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    Helps needed please!

    This is my idea, a story about people who are like 1 inch tall and live in a garden, it's my basic idea and is a draft, I'd like people to help a bit, as I can't seem to find a good name for the race that the main characters will be. I'd like it to be a casual type of RP.,It's sort of a prehistoric fantasy RP I guess, and is my first ever start at making a topic, please be merciful ...



    Gordonia:
    A land of mystical creatures and man, of giant plants and even larger, alien structures. With giants so large they touch the sky. But the humans in this world are not the main subject of this story, they are forces of nature, to them the world is just a home and a yard, about an acre and a half of poorly kept garden. However, to the smaller inhabitants, this world is the world. Continuing on infinitely in all directions. A mystical land of monsters and giants. This is the story of the _______, and how they survived in this harsh land.

    _______: a race of mini-humans that inhabit one particular property in a jungle, they are no different from humans except in their size. _____ are only about one inch tall, but are physically identical to humans of today. They do not have any firearms or projectile weaponry (not including thrown spears), they do not use clubs or swords, only spears. _____ have semi-nomadic culture, they do not form cities or villages, but instead form small groups that stay in a certain area. They wear clothes depending upon the area on which they inhabit. For example, a group that lives in a flower patch will wear petals for clothing, while a group that lives in a grassy area will use grass. They have no laws, except one, which is to never kill another _____, if one is caught with murder, the other people will banish this individual from Gordonia. They believe in spirits and gods, and that those spirits control the world. They do not make sacrifices or pray. This belief system is more like superstition than a religion. ______ use spears to hunt and kill monsters and small animals. They also pluck seeds and small berries as they travel though their land.

    The layout of Gordonia:
    The land increases in altitude as one goes north, and decreases as one goes south. To the west, there is a large valley that goes down all the way to the bottom of the map. The driveway winds its way up the middle, ending in a parking lot in the north east. Up near the north there is a home, which to the ____ is called the forbidden zone. No _____ has ever ventured here, and no ____ ever will. In the middle, surrounded by forest and driveway, there is wide valley like grassland plains, which is commonly referred to as "the bowl" due to its shape. In the north east of the goal there is a large forest of ginger, and to the west there is another forest of a different, and larger type of ginger. Along the eastern side of the bowl the landscape drops, going downhill there is a mixed forest dominated mostly by Taro. To the north of the bowl there is a terraced garden and then the house. To the south is a driveway, and after that there is a forest if really tall ginger that reach all the way to the sky. To the west of the terraced garden, north of the bowl, and south of the house is the "lake district". This is made up of a steep planted forest with two large lakes which are filled with large fish and lily pads. Under the house there is a large expanse of desert which never sees the light of day, this area is unexplored, as it is forbidden to enter. North to the house, in between it and a small cottage is a huge cliff, and to the north of it is a large fenced area with giant feathered monsters. The area to the north of the monsters lair is relatively unexplored, but it is known it is very steep, and at the top there is a tree that dwarfs all trees. This tree is called the mother tree, which watches over the world. It is speculated that this tree is where the spirits live and dictate the world and the lives of the _____.

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    Sounds like the borrowers crossed with honey I shrunk the kids and thumbalina.
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    Eh, it's just what crossed into my mind over a few years.

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