Same here. It makes me cringe. Worst part is I feel like I still make those mistakes occasionally.
Btw, do you want Zaapiel to come down at the same time in the previous RPs, or later?
"People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct and true. That's how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts... their reality may all be a mirage. Can we consider them to simply be living in their own world, shaped by their beliefs?"
"Power. Give me more, power. If i become an outcast, abomination, a demon, so be it. I will endure the exile. Anything, to protect her!"
Whatever you feel is right for the character. I can't promise Helena will be exactly what or who she would have been when I originally started the thread. As authors we change and so do our characters. So I completely understand if you want to change your character as well. It'll just make it more interesting. And I agree with you on that part about still making those mistakes. I've been working on trying to be a better writer.
Zaapiel will stay his laid-back, lax, and comical self, but I do think I rushed Zaapiel's "Fall" a bit. I'll try to develop it a bit more. I haven't had much time to work on being a better writer, but I'd like to. So if you notice anything wrong with my writing let me know.Originally Posted by Blue Moon Queen
"People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct and true. That's how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts... their reality may all be a mirage. Can we consider them to simply be living in their own world, shaped by their beliefs?"
"Power. Give me more, power. If i become an outcast, abomination, a demon, so be it. I will endure the exile. Anything, to protect her!"
Sounds good. Hopefully you'll do the same for mine. And I'll work on longer posts.
Also, funnily enough, I was reading through the past versions and going "Hey, is this where the angels tricks another angel into cutting his wings off? Naw, that was an awesome book I read..." Then it was like. Not a book. An awesome Roleplay! xD I hope I don't have a Guardian Angel. No one should have to hear my thought process.
That is pretty awesome! I'll talk to you tomorrow Blue, it's getting pretty late over here. Night!
"People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct and true. That's how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts... their reality may all be a mirage. Can we consider them to simply be living in their own world, shaped by their beliefs?"
"Power. Give me more, power. If i become an outcast, abomination, a demon, so be it. I will endure the exile. Anything, to protect her!"
Lol. Same here. I'll post tomorrow. Goodnight.
Here!
Ditto!
"People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct and true. That's how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts... their reality may all be a mirage. Can we consider them to simply be living in their own world, shaped by their beliefs?"
"Power. Give me more, power. If i become an outcast, abomination, a demon, so be it. I will endure the exile. Anything, to protect her!"
That post took a while xD
Btw, how do you expect Helena to find out how these disappearances are happening? Are supernatural hunters responsible for it?
"People live their lives bound by what they accept as correct and true. That's how they define reality. But what does it mean to be correct or true? Merely vague concepts... their reality may all be a mirage. Can we consider them to simply be living in their own world, shaped by their beliefs?"
"Power. Give me more, power. If i become an outcast, abomination, a demon, so be it. I will endure the exile. Anything, to protect her!"
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