A young teen girl, joined ballet at the age of ten. She is a trouble maker for most of her instructors but manages to stay at the top of her class and even gets picked for the lead roles in plays and such. Now at the age of twenty-one, she has won the role of Odette in The Swan Princess. The most coveted roles in history of Ballet, her friend decides since the two are old enough , why not take her out for her first drink. As you can imagine the girls go out for the drink, the two argue over something silly, the friend is left behind to fend for herself. After going home , she goes to sleep. The next morning she finds that her roommate/best friend is not home. She calls her cell and no one answers. Seeing it as a sign that she is being ignored she ignores her feelings of quilt and goes about her day. Finally she gets a call, from her friends cellphone, its not her friend its her friends boyfriend, he tells her what has happened, her best friend is dead, she was killed in a car accident, a driver had ran her down on the street that night, in her desperate state the girl ends up loosing her spot as Odette and spends days on end at home pacing and or crying, until a dark form shows itself and tells her he can fix her mistake, all it wants is her soul. She scoffs at the idea until the form tells her of how much her friend misses her, this cracks her resistance and she does what she was told, waking up the next morning to find her bestfriend alive and well in her bedroom, her friend remembers nothing of the night and insists the two just went home. She can't believe it was all a dream and sets on with her plans, until the dark figure shows up again.
So what do you think? If you have anything to add please do, or if you have anything you want to change or edit about it tell me. The figure as you have figured out is a Vampire, who eats human souls. [I know it sounds like a succubus but its not, it doesn't require suduction so I don't classify it as one.]