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    Senior Member Firesoul01's Avatar
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    (One-on-One) Fantasy Adventure with some romance, anyone?

    Anyone interested? I have a few good ideas! ^^ Here's one of my favorite idea's I've had.

    Once in a small village near the ocean side, a young woman visited a church everyday. It was an old wooden church that had been abandoned for years. The white paint on the outer walls was rapidly peeling and flaking off. The grand wooden doors were beaten and falling off its hinges.
    
    The young woman did not care though. Everyday she would pray to the gods and goddesses above. This woman was unable to bear children, but she desperately wanted a child of her own.
    
    One day after praying once again, she heard the crying of a child. Running outside, she stopped as she saw a goddess before her. This goddess held a bundle of blankets which is where the crying was coming from. The goddess walked forward, stopping before the woman.
    
    "My dear, your wishes will finally be answered today," the goddess spoke, "This child shall be yours and you shall raise him."
    
    The goddess delicately set the baby into the woman's trembling arms. After years of praying, the woman's prayers had finally been answered. She was overjoyed to the point that she started to cry from her overwhelming happiness.
    
    "This child shall be named __________. Do not be scared of his wings. He is an angel who will one day be a savior of this world. Keep him safe from harm, my dear," the goddess finished. She then walked away. With every step the goddess took, she became more and more translucent until finally she disappeared.
    
    The woman looked down at the child to notice the black wings. It was a contrast to the pure white blanket. The young woman smiled, "You surely will be a strange angel, darling."
    
    ----- Years Later
    
    "Mother," a young girl spoke, "please prepare a room"
    
    An older looking woman turned to the girl, who was standing out on the balcony, "Why would I do such a thing, ___?"
    
    "A guest approaches, Mother. I wish for him to feel welcomed. After all, he did just lose his only parent," ____ stated, looking back at her mother. Tears filled her eyes as she once again spoke, "His mother was killed before his very eyes. She saved him with her life. Our guest will arrive here although he himself does not know that. Please hurry, he will be upon us soon."
    
    "Who is this guest, ____?"
    
    "Our savior..."
    
    The young girl's mother nodded before exiting the room. The girl smiled sadly as the tears slid down her face, "Come soon... Black-Winged Angel..."

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    Senior Member Nemaisare's Avatar
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    This seems interesting, are there any specifics from a partner you're looking for?
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