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    CL-ENTRY, 928: S.S. SOMME OOC

    In the year 2677 mankind made history once more. The largest space station ever created, and the first one designed to be permanently inhabitable, was launched from Mars on the 200 year anniversary of the planet's first colonization, the S.S. SOMME. The massive space station came complete with 352 square kilometers of area for its inhabitants, ten foot thick walls with shield generators to keep oxygen contained in the event that there be a hull breach and weapon systems to defend from foreign invaders. Mankind had truly entered the space age. The UPDC, the United Planetary Defense Committee, was now controlled through the S.S. SOMME and the rest of the governments of the solar system stood in awe of the power now held by the Martian American Government. Over the next 20 years the following inhabitable space stations followed the model of the SOMME but all were insignificant in comparison to the constantly upgraded, constantly armed space station. In the year 2697 the SOMME had become a beacon of hope for mankind, and in 2698 it was chosen as the host for ESEC, the Extra-Solar Exploration Committee.

    After several years of preparation ESEC was granted the ability to begin exploring outside of our solar system, using the SOMME as a transport and refueling hub. However in the year 2713, after the S.S. THARSIS had been presumed lost for close to six years, it showed up in the docking bays of the SOMME. Three days after it docked all communication to the SOMME was cut off, all transportation out of the station was halted and all transportation in was barred by the shield generators that had been sent in to an overhaul mode. Now four weeks have passed with no connection to the station and the governments of both Earth and Mars have begun to grow anxious. Fire Team Thunder has been commissioned to investigate the ship, rescue survivors and neutralize threats. No communication to the outside will be available once inside, all is fair game, rules of engagement do not apply, and the Fire Team Thunder has no operational details. Operation STORMBREAKER is a go.


    Okay, well there is the intro, if you're here though you've probably already read it.


    I refrained from explaining quite a bit in the Int check so I'll go ahead and post this now. If you're confused on anything go ahead and ask me.


    The Team

    Fire Team Thunder is not the most famous team in the galaxy, nor are we renowned for being "The Best of the Best". We were simply what was available. I'm sick of seeing so many stories, movies, and rp's where you play the ultimate badasses of the galaxy, I think it leaves no room for things to go wrong. Don't misunderstand this though, all of the major Fire Teams of Solar Alliances are renowned for being twice as good as any normal Army, Marine, or Air force unit because the fire teams are created by taking the best people out of all of them and placing them in these elite units. Our rival fire team is Fire Team Wolf, who is considered to be the actual best out of all of the teams. We will probably cross paths with some of them in the roleplay later on down the line if this roleplay does survive. Now we aren't the best fire team in the galaxy, but we are one of the most diverse. We are the only fire team to have had pilots in our ranks and we are one of the few to have taken in war criminals. However if we have anything like that now it will be up to the players of the team to come up with their characters and make them such things.


    The Weaponry

    I have already explained this but I will post this again for reference. Our weapons are state of the art, like all fire teams. The weapons we use do not require ammunition clips because built in to the gun is an Ammo Block that could be constantly fired for up to 50 years without running out because the way we do it is as follows: Inside the block chamber is a small knife type tool, there may be several knives for faster firing guns, these tools chip off bits of metal and chamber them, where the ammunition is then super heated to the point that it could burn through your hand if you held it. As the bullet is fired it is ejected at twice the speed of modern bullets, as it flies it is cooled naturally by the air, or should be depending on how far the target is, and it takes its aerodynamic shape from being naturally cooled and super speeds wearing it down to how it should look. It's okay to fire them in close combat as well since you won't need it to be aerodynamic in order to reach its target.

    Now that we've covered that, I will say that we can't endlessly fire these guns. Since we have to superheat the rounds, our guns will overheat after firing a number of bullets. The bigger the caliber of the gun, the less you can fire before it overheats. When your gun overheats it tells you by making a ringing noise. Once it has rung you have to eject the cylinder from the coolant valve to release the heat, then keep the cylinder on your person and replace it with a fresh one. These cylinders can be recharged on a portable charger carried by an engineer or a team captain so don't dispose of them. Since the gun makes a hollow ringing noise when it is over-heated, many soldiers have taken to saying "I'm wrung out." When they can't fire anymore.


    The Armor

    Our team has the privilege of requesting their own, custom armor upon entering the team. The armor of Fire Team Thunder is always blue with a lightening streak down the right and left shoulders and a patch displaying their national flag on the right, with their home planet listed on the left. Modern armor has to be plated to withstand the stopping power of modern ammunition, any armor seen on a member of Fire Team Thunder would have standard issue light plating on at least the chest, forearms and shins however the soldier is allowed to request additional design, plating, and tech built in to their armor. The governments pay a lot of money to train us, they are willing to pay a lot of money to keep up our morale and keep us alive as well.


    The SOMME

    Time for the crowning jewel of this roleplay, the station we are on. This Station, as stated above, is the largest ever created. 352 square kilometers, nearly the size of modern Detroit, makes up the main part of the ship. The upper tier where the captain directs things from, is a large deck where the captain can look out over the ship and also has a large view of space outside of the ship. I will describe it better if we make it there in the roleplay which I hope we will because that is our starting goal. The S.S. SOMME is like Couruscant from Star Wars, it's basically one big city with just a few sections outside the city for storage or military bases. It's a HUGE ship. We know coming in that the ship is on lock down so most of the electricity is off too, not all of it, just most of it. And we know that there has been a hull breach because the shields are up, so when we get there we will override the shields just long enough to slip in and then re-activate them before exiting our shuttle. I don't want to explain more because I want the players to discover the ship as we go and if they know too much then it will be too easy.


    The Players

    Daniel "Boss" Krayt

    Played by: Dredigan
    Rank: Sergeant Major, Thunder Team Leader
    Status: Alive

    Anton Aquitaine

    Played by: Puzzle
    Rank: Specialist
    Status: Alive

    Jurgen "Cinder" Aleron

    Played by: Shimmerene
    Rank: Specialist
    Status: Alive


    The Character Sheet

    I request that you do not private message this to me because other players need to know what you look like, we have been working together for some time now.

    Name:
    Gender:
    Ethnicity:
    Homeworld: (Mars, Earth, Space Station name)
    Weaponry:

    Appearance:
    Service Record: (History)

    Years in the Fire Team: (How long have you been here?)
    Rank: (You can choose from these:
    Private (PVT)
    Private (PVT)
    Private First Class (PFC)
    Specialist (SPC)
    Corporal (CPL)
    Sergeant (SGT) I am going to be a Staff Sergeant. Please don't say "These aren't the ranks that would be in a fire team" because I know that, these are just the ones I wanted because they are simple, low ranks. )
    Last edited by Dredigan; 04-16-2013 at 11:54 AM.


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    Name: Jurgen(Cinder) Aleron
    Age: 36
    Gender: Male
    Ethnicity: Caucasian
    Homeworld: Space Orbital 33-Titan-Epsilon (A Space station on the fringes of explored space, essentially a backwater)
    Weaponry:

    Ignis - A heavy-flamethrower weapon that has seen heavy use during his days as part of Fire-Team Mobius. Features a pilot light in the shape of a snarling drake, and engravings along the length of the weapon depicting tribal designs with emphasis on flames and mythical beasts. Only non-cosmetic enhancement is an optical-fiber that hooks into his suit to allow him sight down the barrel of the weapon via his helm's opticals.

    Archos - A rather standard issue suppressive weapon, capable of high rate of fire with little to no recoil. Fires smaller rounds than typical weapons, often called a needler, and due to the nature of the high ROF and smaller rounds, is not as accurate. It is, however, more than capable of making up for inaccuracy by filling a corridor full of bullets. Due to ROF the coolant chamber actually consists of a triple-cylinder design, making it bulkier than similar weapons, but able to sustain fire for an extended duration. Is of standard patter, with no modifications.

    Appearance:


    Jurgen is of a rather average size, standing about 5'9" and of a sturdy frame. He wears his hair short, the dark brown hair shorn close to his skull, and his only natural eye of a deep green color. His left side of his face is dominated by a large scar running from his forehead to his chin, running deep and through the eye. He was given the choice of an augmetic eye, but declined and instead placed a single steel ball-bearing in the socket, feeling that he could see just as well without a machine in his skull. His skin is slightly tanned, this is mostly due to his support-role in the past as a flame-trooper, with the tips of his fingers missing the fingernails due to being cooked off.

    For the Fire-Team mission he has requested his old set of armor to be used, the colors of his previous Fire-team(A black backing with a single red bar down the middle of the field) moved to his carapace. His armor is that of a heavy-support trooper, multiple segmented plates overlapping each-other to provide maximum protection at the cost of mobility. The armor also contains a support-rig built into the back of the carapace and arms, allowing him to carry heavier weapons as well as the support systems for them. He wears a full-enclosed helmet, the visor in the shape of a leering skull, with advanced optics allowing him to see through both eye slits with his single eye.

    Years in the Fire Team: He has recently been selected for Fire-Team Thunder as a replacement for the previous heavy-support, but served with his previous fire-team, Fire-Team Mobius, for 15 years before the entire team, except for him, was destroyed in their final mission.
    Rank: Specialist

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    Okay that's all good except two things that aren't your fault. 1, I forgot to put Weaponry in the bio, so please go back and list all weaponry. 2, in the bio you said you requested that your previous fire-team badge be on your left shoulder but the description I gave of our armor makes it mandatory that the armor be dark blue with a lightening streak going down both shoulders and your home planet/station listed on the left. If you want however you can place Mobius's sigil on your forearm or something. Once all that is cleared up you are accepted.


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    Alright, added in the weapons for him, and moved Mobius colors to be represented on his carapace.
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    Here is my bio if anybody needs a reference besides Shim.

    Name: Daniel "Boss" Krayt
    Gender: Male
    Ethnicity: Caucasian
    Homeworld: Mars
    Weaponry: Krayt carries an HF-42 assault rifle, a standard issue rifle for members of fire teams such as Thunder. It is capable of switching between Single shot, Burst fire, and fully automatic and fires medium sized rounds. It can fire up to 50 rounds before the coolant valve must be ejected. He is famous for his side-arm being the rare and expensive Cochner handcannon which fires very large rounds, only being able to fire up to twelve rounds before the coolant valve must be ejected. He carries two frag grenades into missions as well as a combat knife built in to his wrist-plating that can be activated via a certain motion of the wrist.

    Appearance: Krayt is 6'2 and 53 years old. His age hasn't affected his ability though as he is in great shape, better than most of the recruits to have joined Fire Team thunder under him. His hair is grey and balding on the top so he shaves it off entirely, his beard is clean cut as well as he finds them itchy and distracting. He has no visible scars on his face, however he has a bullet scar on his right shoulder and has been stabbed in the chest before, both scars are very visible without his armor. He has deep blue eyes that women were crazy for in his youth, however now his features have aged and he looks a lot older, partially due to the stress of killing and losing friends.

    His armor is a deep blue much like his eyes, it is heavily scarred and the lightening bolts of his unit are fading away on his shoulders. The word MARS under his unit patch on his left shoulder is also chipping away and fading. He has the general plating that comes with his armor along with extra wrist plating, shoulder plating, and thigh plating. He has his plates arranged to allow a good 50/50 distribution between mobility and protection. He wears no helmet as it prevents him from seeing the entirety of his surroundings, for this reason the portable earpiece he wears is visible on his left ear. His armor has a built in container for his gear such as coolant cylinders, food, etc to ensure that he does not have to carry bags with him.

    Service Record: Daniel Krayt was recruited during the Twenty Third Martian Draft when he was 19, he has been in the military ever since, going on countless missions and earning a kill count of over 200 during his time with the Martian American Military, most of which were earned during a series of wars with a neighboring Martian Country and their Polish and French allies on Earth. The remainder were earned during border disputes, pirating conflicts, riots, and various other small conflicts over the years. He was selected for Fire Team Thunder when he was 23 for his achievements during the war specified previously. He was given a position halfway through the conflict and spent the next five years under two captains, both of which were killed in the fighting, leaving him to take up the mantle of leader for the last two years of the twelve year conflict.

    He is infamous for having a "Black and White" record, this meaning that he has always seen military action as black and white, win or lose. He has a reputation for being a very cold, calculating commander who is willing to do anything to get the job done, including send his men to their deaths though he is known for having at least a bit of a heart in the respect that he does everything in his power to get out of conflict with as few casualties as possible. He is also known for hand-picking the members of his team, so anybody who is chosen for Fire Team Thunder has already earned the favor of this old, grizzled veteran and should do everything in their power to avoid disappointing him. He is not averse to giving our a Field Court Martial here an there.

    Years in the Fire Team: He has led Fire Team Thunder for twenty five years, he has been a part of Fire Team Thunder for thirty.
    Rank: Staff Sergeant, Team Leader


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    Okay so I guess you're all done with this then?


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    I'm writing up my Character's bio at the moment!
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    Sorry! I've been incredibly busy over the past few days, I'll get writing as soon as I have a spare moment!

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    K take your time I just wanted to see people say hi or something so I knew interest still existed.


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    Sorry, I've been stuck on a character. I have the general idea, but details are eluding me.

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