouns and phrases when she speaks. She watched her brother, his gene seemed to take after the human side, struggle through his combat training and sometimes mundane tasks achieving completion by the skin of his orat (horns). Still despite this trait, Jayda looked up to her brother with admiration and awe often shadowing him often ending with his ranting at her antics.

    It was in his Res Selenoren when everything changed.

    Suddenly determined to become an adult at 15, her mother and him influenced their hesitate father to start Ke’Mehinn’s Res Selenoren in the three months before the Rising Festival. It seemed to go well, passing his first two challenges easily but on the final one…he failed. It hurt her family bring dishonored, even worse to see the chest fallen Zabrak scarred in fro jataj with her family’s Jato instead of properly tattooed. The worst part was yet to come as they came home, her father and brother fought ending in Ke’Mehinn being exiled from home after attempting to kill his mother who intervened when the fight escalated. Showing no remorse, he vowed to return and make them all pay. It was painful time for Jayda. Little did she know that she would meet her brother again, on the very eve of her own Res Selenoren and forge her path as into a Sith apprentice.

    A hand print. In blood. It marked the door like a sign of something wrong; Jayda’s fear spurred her on through to a sight that made her heart go cold. Ke’Mehinn stood in a shrouded black cloak over two familiar dead bodies, their parents, slain and posed in gruesome form as her entrance drew his attention.


    It was just on the eve of her Res Selenoren, a year after her brother’s banishment that she came home. Jayda walked in on her brother, his form covered in a black cloak standing over two bodies. Mother and father gone, their lifeless bodies stared at her as Ke’Mehinn turned with a glare towards her before striking her down once. She couldn’t attack her own flesh and blood, the very brother Jayda admired yet the creature before her wasn’t anything like him when she felt the sear agony of a blade ripping through her body bring her to crumble from the pain upon all fours. Her hand grasped her profusely bleeding wound while hearing his steps walk away, his glare no longer on her while he moved on seeing her pay the price, uncared if she lived or died. A voice, gravelly and dark spoke to Ke’Mehinn quick and demanding that made her head snap to see a figure standing before her brother’s retreat.

    "Free your sister from pain.. Kill her..!" It hissed.

    He stammered there, Jayda inwardly pleaded he wouldn’t but her hopes were crushed as the vibro bladed dagger swiped to slit her throat. Instinct won in the end as the force within her shot out to protect her, tossing his body like limp rag into the wall impaled on his own weapon! Her eyes turned to the man, beast that had influenced her brother before launching herself to attack him. She hit him as he caught her wrist, holding it from farther strikes until the weapon clattered to the floor speaking that if she wished to finish this then to learn under him. Naturally her need to avenge her family, anger at the way this creature casted away her attack and her own weakness twisted her into the dark side as a youth, choosing the right moment and time to kill the murder. Jayda became an adult soon enough, still serving him and taking what she could to one day destroy him.


    ((Hope this works and I added to the CS a bit to flesh out the character leaving the era and such vague, also did tons of research on the species as well. ))
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    (( Yours looks good, though if we're going into that much detail, we should consider turning this into a roleplaying thread afterwards. Just a thought >.>))

    Name:
    Joris Gaian


    Jedi Rank:
    Padawan


    Race:
    Human


    Gender:
    Male


    Description:
    ((Terrible at descriptions, opting out for a pic))



    Age Category:
    Young Adult


    Lightsaber Combat Style:
    Single saber, Green blade

    Form III: Soresu



    Force Power:

    •Push
    •Pull
    •Speed
    •Jump
    Heal


    History brief:
    Joris Gaian was inducted into the Order of the Jedi at six years of age, after having been found to be sensitive to the Force. Always a quiet and reserved child, even for a jedi, he would often outlast his brothers and sisters at any game of patience, and surprised many older jedi when he began to study the arts of meditation to further his understanding of the Force. However, most of his fellow students and elder jedi feel that he is too passive, a trait that even displays itself in his choice of lightsaber combat form; Soresu, the most defensive of all the forms.

    What many aside from the jedi who discovered him and his current master do not know is that Joris has been haunted by strange dreams and visions since he was four years of age. He is somehow able to tap into the subtle changes in the Force on a subconscious level, permitting him to dream of various and obscure futures that would often wake him in the middle of the night and cause him to rant for hours until he passed out once more. Only through careful meditation has Joris been able to repress, and begin to understand these dreams, though he is many years away from mastering his unique gift. As it stands, he refuses to speak of his dreams to any but the masters of the Jedi Order for fear of misinterpretation.

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    Jen'ari (Dark Lord of the Sith) Nazyl Mariq

    Race :
    Yuuzhan Vong

    Gender :
    Male

    Height :
    6' 2"

    Age Cat. :

    Adult

    Lightsaber & Combat Style :
    Double-Bladed Lightsaber

    Form VII - Vaapad

    Force Power :


    • Push
    • Pull
    • Speed
    • Jump
    • Force Lightning
    • Telekinetic Lightsaber Combat
    • Combustion
    • Levitation


    Background :

    "I'll grant you with an honorable death but you have to try and do the same!"
    ~ Jen'ari Zanyl Mariq

    Nazyl was a male Yuuzhan Vong who was only recently known to be a Force-sensitive of his species apart from Onimi and Vongerella after his first appearance on one of the major Sith naval base on Sernpidal.

    Born on Baanu Miir, Nazyl was mistakenly identified as a deformed child in comparison to his twin brother for his smaller size. But before the assigned caretaker could take the child's life, Nazyl was seen to be mysteriously lifted off the ground. Being a follower of the True-way, his caretaker believed it was the doing of one of their Twin Gods, Yun Harla, their Goddess of deception and aggression or also known as the "Cloaked One" or "Cloaked Goddess" and also as the "Trickster". Fearing he would anger the Goddess, there was naught he could do except to watch the child rise into the clouds above. Nazyl was then announced as dead to his people.

    The infant was then intercepted by a passing vessel belonging to an unnamed Sith Master who happened to be on a scouting mission. Thinking that the Dark Side have brought him to the child and that an opportunity to research on this warmongering race was given, he took Nazyl under his care. It wasn't long until he found out about the child's capability with the Force and thus, he began training the child with the way of the sith.

    By the time Nazyl Mariq had reached the age of a young adult in the human years, he'd managed to slay his master, proclaiming himself with the title of Sith Lord. Due to his nature of origin, Nazyl became hungrier for power and battles. In the same vessel he grew up and trained in, he sailed across the universe from planet to planet in search for Dark Side users. Serpindal was the first planet he'd landed on where he encountered and slain dozens of Sith Masters by himself except for one Pureblood. Nazyl adapted the title Jen'ari then after hearing it from the creature's quivering lips.

    Having an insatiable amount of lust for violence, he continued his own quest in finding the Force with the intention to grant the users with an honorable death. But on one occasion, he came across and witness the confrontation between siblings of the Zabrak species. Sensing a Force from one of them, he intervene, encouraging the brother to kill the sister and free her. Driven by Nazyl's Mind-Trick, the brother assaulted the female without mercy. In the end, it was the sister who'd proven to be stronger instead. She, Jayda Enor, automatically became Nazyl's Apprentice when he took her under his wings without him even realizing that he'd just almost aligned himself with the Rule of Two or the Banite system.

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    Name:Hue Ran

    Race:Echani

    Age Category(young, young adult, adult, middle-age, old): 37

    Appearance:

    Spoiler


    Lightsaber Combat Style(refer here, and scroll down to Individual Fighting Styles to learn more, be sure to includ whether you are using a single lightsaber, dual sabers, or the double-sided saber):

    Trakata (Form Zero)

    Shien (With a little Ataru)

    Two Green Single Bladed Sabers

    Spoiler


    Force Power(Masters can refer here, Padawans get only the basics listed):

    Push
    Pull
    Mind Trick
    Speed
    Jump
    Heal
    Force Repulse
    Force Deflection
    Force Stealth
    Force Cloak

    Very Very Brief History:

    Hue was anything but normal even as a boy. He was taught by many people in many different ways how to fight straight on, how to fight honorably. In Hue's case however it never stuck. His mind and his intelligence is his most enduring and powerful quality. He has had many years to refine his lightsaber and force abilities. However lets start from the beginning.

    Hue was born to a Echani General, the first son, which meant of course that he would inherit his father's natural talent for leading. Hue however was nothing like his father. Every chance he got he sat and studied, anything and everything. He grew up being taught how to fight opponents and win wars, but Hue wasn't a natural at leading people, instead his prowess came from his mind. He was a strategic genius, even at a young lad he grasped the concepts of tactics so easily, and he preferred anything but a straight fight.

    When Hue was eight a Jedi Master made his way to Eshan to help diplomatic relations. The Jedi Master noticed Hue during a banquet held in the Jedi's honor. Hue was quiet, shy and reserved. He stayed away from the bulk of the people, but even as a young boy the Master could feel the boys potential. It was as simple as asking Hue's father to allow him to leave, which was not hard considering he thought Hue a disappointment anyway, and Hue was taken to train as a Jedi.

    His training was conventional, taking place like those before him. His Master used Hue's unnatural urge to stay away from a fight to teach him the unorthodox methods of Form Zero. Once he had learned Trakata his Master moved on to Shien, teaching him to use the powerful movements of Shien with the fluent movements of Ataru. Hue was born to wield a lightsaber and with every lesson he picked up his training faster then most.

    Grown now he is still anything but conventional. Hue prefers to strike from the shadows, and prefers to injure rather then kill, but make no mistake Hue is anything but weak. His strength comes from his ability to gauge a situation and come up with all different possibilities, and countering the most likely to occur. He is very good with and without a blade.

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    Looks like we're set to go. Hue, you want first post rights?

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    First is anyone dead set on a certain location? Cause I was going through either Naboo, Kashyyyk, or Onderon?

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    Kashyyyk presents a wide range of variety from the deadly creatures and even deadlier plants at the base of the trees.

    Naboo would make for a good, open field battle.

    Onderon... you know I don't remember enough about Onderon to say either way.

    My votes for Kashyyyk.

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    I think the first thing we might take in consideration is the battle experience each of us have. I know me and Darkbane, correct me if I'm wrong, are newest to the arena battling with that in mind here's what's running through my mind.

    Naboo is ideal because it's wide open and if I remember right, is that desert planet. On the sad part, it's wide open meaning there's no cover or things to move about, making it more of a straight forward fight. No possibilities of surprise or battle turning moves. Though it is easiest to have a battle, being a desert planet.

    Kashyyyk has variety of wildlife and deadly plants, it leaves it open to both danger but I would suggest maybe only one or animals at a time with some links for the creatures being use.


    Onderon...I have no clue, give me a day or two to research that in wookiepedia.

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    I agree with Fallen.

    A place too open prevents creativity (although we do have our own shuttle to play around with but only if it lands with us) and a place too clustered may have us confused one another in a post (unless if we shoot them clear and leave some behind before landing).. So we would want somewhere in between where it's not necessary to have our shuttle there with us for creative sake.

    In the end, to me, I'm alright with anywhere.. (I'm not familiar with the grounds too unless I take some time and do some research on them)

    Perhaps some images of the ground might help us decide on one..?

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