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    Essence of the World [OOC]



    Essence of the World

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    I said that once already, but in the IC, so maybe I should repeat it here, to have everything neatly in one place.
    This is a story set in a modern, urban setting and it deals with death and the ideas of right and wrong. I want both sides (angels and demons) to be equally good/bad and the conflicts that arise to be based on the differences they have in mindsets rather than plain truth. You can play any role from a simple school girl to a demon-lord or a tamer angel. Tell me what you want and we can brainstorm how to fit it in.
    If you have any questions feel free to contact me and we can discuss them, I’d love to hear your suggestions and opinions. ^^
    Let's call it a high-end casual, since I like the term. I don't mind one-paragraph responses, for conversation's sake, but I would like to have well-created and deep characters. For the sake of character-development I'm not requiring the bio of your characters just yet, but feel free to have flashbacks while the story progresses.
    Of course, if you don't like revealing mysteries one at a time, you could just write it down here as well.

    I think the main things required would be:

    Name:
    Race:
    Class:
    Type:
    Status: (authority)
    Age: (usually angels mature at the same pace as humans, unless they're from the old ones, belonging to the Council; demons live sequential lives of different lifetimes)
    Appearance:
    Relations:

    Also I would like reading a short character introduction, a scene to reveal them, instead of a bio.

    Since I'm new here and this is my very first story on this forum please feel free to correct me and teach me when I'm doing something wrong or could do it better. I'm not sure of the format of the OOC thread but I feel it's useful to add the introduction to the story, the first post, to give a better idea of one side of the conflict at least.

    So here are some explanations on the setting itself.


    The World

    The story is set in a world inhabited by angels, demons and humans. Originally the 3 worlds (Heaven, Surface and Hell) were separated, with the Surface and the humans being a buffer element between angels and demons.

    During a war between the angels and demons Heaven was destroyed and angels populated Surface, making it their ultimate goal to protect the humans. They lost their immortality, mixing with humans, but their immortal souls remained in their wings, being passed to the next, new body, that’s left without the memory of Haven, but with the inherited abilities.

    The angels then specialized in different regions of service for the humans, building their hierarchy and The Council - the ruling force that follows through the education and raising of new angels, making sure they follow their duty and take care of punishments. The core of the Council are the seven Arc-angels, a few Clairvoyant and some lower-ranked Pure or Grays

    Angels have a relative freedom of movement and action, as long as they serve the greater good, never put their interests before the humans’ and never neglect their duties. Self-sacrifice is often the worst possible crime, because it leaves the angel unable to serve and is hence selfish. The punishment is an eternal immobility trapped in something like onyx until the Council decides the powers of the trapped angel is needed and release them.

    The demons populating the Surface are mostly mutated/ infected humans (vampires, werewolves). The real demons, the ones in Hell are usually quite docile and noble. They vary greatly in shape and have their own social structure that is simply different from the angels’. The relationship between them and the Council are complicated, because before the War the interactions were much more intense and the prejudices much less.

    The only ones who remember the War are a few angels of the Council, some high-class demons in Hell and some high-level angels. In order to keep the low-class angels submissive the Council created the image of demons as vicious monsters, while concealing the truth about the real demons being held in the same respect as angels and being secretly protected on the Surface by them.

    Nowadays the young angels are taught to blindly hate and kill any abnormal being they see, resulting in both blind submission to the Council and arrogant belief in their own powers. The arrogance that sprouts from that is based on the lack of knowledge of the real demons being at least just as powerful as the angels.

    The demons don’t follow a strict hierarchy, their abilities and shapes varying greatly. When an angel dies their immortal souls are passed on, but their memories are usually locked away from them, giving the children skill, but no experience greater than a lifetime. In comparison a demon has to spend their life in one form and when they know all about it, they are killed in a ritual to possibly raise from their corpses in another one, keeping their memories.

    The major difference between angels and demons is their perception of growth, development and death. Demons accept death as a necessary evil to evolution and to making their offspring stronger; angels deny and resent it, clinging to the idea of personal perfection.
    Humans are the in-between race that could easily be affected by demonic influence (like vampirism or hypnosis), but that is much less familiar to the both races and much more unpredictable. They are considered God’s favourites.

    The Goal

    What’s needed is for an item to be crafted to strengthen the barrier between Hell and Surface. For that the angels are assigned to collect as much understanding of the races as possible. By understanding single individuals and their drives in life they get droplets of their blood and tears.





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    I love the introduction

    Would it be possible to have a second generation dark angel who grew up not knowing who they were? What age do they gain their powers/ get contacted by the angels?

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    I am making an angel and a human. I would like to be a clairvoyant angel trainee. Would that be okay? So I'm a younger angel who has the powers of a clairvoyant angel but doesn't know quite how to control them and does not have an exact handle on the way the position is held. The clairvoyant angels seem like they are higher up on the food chain, and I want to be one, just not a full fledged angel of authority.


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    @Chemai, thanks for the love
    By second generation you mean the offspring of another Dark angel, or the offspring of a Fallen? Angels that are born such usually have their powers from the start off and are far less helpless than normal human children. Of course they also need education and that's strictly taken care off in the Council buildings, as well as home. I assume they would start attending lessons at about 3 years old and are asked to fully serve by about 10-15. Angels don't usually question the authority of the Council and are brought up to trust and follow their duties unconditionally. I'm saying all this, because if the parents are Dark angels themselves they would probably be experiencing a great level of shame for the sins of their ancestors and pass that on to the kid, making it even more goal-oriented. If they're Fallen they're pretty much reduced to harmless human-like creatures that are forced to live among humans. (Mind you, demons still love an angel snack so I assume not many live long after they fall).
    Also, it would be very possible for a Dark child with no parents to be given to a foster family of Pures as a chance to cleanse their wings. That way the child might not know or remember the reason for its fate.

    @Denkou, if you want a Clairvoyant you would surely be held in high respect, no matter the age or skill. There would be great expectations for you and, obviously, not as much personal freedom. Imagine the princess in the tower. At the same time, most of your wishes would be taken care of and you would have exclusive access to most of the books and information others might not be entrusted with.

    Also, to both of you and anyone else, don't forget the possibility of playing a Gray. They start off as humans who start developing strange powers overtime before wings sprout and blossom on their backs. That's a good position for a bit of suspense or inexperience.

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    So, very interested, and I have a hopefully interesting idea for a Dark Guardian and Demon pair (as in, a Guardian that was born connected to a Demon). Basically, her father was a Clairvoyant, one of the greatest of the past century, but was stripped of his wings when he sinned and betrayed the Council: After a very powerful vision, he became convinced that he had to kill several of his own kind, in order to prevent them from producing an alternate interpretation. He became a Fallen, and embraced Human life as much as he could, even having a daughter, the aforementioned Dark angel.

    Her father had secretly kept a record of the vision that lead to his Fall, and gave it to her when she came of age, revealing that she was to be a Guardian, not of any human, but of a newly reborn Demon, one that would be born into the form of a human, and would be sent by the denizens of Hell as an envoy and observer to Surface. She was fated to protect him as he attempted to understand the humans and the angels alike. In the present, he's still only a toddler, two years or so old. By that point, I'm thinking that other Clairvoyants had seen her Guardianship, but not that the child is a demon.

    Would that work, in the context of this world?
    I must not fear.
    Fear is the mind-killer.
    Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration.
    I will face my fear.
    I will permit it to pass over me and through me.
    And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path.
    Where the fear has gone there will be nothing...

    Only I will remain.

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    Okay. I will go with a clairvoyant than. I already have a pretty good idea for this.

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    I have another question, how are the angel types decided? WOuld both parent have to be that type of angel, or could the pure angels turn out to be anything?


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    @Imperfectionist Interesting, interesting indeed. Let me think.
    I do love the idea of an angel guarding a demon. I was thinking it would be a very nice twist and I'm happy someone's willing to make it happen.
    For a demon to occupy a human body is a bit problematic because it's unheard of for the races to be able to mix genes. After all, they are different species biologically. I would suggest the body being possessed rather than belonging to the demon itself. The demon having reached a moment in evolution where it could possess a body and not be noticed by angels. Or a plan of the certain demon clan or kingdom to send their future leader to the Surface by, for example, feeding on humans alone for generations so their flesh starts to look human itself.
    Think about that and if you don't like it we can simply call your case an exception and something unheard of and still make it happen.
    Also, keep in mind angels are quite appetizing to demons usually.

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    @Denkou They could be anything, no problem with that.

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    Ok so a few questions:

    1: Could you play as a Demon that was 'evolved" to the point of bodylessness? (I CAN'T SPELL T_T) (Bodilylessness: In the state of being without a body)

    2: And can you play a second Character who was a Grey?

    3: OR if those others don't work, what about an Angel/Sub-Type Angel be possessed by a Demon albeit somewhat unseccessfully where there are two minds living in the body with separate choices to be made and each being able to hold control of the body for a period of time to make the actions reality?

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    Well, I was thinking that the demon is locked into a kind of essence state, where its energy and memories exist separate from its body. The body itself is just a vessel, an empty shell that is inhabited by this essence, and has the appearance and general physical attributes of a human. As for why a demon would go through all of that trouble, building the homunculus, achieving a non-physical state, etc, that'll have to be a mystery for now...

    Edit: That's funny, it seems that I wasn't the only one to have the idea.
    I must not fear.
    Fear is the mind-killer.
    Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration.
    I will face my fear.
    I will permit it to pass over me and through me.
    And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path.
    Where the fear has gone there will be nothing...

    Only I will remain.

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    I just read the previous posts T_T Maybe I should do that more often, I concede defeat! He came up with the idea first! (Cheater T_T)

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