This a really good idea, I don't see why you're apologizing for it being so long. It was beautiful work, and it would be something I'd do. But. then I saw your age requirement. I'm a couple years of *cough*five years*cough* I'm mature though. But I do understand you're requirements, so I don't have to do it if you don't want to RP with a minor. ^^ Hehe. I just commented because I really like the idea. I give you praise!