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Elemental Fragments OOC
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Hey, just wanted to give a quick apology, I didn't have as much to work with as I thought and could only get into her agony so much before it got repetitive and made the reader want to go 'We get it!'.
I capitalized on her situation and made the weakness she had greater, giving her a hard breakdown instead of the soft kiddie one in the actual show. Expect a lot darker thoughts and feelings to emerge as time goes on in response to her situation, as it is ever changing. Loss of life will be considered on her part eventually.
Hope it was enough to excite you, at least slightly ^^' we're finally getting started!
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Drifting a w a y
Oh hello OOC. XD Maybe I should make one for our other?
Once I finish the other Naruto post, I'll get Bolin up....eheh. I was looking at your post and what I had so far before I went to bed last night, thankfully Sasuke didn't haunt my dreams ahah.
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If you don't want me to keep spamming your pm's, an OOC may help you out :P
Ah, Sasuke ...he has his way >:3 so you don't really like him I take it?
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Drifting a w a y
OOC is definitely preferred haha.
I was never a big fan or Sasuke....saw him/his back story as something 'meh'. I know most people love him, I just don't get it other than he's a bad boy.
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Then link it when it's made and we can bring discussion there~
I can respect that. I myself don't really like Sakura past her battle with Sasori when Kishimoto gave up on her character. S'all good. Was the Korra adequate for you?
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Drifting a w a y
OOC is made, should be above or below us now.
Your Korra post was fine. Did you want Bolin to be there someone else? I'd think it would be too soon for him to approach her but he will if you intended him to...
Otherwise I could put us back in RC with Bolin then approaching Korra or something.
Some people in the LOK fandom said Korra was by the cliff because she may have been contemplating suicide, you know, die and a new better avatar would have been born, etc.
So I have no issues with dark or depressing, granted it doesn't consume them entirely.
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All righty.
I thought perhaps he'd try now, and then again later at RC. Perhaps you could have it be him who's approaching, but he reconsiders and opts to try later after she's gotten everything out? It'd mean a short post but you could also timeskip us to RC after that.
Oh, then I'm spot on, because that is exactly what'll be on her mind later. Let's hope good old Bolin can change such thoughts!
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Drifting a w a y
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If you don't favor the option you don't have to go with it, just so you know. Just let me know if something doesn't sit well :3
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Drifting a w a y
No no, that's fine, I did suggest part of it and you the other so it works out.
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